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Creator: Ravenholm April 5, 2014 8:20pm
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Ravenholm
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Welcome to my feedback forum. If you are looking for feedback on your guide post a comment below and I will make an honest effort to get around to reviewing your guide in a timely manner.






My reviews consist of:

1. Overall presentation
2. Proper presentation of ideas
3. Aesthetics
4. Effort
What my reviews DO NOT consist of:

1. Item/mastery/rune min/maxing
2. Gameplay
3. Off topic/extra information
4. Viability (not going to knock you for jungle corki)


What you can expect from me:

1. Correcting misinformation
2. Feedback on everything I disagree with/do not like
3. Major spelling/grammar error corrections
What you should NOT expect from me:

1. Theory crafting corrections
2. Help with anything google can solve
3. A vote



What I expect from YOU:

1. A complete guide to review
2. Correcting any errors I find
3. An honest effort


I will leave you feedback without any restrictions imposed by a reviewing structure like many other reviews on mobafire. However, this of course means you will not receive any form of score. My vote is very hard to sway from neutral (I wouldn't even up or downvote my own guides even if I could.) If this form of review interests you leave a comment below.


About me:

I have been active on mobafire for over two years and try to help the community in any way I can. I am a current and active league player with thousands of hours of ingame time and have played since season 1 with most of my time spent in the jungle or as support.
Did someone go out of their way to help you? You should +rep them!
Check out my Lulu Solo Top Guide for my On-Hit Lulu build!
Need some guide feedback? A link to my feedback shop.

Thanks for the sig Ubnoxius!
EdisonKhoo
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I'll be your first customer then :p

Would you mind leave a feedback on my Lulu guide? I know you already vote but I want to know if there's anything to change/add/remove :3

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/edisons-guide-to-mid-lane-ap-lulu-season-4-375645

Thanks and goodluck on your Feedback service ^^
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EdisonKhoo wrote:

I'll be your first customer then :p

Would you mind leave a feedback on my Lulu guide? I know you already vote but I want to know if there's anything to change/add/remove :3

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/edisons-guide-to-mid-lane-ap-lulu-season-4-375645

Thanks and goodluck on your Feedback service ^^


gladly :) ty for the interest
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oooo can you please check mine :D
I just recently published my guide and would love if you could give me your opinion of it. The link is right here or you can click on the link in the signature. Thank you and good luck!

Thank you Ubnoxius for the Awesome sig
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+1 rep me if you found me helpful ;D
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Good luck with your review service! Seems like a fair system :) +rep
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Thanks to OwenTheAwesomer for the signature =)
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thanks for the awesome guides to add my thoughts on
Did someone go out of their way to help you? You should +rep them!
Check out my Lulu Solo Top Guide for my On-Hit Lulu build!
Need some guide feedback? A link to my feedback shop.

Thanks for the sig Ubnoxius!
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Here's my first kennen guide. I used the making a guide guide, and I need more reviews and votes to make this guide look better or have better information.

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-ap-kennen-mid-top-electrical-maelstrom-of-shurikens-366239

Thank you for your consideration!


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AP Kennen Mid/Top: Electrical Maelstrom of Shurikens!
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Link Here

Please review my guide at your earliest convenience. I recently uploaded it, but made the mistake of uploading it early. I'm trying to improve it from the original draft so any feedback you have I'd really appreciate. Thanks in advance!
Check out my Diana guide here.
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both guides done. any other takers :)?
Did someone go out of their way to help you? You should +rep them!
Check out my Lulu Solo Top Guide for my On-Hit Lulu build!
Need some guide feedback? A link to my feedback shop.

Thanks for the sig Ubnoxius!
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