+1!
Well, I would rather take Spirit of the Ancient Golem instead of Spirit of the Elder Lizard since it recently got nerfed and isn't as strong as it used to be, or I would just upgrade it to Madred's Razors and leave it like that.
And I would take an early The Brutalizer if I would get fed so I can finish the game faster since Lee Sin falls of late game and since his DAMAGE falls of late game, I wouldn't build any damage items, I would build pure tank.

In general guides, you might see someone list all the viable options and then include reasons as to why you might take that item.

You should then have a tab for a list of your usual example end build or a list of your selection of core items on Lee Sin (if you have one).

It's a typical set-up, where you list all the viable options but still have enough of a general build for people to follow.

Take this guide as an example.

It's comprised of multiple sections:

Starting Items
First Back/Core Item
Offensive Items
Defensive Items
Situational Items
Example Build

In comparison to your Lee Sin build which is comprised of:

Starting Items
Early Items
Late Items
*Some* Situational Items

I feel it can leave the reader a bit rigid in terms of item pathing without being able to largely adapt to circumstances as dictated. Perhaps that might just be Lee Sin as a character, but as a suggestion, maybe you should try a similar item suggestion format as the guide I listed above.

Of course, it is your guide. If you feel you want to stay more focused on Lee Sin as a tanky utility champion, that's perfectly fine as well.

I think I can give an upvote at this point.

@sirell I see, good way at looking at it. So you reckon I should add something like a "Other Items I Recommend" section or something similar?

The thing with Lee Sin is that he can go early damage and be very successful. Going for an early brutaliser instead of Spirit of the Elder Lizard, for example, could help snowball early (just an example, not a suggestion). So in answer to your question, yes, I think you might want to add some sections on Lee Sin as an assassin. However, I do not suggest you do this if you are unsure of how to play him as an assassin or what to build/spec.

I don't think you should complete Sightstone into Ruby Sightstone so early. Other suggestions may include thinking about taking some luxury damage items if you ever snowball hard, like a Bloodthirster or a Tiamat.

@Laggermeister; what do you reckon I should add? Jungle Paths? Ganking Paths? Matchups? I'm new to this sorta thing so I want as much feedback and recommendations as possible! Answer me as soon as possible!

@Laggermeister; what do you reckon I should add? Jungle Paths? Ganking Paths? Matchups? I'm new to this sorta thing so I want as much feedback and recommendations as possible! Answer me as soon as possible!

@sirell what do you reckon I should do to improve this section? I just think that Lee Sin is a lot viable if played that way and that the items that I listed are better suited to the style of play I think he is better off. Do you think I should add a whole different way of playing him (assassin-like) and have a different set and variety of items he could use for that play style? Reply as soon as possible and i'll see what I can do!

^ -1

There's nearly zero substance in this guide after the items section.

A bit simplistic and straightforward in it's build path, so it kind of lacks in terms of flexibility. For what it is, I suppose it's passable, but since Lee Sin is such a flexible item path champion, I don't feel I can upvote due to the lack of flexibility.

Nothing suspicious here, showed all my friends who play League of Legends. They gave me my feedback through Skype/Facebook.

Already having 8 votes half an hour after release but still having 0 comments, is kind of suspicious.