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My own stats in gold IV:
I would say that getting
You might want to add notes on items and explain why should you start with
How is
Your info about
You don't say anything about how to play against e.g.
Something is wrong when
Your late game section doesn't give anything to the reader it just, exists you want to give out tips on how to use ultimate or why it isn't a good idea to dash in the middle of their team or something like that. As a side note
And seriously correct some of your grammar if you can't do it then ask a friend etc. it doesn't look nice.
Now for the things I liked in the guide
The pictures, coding and especially the map which shows the escape points.
"With him on your side u can harras your opponents to death. He have your wife, but doesn´t matter! With him you **** your enemys, you will never need a wife." <-- that made me laugh :D
Let me know id you decide to make some of none of these changes, send me a PM to let me know.
I know you said your English wasn't the best. Here's some of the mistakes you made with my suggestions for fixing them. My explanations and comments are (in parentheses).
Your three most common mistakes are:
Saying "Make damage." It should be "Deal damage"
Spelling Passive without the "e."
Spelling Really without the second "l."
Under Pros/cons:
Really good passiv
=> Really good Passive
Minions can hit by your The Culling
=> Minions can be hit by The Culling
Under Ability Sequence:
I make my Q on a minion to hit Ashe easily.
=> I use my Q on a minion to hit Ashe easily.
With her long range it´s realy hard too land your Lightslinger without getting dmg from her.
=> With her long range it´s really hard too land your Lightslinger without taking damage from her.
If you hit to many minions u push ur lane needless.
=> If you hit too many minions you push your lane needless.
After I maxed Lightslinger, I level Ardent Blaze. For a better movement speed bonus.
=> After I have maxed Lightslinger, I level Ardent Blaze (remove the period) for a better movement speed bonus.
Its realy important that you hit your Ardent Blaze, if hit your W you can follow him easily with the movement speed bonus. So use your Relentless Pursuit to hit your Ardent Blaze safely.
=> It's realy important that you hit your Ardent Blaze so that you can follow your opponent easily with the movement speed bonus. Therefore, you should use your Relentless Pursuit to hit your Ardent Blaze safely.
Now I use my Relentless Pursuit to get to a good position to land my skillshots. I use my Relentless Pursuit always to hit my Ardent Blaze safely.
=> (Delete "Now") I use my Relentless Pursuit to get to a good position to land my skillshots. (The second sentence is redundant)
At least I maxing Relentless Pursuit.
=> Lastly, I max Relentless Pursuit
I love that skill, because it´s an "all-rounder" skill. I can use it to get a great positioning in fights. You can use it to escape, because it remove all slows on you. Nasus will hate u.^^ And you can use it to activate Lucian´s passiv Lightslinger to make extra dmg. It´s also a nice dodge skill.
=>I love this skill(delete the comma) because it´s an "all-rounder" skill. I can use it to get a great positioning in fights. I(Be consistent, either use "I" every time or "you" Every time. Do not switch in the same paragraph) can use it to escape (Delete the comma) because it remove all slows (Delete "on you" it is unecessary and sounds awkward). Nasus will hate u.^^ You can also use it to activate Lucian´s passive, Lightslinger, to make extra dmg. It´s also a nice dodge skill.
On this map are the places marked were you can jump with Relentless Pursuit over walls.
=> On this map I have marked the places where you can jump over walls with Relentless Pursuit.
Activate The Culling if u want to escape and make damage at the same time and if u want to kill a enemy champion when he is out of range.
=> Activate The Culling if you want to escape and deal damage at the same time or if you want to kill a enemy champion when he is out of range.
The Culling is realy nice if the enemy champion is slowed or stunned, so you can make as much dmg as possible to one target.
=> The Culling is realy nice if the enemy champion is slowed or stunned, so you can deal as much damage as possible to one target.
The long range makes it a realy nice finisher. If enemy low-life champions flash away you can still get them with The Culling.
The Culling can be also used to clear a wave from minions. Every projectile does 400% more dmg to monsters and minions.
=> The Culling can be also used to clear wave minions since it deals 300% damage to minions. (This part I also corrected where you quoted the ultimate incorrectly. It deals triple damage to minions which means 200% additional damage or 300% total damage, not 400% additional damage)
Under the Items Section
In this part i will show you wich items I buy with Lucian.
=> (you don't need this sentence. THe section is titled Items so people know what you are talking about)
The first item you should buy is Doran's Blade. For Lane sustain and dmg. But you can also buy Long Sword and 2x Health Potion.
=> The first item you should buy is Doran's Blade (delete the period) for lane sustain and damage. However, you can also buy a Long Sword and 3x (Long sword costs 360 in season 4) Health Potion.
If u only got 1125 gold buy a Vampiric Scepter and Boots of Speed.
=> If you only have 1125 gold, buy a Vampiric Scepter and Boots of Speed instead.
( I would also note that you suggest buying different items in this section then you do in your opening section, you should be consistent).
Under the Supports section
With her passiv Sunlight you
be able to do tons of damage.
