Ahri Build Guide : ARCHIVED :: League of Legends Strategy Builds

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Sorry for being late:

Thy sins
1. Cheatsheet too complicated. Make it more compact.
2. Summoners insight >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> strength of spirit
3. One-line explanations
4. No alternative runes mentioned
5. Gameplay section waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too compact.
6. Only 3 matchups in your section

Thy blessing
1. Full build explanation
2. Build overal is fine
3. C2V
4. Bonus: Matchups

Result: Path of Redemption
The cheatsheet is way too complex, the explanations are far too little and some parts of your build are questionable. This guide can improve in many ways, and I suggest you start working on it. The tactical section is really what convinced me that the guide just had too much to improve. Really fix it, I am not content with 'coming soon' kind of things.

Good luck
-Meiyjhe with the consult of EdisonKhoo

(Do not forget to vote! :D)

I am going to do a major update about the guide :/
Change like, EVERYTHING.

Well, not that much but tons of things are going to change. When I vote, those comming soon parts dont make me feel happy or sorry for the guy, so I get you :P

I was looking to update my guide way sooner but I am really busy IRL.
When it does get its final update please reconsider your vote :)

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Voted -1

Sorry for being late:

Thy sins
1. Cheatsheet too complicated. Make it more compact.
2. Summoners insight >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> strength of spirit
3. One-line explanations
4. No alternative runes mentioned
5. Gameplay section waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too compact.
6. Only 3 matchups in your section

Thy blessing
1. Full build explanation
2. Build overal is fine
3. C2V
4. Bonus: Matchups

Result: Path of Redemption
The cheatsheet is way too complex, the explanations are far too little and some parts of your build are questionable. This guide can improve in many ways, and I suggest you start working on it. The tactical section is really what convinced me that the guide just had too much to improve. Really fix it, I am not content with 'coming soon' kind of things.

Good luck
-Meiyjhe with the consult of EdisonKhoo

(Do not forget to vote! :D)

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I didn't :p, I just follow how Janitsu does it :p,"+rep will be appreciate", not "give me a +rep" :p

You sure? D: I ain't drunk >.<

You don't say :p, I raged before too :p, and pretty much rage at ADC doesn't know how to last hit or engage :p

Dont forget to check my guide again when I update it, it will improve a lot imo :D

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I will give you a +Rep for the time you took to check my guide and your comment, but you shouldnt ask for it :V (maybe on your signature, but thats it).

I didn't :p, I just follow how Janitsu does it :p,"+rep will be appreciate", not "give me a +rep" :p

Quoted:

Are you drunk? My coding skills suck xD

You sure? D: I ain't drunk >.<

Quoted:

I am trying to act polite, sometimes I rage when I play league :P (who hasnt anyways?). I think that people should be treated the way they treat you :)

You don't say :p, I raged before too :p, and pretty much rage at ADC doesn't know how to last hit or engage :p

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About dem masteries:

Personally, I think the Utility tree is broken as balls at the moment.

9 points in it is enough, getting the 10% summoner cdr reduction is amazing and if you also synergize it with some early distortion boots it will bring Flash to a whopping 195 SECOND COOLDOWN. Now, I will admit to only buying distortion once in my life, BUT, you should take note of it. Idk why I dont buy distortion more often but I need to start considering it.
I take Alchemist and Runic Affinity as my last 2 points. Alchemist will give you an extra 10% duration of each Health Potion, you can also choose to combine it with cullinary mastery to give yourself the instant health and mana, but I like to keep my blue buff for extra time; Runic Affinity

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Voted +1

Making a review for your guide :p (Still a Trainee :p Mah boss is Meiyjhe :D)

Cheatsheet: 18/20

9/10 item picks + structure
I don't really like on though, thats just my personal opinion. You don't need to seperate the Boots, just do a "Boots" Category.

9/10 the rest
Nothing much problem here, but isn't that good on range champions. Overall looks good. Actually it is more better to take 21/0/9 if you are going mid lane .

Structure + coding: 14/15

9/10 uses of overviews, schemes and other uses of structure
Looks fine to me, nothing bad.

