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Adonikam's Cruel Review Thread

Creator: Adonikam October 26, 2011 2:48pm

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Every little bit of review goes a long way.

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I met all your requirements. I think, but hey any advice will help.
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Thanks for the Review I PM'd you on a couple things but I have something for the public:

On Katarina I feel that Ghost is better than flash: I preach abou treducing reduncy in my Kat guide and Flash is Redundant: she has Shunpo which is better in almost every way, only failing in the fact that you need a target for Shunpo. Ghost grants better chasing and escaping potential. Also I take Preparation at 8 instead of Shunpo to add to the benifits it gives to Shunpo: I've found that the level 7-12 area is when a lot of threats start to emerge as team fighting starts in that area frequently.

Also when I write my guides I base them of of my experience not what is "accepted" as "good" or "better"
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Ahh! Thanks for the recommendation! <3

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Hello! Can you please tell me what you think of my Miss Fortune Guide? It hasn't received much attention comment wise lately and I'd like to know if there's anything I could improve.
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"Games may not be art, but this one did wonderful things to my ****." - Roger Ebert

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Adonikam, my Mundo hero! I have a Jungle Skarner guide for you sir. I planned on reformatting it soon for better pictures and a new section for counter jungling.

As for the video you require for jungling guides, may you point me to a software I can use?

Thanks very much.

Also, make a new Mundo guide. He's UP and needs another upgrade! You can do that right? =P
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What the heck, any critiscism is good, and its great to have different points of view to base upon so:

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Could you please review my riven guide? I'd like some criticism! HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT! COME AT ME BRO!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-the-new-queen-of-solo-top-142143


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JHOIJHOI IS THE BESTEST PERSON IN THE WHOLE WORLD AND THIS SIG IS AMAZING TY <3
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Adonikam wrote:
If you're interested in getting my opinion on your guide, build or sex life then you've come to the right place.

Can you review my sex life? <3

Kiddin'.

Love the idea of this thread, simple, short and sweet/cruel? I'm glad you're taking the time to give some of your advice to new authors :)
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