=> With her passive Sunlight you will
be able to deal tons of damage.
Lucian´s trades be better
with Taric´s stun and his Shatter give you a nice armor bonus.
=> Lucian´s trades be better
with Taric´s stun and his Shatter gives you a nice armor bonus.
Under the laning phase section
I think Lucian is not the best Early-Game champion. Play passiv, farm and harras the enemy AD-Carry. If you got an support like Leona, Thresh, Blitzcrank and Taric, harras as much as possible. If your support engage and you have a nice positioning focus the enemy Ad-Carry and kill them. Lucian makes tons of dmg if you play him right.
=> I do not think Lucian is the best Early-Game champion. Play passively, farm and harras the enemy AD-Carry. If you have a support like Leona, Thresh, Blitzcrank or Taric, harras as much as possible. If your support engages and you have good positioning, focus the enemy Ad-Carry and kill them. Lucian deals tons of damage if you play him right.
If a new wave minions come, place ur Piercing Light. If you place it right u can hit all minions. That´s realy nice to pushing lanes.
=>
(You don't need the first sentence there) If placed correctly you can hit all of the minions in a wave, which is very good for pushing lanes.
Under the mid-game section
It work realy good if you have Leona, Thresh and Taric as support.
=> It works really well if you have Leona, Thresh or Taric as support.
Your support stun the Mid-Laner and you can join the fight with Relentless Pursuit, Lightslinger, then Ardent Blaze to follow him easily, Piercing Light and use your The Culling to get him when he flashed away. Or Relentless Pursuit after him, if its not on CD.
=> Have your support stun the Mid-Laner and you can join the fight with Relentless Pursuit, Lightslinger, then Ardent Blaze to follow him easily, Piercing Light and use your The Culling to get him after he flashes away (delete the period) or Relentless Pursuit after him (delete the comma) if it's not on CD.
If neither your mid laner nor your support has CC, don not gank. It´s not worth it.(delete "only") Farm in bot lane and be ready to do dragon , golems and helping your jungler.
Under the late-game section
Lucian is not the best AD-Carry in Late-Game, because he has a a short range and could be focues easily of the enemys. Stay safe and make as much damage as possible.
=> Lucian is not the best AD-Carry in Late-Game (delete the comma) because he has a a short range and can therefore be focused easily. Stay safe and deal as much damage as possible.
How u handle with your passiv shows how good you play Lucian. His Lightslinger can make tons of extra dmg if you use it right. So dont waste your skills. Make a normal hit between every skill to make as much dmg as possible. Thats realy important in lane and can decide between win and lose.
=>How you handle your passiv shows how well you play Lucian. His Lightslinger can deal tons of extra damage if you use it right. So dont waste your skills. Land a basic attack between every skill to deal as much damage as possible. This is very important in lane and can make the difference between winning and losing your lane.
Thanks for reading. I hope this helps make your guide much better since grammar/spelling is really the only thing holding it back at the moment.
wow! Thank you for your help !!! I changed all mistakes :) Thank you !
Your three most common mistakes are:
Saying "Make damage." It should be "Deal damage"
Spelling Passive without the "e."
Spelling Really without the second "l."
Under Pros/cons:
Really good passiv
=> Really good Passive
Minions can hit by your The Culling
=> Minions can be hit by The Culling
Under Ability Sequence:
I make my Q on a minion to hit Ashe easily.
=> I use my Q on a minion to hit Ashe easily.
With her long range it´s realy hard too land your Lightslinger without getting dmg from her.
=> With her long range it´s really hard too land your Lightslinger without taking damage from her.
If you hit to many minions u push ur lane needless.
=> If you hit too many minions you push your lane needless.
After I maxed Lightslinger, I level Ardent Blaze. For a better movement speed bonus.
=> After I have maxed Lightslinger, I level Ardent Blaze (remove the period) for a better movement speed bonus.
Its realy important that you hit your Ardent Blaze, if hit your W you can follow him easily with the movement speed bonus. So use your Relentless Pursuit to hit your Ardent Blaze safely.
=> It's realy important that you hit your Ardent Blaze so that you can follow your opponent easily with the movement speed bonus. Therefore, you should use your Relentless Pursuit to hit your Ardent Blaze safely.
Now I use my Relentless Pursuit to get to a good position to land my skillshots. I use my Relentless Pursuit always to hit my Ardent Blaze safely.
=> (Delete "Now") I use my Relentless Pursuit to get to a good position to land my skillshots. (The second sentence is redundant)
At least I maxing Relentless Pursuit.
=> Lastly, I max Relentless Pursuit
I love that skill, because it´s an "all-rounder" skill. I can use it to get a great positioning in fights. You can use it to escape, because it remove all slows on you. Nasus will hate u.^^ And you can use it to activate Lucian´s passiv Lightslinger to make extra dmg. It´s also a nice dodge skill.