5/5 uses of coding
Beautiful, especially the dividers fit with your contents in the Abilities Tips and Tricks Chapter.

Content: 22/50

17/25 Full Build Quality Explanation
All Basics included. But the Masteries Section there you didn't put anything except for the explanations of "What is Masteries" instead of "Why I choose this Mastery".
If you buy , that means you'll be AA. Take greater mark of hybrid penetration as main Mark then and you should add some Alternative Runes.

3/20 Tactical Quality Explanation
Gameplay, Teamfights, Laning Phase etc. All exclude.

2/5 Quantity content
I would like to see some more information here, more of those are welcome.

Bonus: 13/15

3/5 bonus chapters (matchups and synergy chapters)
You have Match-ups Section, but it have only 3, but you could add some more.

5/5 Originality
Well Done

5/5 attitude towards the readers (wants to improve)
You are polite.

0/0 Comment to vote
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Result:Path of the Teacher (67/100)
You have very less Tatical Quantity Content, hope you could add more in the future. Others are fine, so you deserve a +1, but you still have much more to improve on.

+rep is always appreciated :)

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You're still using your autoattacks a lot? Especially against melee champions you'll be poking with AA's as well (or at least you should, why would you get a lich bane anyway if you don't?).

Add more explanation on runes and give situationals, explain masteries, finish matchups and add some gameplay chapters (how to play in lane etc).

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I really, really don't like in . Here's the reason why.

As , you want to be outputting most damage. Yes, it's an inherent risk to not go GA, but problem is, you need most AP as possible. That's why you have .

is more for AD Assassins such as who does not have other reliable items to go for. Besides, the thing about and is that they have higher DPS than after initial burst because can output a lot of damage through Autoattacks and Spells, while has reset mechanism, and his Q comes back ridiculously quickly. does have some high damage with her , but her issue is that after ult-charm combo on Carries, can usually escape quickly. TBH, unlike AD Casters, relies on bursting out, and escaping with her .

Other AP Assassins, such as and , do not go into GA for Damage output by the way. They already have Zhonya on the kit for that.

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i think this is a solid start. i don't see anything glaring at me. good that you put the lore in a spoiler as it just isn't necessary in a guide...i might move it to the bottom though....probably would move the videos to the bottom to. the earlier you get into teaching people an effective way to play ahri the better imo. i am not an ahri expert so i can't say much about the technical stuff. you could use some more coding/formatting/separators just to clean it up and make it easy to read. holding on to my vote for now :) keep at it. when you are finished let me know and i can edit the grammar and such for you.

good luck.

Answer to Bioalchemist

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K so you asked for feedback. I'm going to split it in two parts. Quality content and writing.

Typically, hybrid pen > magic pen. Trading 1 magic pen for 8 armor pen is definitely worth.
I don't like running flat ap glyphs. Go with scaling ap or flat mr, or split between those two.
I don't see any situation in which it would be preferred to get mobi boots
Do you get double doran's or only one? Typically you should always go for double doran's on ahri because you won't be building any mreg
21/0/9 is superior to 21/9/0. The lower points in defense are quite weak IMO.
You could extend your cheat sheet by listing all optional items. For example, mention one core build, offensive/defensive situationals and one example build.

Now on to writing, I noticed this is your main problem. Your writing skills are a bit sub-par, if you'd ask me.

Your guide has no real introduction. Make a small introduction, remove lore, notes and your story.
Also, move your changelog to the final chapter
Pros / Cons seem messed up to me. You should point out what her strengths and weaknesses are. For example, her strengths are: High burst, high mobility, strong skirmishes etc. Her weaknesses would be "Falls off late game, can be itemized against" etc. Things like '4 flashes, damage amplifier, burst, best skins' are completely useless.
Runes, masteries and ability explanation chapters need more work.
Add gameplay chapters.

I'd recommend you to have a look at some advanced writers guides (have a look at the scouted guides or a couple of mine) and try to adapt your writing style to that. The content is K but you need to improve on the written aspect.

Answer to Vynertje