Bodacious Thank for this criticism as it does help me and thank you for calling it amazing. I've been really busy lately so havn't been able to finish this yet but yes it is just a start.

I apologize for my rude introduction to the build. If this is a start to a build, this is amazing! Definitely could use some cleaning up, etc. You could, like mentioned, talk a little bit more about jungling because Warwick is a very unique jungler.

I have added warwick's skills and will add defensive items and different runes soon. Also I'll get videos and new jungling routes soon.

@Chubby Baby

Thanks for the tips and i'll add different runes for different types of players.

@Scenvresh

You are right, Survivability is a key part in playing Warwick. I'll add that soon, but I was very tired while making this.

Finally @Bodacious

I believe most people know that his passive makes him such a good jungler but I'll add it and all the other skills warwick has. Also I don't see that many grammar mistakes on my part but just tell me some you notice. Although,thanks for the 'it's trash' I'll fix up some of it.

Good start!

Overall this guide needs some extra coding. For instructions check out jhoijhoi’s guide on making a guide. I really don’t agree with your seals, as the crit will rarely help in your jungler. Armor seals should be the more viable ones. Maybe attack speed. Technically because of warwick’s good jungling skills and sustain, you can start with a long sword and 1 potion. Add more variety for your runes. Also talk about ganking and counterjungling.

Keep up the good work!

I won't say it's entirely without merit (hint hint, Bodacious27), but I do believe that it could be improved. If you truly appreciate the MobaFire community and the way the guides are designed, then I'm guessing you also appreciate the effort that others put into their guides.

-Try and add more detail into your work, describe why you pick the items you do and maybe suggest alternatives if it doesn't suit one style of player.
-In your description of jungling, try and be a little less descriptive as to the actual route (ie % health etc., etc.) and attempt to describe which camps flow into which and when to use smite. What skill to use at the camps, however, was a very nice idea. Perhaps also describe the proper execution of a gank or invading enemy jungle? Or if nothing else, properly describe how to do dragon (will the player require potions, what items they should have before they begin etc., etc.)
-As I mentioned already (plagiarizing Bodacious27), try your build in a few normal queue or possibly ranked queue (assuming you are summoner lv30) games and then post a picture of your successes with the build.

For your actual build's critique, I suggest:
-Factor in some sort of tankiness. Survivability is key to this game and adding a Warmog's Armor and Atma's Impaler or Frozen Mallet or even a Banshee's Veil will greatly improve your success with the build in various gameplay situations.
-I understand how you might be inclined to purchase 2 Bloodthirsters but I feel that's redundant if you factor in his passive. Maybe switch it out for something that gives you additional cdr, survivability, or additional utility.

Not the best guide out there, but I'm sure you put time and effort into it. It just needs a little editing and smoothing out, that's all.

This build is trash.

-You hardly explain any of the reasons you picked anything in the whole build.
-Your lack of grammar skills makes this build close to unreadable.
-Your picture of successful games is with Co-op v.s. A.I. games, noticeably NOT competitive play.
-Your jungle route doesn't really take advantage of Warwick's passive nor do you mention his passive at all.

Just clean it up. It's a waste of space on a website of such good builds.

This was not put in the guide but if you would like to counter warwicks damage or need to know who you shouldn't attack thornmail is a great defendant as it gives 100 armour and 30% damage back. If your hp is a lil low you'll die before killing the target if they're at full hp and a tank.

So warwicks watch out for Thornmail and tanks try Thornmail if warwick keeps dominating you.

Think that's enough for now. More items soon to come.