=>I love this skill(delete the comma) because it´s an "all-rounder" skill. I can use it to get a great positioning in fights. I(Be consistent, either use "I" every time or "you" Every time. Do not switch in the same paragraph) can use it to escape (Delete the comma) because it remove all slows (Delete "on you" it is unecessary and sounds awkward). Nasus will hate u.^^ You can also use it to activate Lucian´s passive, Lightslinger, to make extra dmg. It´s also a nice dodge skill.
On this map are the places marked were you can jump with Relentless Pursuit over walls.
=> On this map I have marked the places where you can jump over walls with Relentless Pursuit.
Activate The Culling if u want to escape and make damage at the same time and if u want to kill a enemy champion when he is out of range.
=> Activate The Culling if you want to escape and deal damage at the same time or if you want to kill a enemy champion when he is out of range.
The Culling is realy nice if the enemy champion is slowed or stunned, so you can make as much dmg as possible to one target.
=> The Culling is realy nice if the enemy champion is slowed or stunned, so you can deal as much damage as possible to one target.
The long range makes it a realy nice finisher. If enemy low-life champions flash away you can still get them with The Culling.
The Culling can be also used to clear a wave from minions. Every projectile does 400% more dmg to monsters and minions.
=> The Culling can be also used to clear wave minions since it deals 300% damage to minions. (This part I also corrected where you quoted the ultimate incorrectly. It deals triple damage to minions which means 200% additional damage or 300% total damage, not 400% additional damage)
Under the Items Section
In this part i will show you wich items I buy with Lucian.
=> (you don't need this sentence. THe section is titled Items so people know what you are talking about)
The first item you should buy is Doran's Blade. For Lane sustain and dmg. But you can also buy Long Sword and 2x Health Potion.
=> The first item you should buy is Doran's Blade (delete the period) for lane sustain and damage. However, you can also buy a Long Sword and 3x (Long sword costs 360 in season 4) Health Potion.
If u only got 1125 gold buy a Vampiric Scepter and Boots of Speed.
=> If you only have 1125 gold, buy a Vampiric Scepter and Boots of Speed instead.
( I would also note that you suggest buying different items in this section then you do in your opening section, you should be consistent).
Under the Supports section
With her passiv Sunlight you
be able to do tons of damage.
=> With her passive Sunlight you will
be able to deal tons of damage.
Lucian´s trades be better
with Taric´s stun and his Shatter give you a nice armor bonus.
=> Lucian´s trades be better
with Taric´s stun and his Shatter gives you a nice armor bonus.
Under the laning phase section
I think Lucian is not the best Early-Game champion. Play passiv, farm and harras the enemy AD-Carry. If you got an support like Leona, Thresh, Blitzcrank and Taric, harras as much as possible. If your support engage and you have a nice positioning focus the enemy Ad-Carry and kill them. Lucian makes tons of dmg if you play him right.
=> I do not think Lucian is the best Early-Game champion. Play passively, farm and harras the enemy AD-Carry. If you have a support like Leona, Thresh, Blitzcrank or Taric, harras as much as possible. If your support engages and you have good positioning, focus the enemy Ad-Carry and kill them. Lucian deals tons of damage if you play him right.
If a new wave minions come, place ur Piercing Light. If you place it right u can hit all minions. That´s realy nice to pushing lanes.
=>
(You don't need the first sentence there) If placed correctly you can hit all of the minions in a wave, which is very good for pushing lanes.
Under the mid-game section
It work realy good if you have Leona, Thresh and Taric as support.
=> It works really well if you have Leona, Thresh or Taric as support.
Your support stun the Mid-Laner and you can join the fight with Relentless Pursuit, Lightslinger, then Ardent Blaze to follow him easily, Piercing Light and use your The Culling to get him when he flashed away. Or Relentless Pursuit after him, if its not on CD.
=> Have your support stun the Mid-Laner and you can join the fight with Relentless Pursuit, Lightslinger, then Ardent Blaze to follow him easily, Piercing Light and use your The Culling to get him after he flashes away (delete the period) or Relentless Pursuit after him (delete the comma) if it's not on CD.
If neither your mid laner nor your support has CC, don not gank. It´s not worth it.(delete "only") Farm in bot lane and be ready to do dragon , golems and helping your jungler.
Under the late-game section
Lucian is not the best AD-Carry in Late-Game, because he has a a short range and could be focues easily of the enemys. Stay safe and make as much damage as possible.
=> Lucian is not the best AD-Carry in Late-Game (delete the comma) because he has a a short range and can therefore be focused easily. Stay safe and deal as much damage as possible.
How u handle with your passiv shows how good you play Lucian. His Lightslinger can make tons of extra dmg if you use it right. So dont waste your skills. Make a normal hit between every skill to make as much dmg as possible. Thats realy important in lane and can decide between win and lose.
=>How you handle your passiv shows how well you play Lucian. His Lightslinger can deal tons of extra damage if you use it right. So dont waste your skills. Land a basic attack between every skill to deal as much damage as possible. This is very important in lane and can make the difference between winning and losing your lane.
Thanks for reading. I hope this helps make your guide much better since grammar/spelling is really the only thing holding it back at the moment.
just easy