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Total Eclipse Of The Heart (AP Miss Fortune)

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(101) |

Hey there,

Here’s the review you asked for in the thread! Got this one done very quick, your guide is a breeze to read <3

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Cheatsheet and build

The notes of your rune pages in the cheat sheet are quite long. Refrain from explaining why you go these runes you got a runes section for that, simply stick to explaining when you take them and if there are any other options (e.g. scorch vs gathering storm).
Same for summoners, you don't have to what Flash is used for four times in a row. Reading the same thing over and over is not really something a reader likes doing.
You mention choosing between HP and CDR and AP at Liandry's Torment and Luden's Tempest block. However these items give the exact same amount of AP and no HP. This doesn’t make much sense to me. This probably has to do with your “hidden core” items, Demonic Embrace and Horizon Focus.
I’d split the “Finish your build” block up in a few smaller ones. Especially Demonic Embrace and Horizon Focus since you usually buy 1 of these 2. You should also utilize the notes and mention in short when each item is build (but again, do not explain why they’re good – leave that to the item section).
I think it is a good idea to move the extras & vision above the example builds. It is extremely easy to scroll past them without noticing them.
I do not agree with taking Farsight Alteration as a support, ever. Truth is that vision denial is just too important.

Pros/cons

What I think is that Miss Fortune is very weak vs teams with a lot of hard engage and very mobile teams. Both will jump on you before you have the chance to poke them out. This not noted in the pros/cons however, so I'm not sure.
After reading through your guide for a while (especially the gameplay chapter) I feel like Miss Fortune is the type of champion that wants to be “first on the play”. You more or less want your enemies to run into you and eat all your poke, rather than vice versa. Combined with her rather expensive build path I think one of her weaknesses is that she is weak from behind. Is this suspicion correct?

Runes

The standard secondary part basically consists of three times Cheap Shot + hunter rune of choice. Perhaps you could try to find another format for this so you don't have to repeat that description three times.
What about Ghost Poro & Dark Harvest? Are these not worth mentioning in your runes section, even though you only take them against Sivir?

Summoner Spells

Ignite is an extremely common spell for supports. Why do you not take it?
At Cleanse, in the spoiler, you call it a rune instead of a summoner multiple times.

Matchups

This is pretty much the only guide I’ve seen so far that managed to put the matchups/synergies very high up in the guide without cluttering it. But still, perhaps it is a better idea to postpone it past the items, especially because you mention item choices in them as well.

At Braum: I’d specifically mention that he can jump to minions as well, not just allied champions.
At some of the matchups (mainly the tanky ones) you mention not poking them because they’re too tanky. However, if you poke these champions they’ll get low so they’ll never be able to all-in you, giving you free reign over the lane. So if their ADC is something that ignores poke too, aren't you better off poking them instead?
For Kalista: if you throw Make it Rain directly onto her she’ll get slowed which either to force her to stand still or lose a ton of DPS. However you don’t mention that in the matchup explanation.
At Kog'Maw: I think you mean Bio-Arcane Barrage mode instead of Living Artillery.

Abilities

In Love Tap description you call it a rune, but it’s an ability

Items

You just do not sell you support item as a support ever. Those extra stats will never be worth the value wards can give you.
Not sure if teleporting back to the top of the guide when clicking on the “Main items” header is intended or not. The result was definitely not what I wanted, I had to go all the way back down :(
At full build #3: you mention getting Oblivion Orb early, but it’s basically slotted as a 3rd item, which is midgame at best.

Gameplay/Extra’s

At communication tactics you show an image showing that Chemtech Putrifier is not gold efficient. Since you only take Morellonomicon it would make more sense to change it to an image of the calculation of Morellonomicon gold efficiency.
At Liandry’s don’t stack: The last sentence is too long, the result is that I have no idea what you're trying to say with the last part “though enemies have some tanks in their team to maintain the gold efficiency of your team”).
You offer a lot of information on gameplay and how you approach the game. Usually I try to come up with things you can still talk about, but this time I could only think of one: what do you do when you’re behind?

Presentation

Wow, wow, wow. This guide belongs to the very few where I can barely whine about coding. It just looks amazing. My only two remarks are that
1. The line breaks in the synergies spoiler look kinda weird
2. I think the text should not be centered in some cases, as it makes things harder to read than necessary (in the synergies, additional info on full build and full builds)

Nothing besides that, so have a spelling check (corrections in bold):

