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Creator: Meiyjhe April 13, 2013 9:45am
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If you are significantly bored, I'd love a review of my Ashe guide. I'm really happy with it, but I'm sure there are some things that can be improved/changed. In return, would you like me to have a look at any of your guides/threads? Have already given +rep in advance, of course :)
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jhoijhoi wrote:
If you are significantly bored, I'd love a review of my Ashe guide. I'm really happy with it, but I'm sure there are some things that can be improved/changed. In return, would you like me to have a look at any of your guides/threads? Have already given +rep in advance, of course :)

My reviews are absolutely free. Looking at my guides and threads is welcome, but not required :P

I will look at your guide this afternoon :3
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I fixed the sin you listed for my Pantheon guide and followed your recommendations, though I'm not sure if it really made it *special* like you said.

*shrugs* Thanks for the advice.

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Starki113r wrote:

I fixed the sin you listed for my Pantheon guide and followed your recommendations, though I'm not sure if it really made it *special* like you said.

*shrugs* Thanks for the advice.

You might want to put the counters in a seperate chapter now that I think about it, other than that it looks great :P

If you want to make it even better than it is now, you might want to expand your tactical section where you discuss objectives, positioning, role in teamfights, warding, basically everything :P

That however would just be bonus, it is overal already pretty great :P
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Thanks for the review. I wrote up a response to it.
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I got a recent guide in my siggy here. would like feedback since I plan on making more over the holidays.

edit: thanks for the review, I'm actually going to go ahead and throw up a skillset in depth section now, this guide is actually a revamped guide of one I made in season 2. It had a skillset in depth section but I had actually decided to prune it because it felt redundant to me. buuuuuuut for the sake of people actually learning the champion I'll go ahead and restore it.
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Alright then, done.

All following reviews will be delayed until the Christmas holiday (maybe with some exceptions), thank you for your patience.
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