^ You have to consider what the author might mean. After Doran's Blade he gets Boots but the Health Potion x2 could be if you have extra gold and whatnot. It is always useful to have potions early on. Downvoting for that possible misconception is not the right thing to do.

doran's blade then boots and pots dosen't rly makes sence

Bruiser build will seriously lack damage before the IE I think. Too much defense :D

Edit,

Randuin's Omen> Thornmail

Glass Noct? Not sexy at all...

Too fragile for melee combat nowadays.

To start off: TURN ON COMMENT TO VOTE. Trust me. Ok onto the build and guide.

- Builds are nice, definitely fit the descriptions you are offering. However for the bruiser build maybe stick Atma's Impaler in between Frozen Mallet and Warmog's Armor so that you can take advantage of some of the health and attack damage.

- Move you skill sequence to right before you item section.

- Break apart the WALLS OF TEXT in the items section. Look at my guides or other top guides for a better layout look.

- For coding read Jhoijhoi's Guide to Making a Guide (rated 94%) if you have not already.

-Example of the ability sequence coding. {abilities= qeqwqrqeqerweweqww champion= Nocturne}. Replace {} with [] to get:
Otherwise well done for a start. Also try to add more sections (Counterjungling, How to counter getting counterjungled, etc. Anyway +1