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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Vynertje » April 27, 2013 9:22am | Report

Current guides in queue: 6



Currently I'm really busy with school so all reviews will have to wait till the end of June for me to finish my work ;-)
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Hello everyone,

Most of you guys on MobaFire might know me already, but for those who don't: I'm vynertje and I am a platinum player on EUW.

Besides writing my own guides and mentoring people, I've decided to do some guide reviewing as well. I am already trying to scout some guides on the 'new' pages, but since its flooded out there I'll be offering my services through here as well.

So, if you want to know what a really experienced player (I've played around 3000 games in total, of which 2000 solo queue) thinks of your guide, you've come to the right place!

I will be using the following layout:

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Readability (x/3)

  • Structure:
  • BB-coding:
  • Walls of text:
  • Other readability related stuff:

Content (x/6)

  • Cheat sheet:
  • Skill order/explanation:
  • Item choices:
  • Runes/Masteries:
  • Gameplay:

Others (x/1)

  • Special looks:
  • Matchups:
  • Other extras:

Final score: (x/10)


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Everything under 6/10 would be considered bad, 6-7 would be decent with a few major flaws, 8 would mean that your guide really has good content and 9 would be epic!


I probably will upvote everything above 7 points. If a guide shows good promise, and the author replies well to his comments and takes their suggestions into good consideration, I generally upvote as well.

If you have any suggestions for the layout, I'd love to hear them!

Anyway, I do not ask anything in return for this and you can just PM me or leave a comment below if you would like to request a review (:

After having finished a review, I'll send you a PM so you know it's there waiting for you and you can PM me if you have some questions or wish to have a little debate. Also, I might forget to upvote if I'm tired after a 30-minute review (because that is how long it takes me to make one!) - Don't feel afraid to ask when you think I've forgotten to do so ;-)

Finally, I love all of your (positive) feedback, and it keeps me motivated to keep giving in-depth reviews on guides. So, if you liked my review, let me know because it really helps.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by Janitsu » April 27, 2013 11:15am | Report

Thanks to OwenTheAwesomer for the signature =)
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by OTGBionicArm » April 27, 2013 12:56pm | Report
My Cho'Gath guide is in my sig if you'd like to review it.

I will warn you that I am still overhauling the item section (the actual segment in the guide does not match my cheat sheets), and that should be ignored because it is outdated. XD
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by YayaFTW » April 27, 2013 5:49pm | Report
How to Zed 101

Please if you don't mind :) I know you already discussed with me the point of maxing Q over E but I didn't get any review on the rest of the guide especially the content and BBcoding :$ Your feedback is much appreciated.
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Permalink | Quote | PM | +Rep | Commend by YayaFTW » April 28, 2013 4:41am | Report
I have just read your review. It was awesome, everything you said was valuable to me, I appreciate it.

Thanks a lot for sharing your opinion with me, I will work on my mistakes through the week definitly.

Also, I explained in the comment section why the core items were all aggressive, although I'm not convinced by it myself lol.


Thanks and Cheers :)
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(It was a double post sorry :P)
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much recommend these reviews to anyone too! +rep ^^
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Thanks to VirusNG for the awesome sig!
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