Pros and cons
- Arcane Comet: Synergieses -> synergizes/synergises
- Manaflow Band: an absolutely essential -> absolutely essential/an absolute essential
- Transcendence: Are you sure you meant “niche” and not “nice”?
Matchups
- Brand: dodfing -> dodging; ane -> an
- Braum: btween -> between
- Janna: pirce -> pierce; powwerful -> powerful
- Karma: sentance -> sentence (also at Leona, Nautilus and in a few other places, CTRL + F this one).
- Morgana: “can do result in/lead to a big difference between your healthbars”
- Nami:”The fish has a pretty small healthbar”
- Rakan: “provide a solid engage while also protecting then”; then -> them ; “if you ~~will~~ poke his ADC”
- Sona: moveemnt -> movement; healp -> help
- Soraka: increaeses -> increases
- Thresh: insantly -> instantly
- Xerath: “He in compare with” -> “He in comparison with”/”He compared with”
- Kai'Sa: helthbar -> healthbar
- Kog'Maw: proof -> prove (also happens at Love Tap)
- Tristana: “If you will play” -> “If you play”
- Twitch: midalner -> midlaner
- Xayah: rememebr -> remember
Synergies
- Jhin: ro -> or
- Lucian: roo -> too; bettwer -> better
Ability order/abilities
- Ability order: moevement -> movement
- Love Tap: negledgable -> negligible
- Love Tap: teachnically -> technically
- Double Up: asbility -> ability
- Make it Rain: compltely -> completely
Items
- Full build: Interchangable -> interchangeable; (spoiler) inneficient -> inefficient (this one occurs multiple times throughout the guide).
- Banshee's Veil: wheter -> whether
- Full build #1: asituation -> a situation
- Full build #3: prolongue -> prolong; nad -> and
Gameplay
- Mid & Late game: pervious -> previous; damaage -> damage
- Ability usage: rougly -> roughly; bŕead -> bread I can’t type that r :o
- Vision: “You might will have to ward” -> “You might have to ward”/”You will have to ward”
- Oracle vs Farsight: woldn’t -> wouldn’t
- Mid-late warding: AMAP . I have no idea what this abbreviation means, is it a typo?
- Lane priority: rememebr -> remember; rememeber -> remember I’ll stop repeating this one, but there are one or two more I think
- Lane priority: “If you will be too exposed” -> “If you’re too exposed”

I usually end my review by telling people their main point of improvement, but with yours I can’t think of any :(
That basically means your guide is amazing & I think it has a pretty good shot at winning something in a Guide Contest.

I hope you are able to do something with the feedback, feel free to reply if you have any questions/remarks.

Good luck updating & upgrading if that’s possible lol your guide!

(120) |

Thank you very very much for such a quick review. I expected like a week delay but your swiftness really blew my mind. Thank you for your kind words and a constructive criticism. I just updated the guide based on your feedback and here are the results:

There was some stuff I disagreed with and decided not to change it in my guide. Luckily that was only the "never buy " and "never sell your ". Perhaps it is just me playing mainly unranked games, but those techniques really tend to help me, though I agree that they are very rare and in 90% of games, you would be absolutely correct.

Then stuff I couldn't change for it would require just waaay too much work for very little benefit - (I will probably try to fix it in near future, but it will take a lot of time :/). That was mainly the text centering. I can not effectively remove the text centering in heavy coded areas. Why? I have no idea, but after few attempts of uncentering the full builds section, it just literally broke all the code I had there and results were catastrophic. The code there is very brittle and fragile and for some reason I just wasn't able to get rid of the centered text.

Then stuff that you probably misunderstood. That's mainly the "Main items header moving you to the top of the guide". That's 100% intentional. A Viwer can click on any header to quickly get to TOC and the TOC is interactable as well. You really didn't have to move down manually :D I guess I should explain it somewhere... Another misunderstanding is an image of gold efficiency. My point wasn't that is neccesarily inefficient. I tried to point out that grievous wound items your allies are buying, are inefficient, so I specifically looked for any item that isn't , if that makes sense.

Now for stuff I didn't get. What do you mean by "line breaks in the synergies spoiler look kinda weird"? Something tells me that I know what you are talking about. Not sure If I'd know how to fix it though :/

Last but definitely not least, stuff I updated based on your review. rune page is now implemented in the guide (though hidden in the spoiler because I really won't waste my precious space in the guide because of a champion with less then 1% pick rate :D). Your additional matchup tips were imlemented, is now correctly displayed, and describtions updated, all grammatical mistakes have been foxed and cheatsheat was rebranded entirely.

I will definitely further try to squish all the bugs my guide contains. Sadly keeping the guide good looking has it's flaws, which is that all the editing is much much harder then usual. Big thanks for your feedback. I super much appreciate it and I will try my best to make this guide as good as possible.

Have a ravishing day <3

(101) |

Hey again,

I mainly play unranked games too :(

About the text centering: there's probably some [center][/center] tags around the whole thing that centers everything for you or lots of them everywhere, idk. What I do know is that you can "command" text to go left by putting [left][/left] around it. The "inner" tags will always have priority over outer tags, so that way you can uncenter everything again.

For example

code

Then there is me being a bit confused about some things I forgot I could click on the TOC..., I understand now, thanks for explaining!

About the line breaks in the synergies spoiler, I basically mean an "enter" idk how to call it after the [spoiler] tag, right before the text. That has the following effect:

No line break

Line break

The addition of the rune page for you're right, she doesn't deserve space is great, however you accidentally put the image next to . And lastly, I think the cheatsheet is perfect rn, is it okay if I reference it somewhere else? ;)

Have a nice evening!

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(120) |

Dear lord, you have no idea how much the <left> tag helped...
I was finally able to reliably move the text without causing an armageddon of destroyed tables. Huge thank you for that command - I had no idea it even exists - all unwanted center text is now fixed.

The line break suspiciously disappeared after using the <left> command. I personally have no idea why but I guess it's just magic.

now displays the correct image on the left and yeah everything looks cleaner now :)

I was also thinking about changing the rune section coding so I wouldn't repeat the same text over and over again, but I came to the conclusion that it would probably not be very practical. In future I might have to change runes to reflect the current meta and so the format there is now, will definitely come in handy.

Awww I'd feel really honored, if you'd reference my cheatsheat somewhere else <3

Thanks again and have a ravishing day <3

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