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Creator: Meiyjhe April 13, 2013 9:45am
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http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/are-you-ready-to-be-blown-away-janna-guide-387180

Here is my Janna guide. I have spent the last 3 days solidly working on this :)

ENJOY!
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Can I get a review on my Pantheon guide? I tried my best but I'm not sure it is a good job :/

You can find the link in my signature.

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Hello Meiyjhe.

I would truly appreciate a billy review on my Mordekaiser guide. It is already on the front page of rising guides, and I have already gotten quite a bit of good feedback about it. However, I am wanting use this guide for special purposes, and in order to do that, I need it to grab people's attention. Thus, a review will only make it better.

I hope to hear from you soon.
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Hello may I request a review of my support Lulu guide, could you use the Billy scheme please :)
Thanks in advance <3 (link below!)
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I just wrote my first guide and would appreciate some feedback. Nobody is commenting and I found the review thingy. So with this Ill just try to apply for some!

my guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-solo-carry-yourself-out-of-elo-hell-with-jungle-fiora-388924

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Ladies and gentlemen: First of all, apologies for this months delay in reviewing. I had some important stuff going on IRL and therefore I had to delay it a bit. Second of all, important announcements regarding the reviews:
  • This July I will not be reviewing guides since I am on holidays. This means that the reviews are extremely delayed from my usual 2x per month reviewing schedule. If you cannot wait that long, I'd suggest you go to my fellow reviewers, for there are many great reviewers out there that might help you out. If you can wait that long, then don't be afraid to punish me for my disappearance by spamming my review shop with review requests. Next sprint will be ~beginning August.
  • The Billy scheme will be removed because as I see it, it is the pathethic baby version of the Super Epic Guide Breakdown 5000. Unless some people say: "Hey! I really want billy schemes because they're great!" it will be removed. Post down below if you want it to stay, if you guys convinced me, I will try to make the Billy scheme more interesting for both you guys as for myself.
  • Due to the Billy scheme disappearance, I will allow 2 SEGB5000's per sprint and 2 per person.

That is all :3

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Thanks for your review. Some answers/comments on it:
- Do you really think it is worth the space and effort to explain, why you take flash and smite in the jungle? Why? I think it is better to make the guide more concise by leaving it out as it is obvious. Same for masteries, although I can see that 2-3 choices I can add some comments. Anyway, i added a small section just for you.
- If one-line explanations are clear enough, where is the problem with them? A little more constructiveness would be appreciated.
- If you would have read all of the ability section you would see that all abilities are included. I just left out the last picture as it is not needed and included the skill in the 2nd to last one. I added a picture with a one-liner, so it looks optically complete and even people who dont read the full thing see I included all skills.
- What is C2V?
- I DID comment on the trinket choice/swap. I edited out the "no comment" as it was incorrect indeed.

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Your guide was good enough to make the reader learn the champion better. There is still a lot to improve, but it was good enough. You will get a positive vote when following this path.

Can you explain me why people are not learning the champion from my guide? Everybody gave me positive feedback and said it helped them a lot until now.
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DiZzY2k wrote:

Thanks for your review. Some answers/comments on it:
- Do you really think it is worth the space and effort to explain, why you take flash and smite in the jungle? Why? I think it is better to make the guide more concise by leaving it out as it is obvious. Same for masteries, although I can see that 2-3 choices I can add some comments. Anyway, i added a small section just for you.
- If one-line explanations are clear enough, where is the problem with them? A little more constructiveness would be appreciated.
- If you would have read all of the ability section you would see that all abilities are included. I just left out the last picture as it is not needed and included the skill in the 2nd to last one. I added a picture with a one-liner, so it looks optically complete and even people who dont read the full thing see I included all skills.
- What is C2V?
- I DID comment on the trinket choice/swap. I edited out the "no comment" as it was incorrect indeed.

Path of the Teacher
Your guide was good enough to make the reader learn the champion better. There is still a lot to improve, but it was good enough. You will get a positive vote when following this path.

Can you explain me why people are not learning the champion from my guide? Everybody gave me positive feedback and said it helped them a lot until now.

You are a platinum player, for you, a lot of decisions may seem as obvious, whereas for a newbie they have no clue what they are doing. This is why it is important to at least explain something on why you made the decisions that you did, and not other ones.

One line explanations are NEVER clear enough unless you already referred to it somewhere else in the text. Things like: "gives you faster jungle clear and decent damage against champs." doesn't help, since AS and ArPen do the same thing. Of course you say that AS specialises in clearing, and ArPen specialises in champion damage, but why? Same thing here, for you it might be obvious, but there are a lot of people out there that have no idea why.

About the ability thing, you are right. I still think that Lunge explanations are very compact and that the structure is a bit deceiving. Here again, you can talk a bit more why Lunge shouldn't be maxed first/second, and what purposes it can have other than just a gapcloser (first thing that pops in my head is an escape)

C2V is comment to vote. It means that if someone has an opinion on your guide, he has to at least share something before he judges upon your guide be up or downvoting. You can put it on by editting your guide

@trinket comment; Yeah, I just talked about your cheatsheet there :3

My review shop mainly focusses on explanations, making things clear for people that do not have the experience with the champion and/or the game. I am confident that your build works, so that alone can already help a lot of people with learning Fiora. However, as I believe it, there should be "proof", reasoning behind the choices you made are the correct ones for, in this case, Fiora. So that if me or anyone else ever doubts what item or rune or mastery or whatever should pick, that they can just scroll down and find the answer there. Your guide doesn't do that well enough, which is why I think it is insufficient.

If you want, you can re-request a review by me where I look at what I said in the past and rethink about what I said based on the changes you made on your guide and my own fresh reasoning. I am afraid though, as explained in my last post, that it might take a while before I rereview it.
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Thank you again, this time I actually gained something from your explanations!! I did already address all things you mentioned as they were rather minor. Just give it another quick look if youd like.
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DiZzY2k wrote:

Thank you again, this time I actually gained something from your explanations!! I did already address all things you mentioned as they were rather minor. Just give it another quick look if youd like.

I will try to be more clear in the future. It is a bit ironic if I say that you should explain things better if I myself do not even do so :3
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