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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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Xeronn's Gangplank guide
Verdict: Informative and in-depth Gangplank guide with a good build. Explains everything well, is easy to read and has a nice and accurate match-up section.
Possible Improvements: Small things about the masteries, also remove the unnecessary rune choices.
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Vitigam's Kennen guide
Verdict: Excellent Kennen guide that goes very in-depth on every aspect about playing Kennen. A must read if you want to learn about Kennen.
Possible Improvements: Just the alternative mastery setups could be better.
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Asaki's Irelia guide
Verdict: Very in-depth and solid Irelia guide. Uses a strong build that's pretty up-to-date with how Irelia is played nowadays. Overall, one of the better Irelia guides out there.
Possible Improvements: A little work on the masteries.
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Hey, I was hoping you could find the time to review my Graves guide. I'm looking for some criticism on it in order to improve it further. I've already asked a couple review shops but more criticism is always good! So, I'm here asking for more!



Summoner Level: 30

Champion Name: Graves

Link to my Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/graves-the-verdict-is-vengeance-bot-lane-214323
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Hi, wondering if you spare some of your time to provide criticism for my guide.

Summoner name: Totally not n00b
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Leblanc
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Because constructive criticism in my eyes is never bad.
[/u]What would you like me to focus on: Quite frankly, anything that you think that requires tidying up.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leblanc-patience-summoner-188079
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Wow, looks like you've got a nice string of guides in your queue. I too would like you to review mine. No rush though!

Summoner Name: Amazing Monkey
Summoner Level: 30
Champion: Wukong
Focus: I'd like to get input from more people to ensure I'm on the right track. I also completely revised my build and made two new builds that I find work better for Wukong. If you're going to focus on anything, focus on what you think brings the guide down. What's out of place.
Guide: Wukong- Great Sage Equal to Heaven

Like I said, no rush and thanks!

If you felt I contributed and stuff, can I have a (+1 Rep =3)?
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Summoner name: MissWitch
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Lux
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Because I need expert criticism to make my guide the top!~
[/u]What would you like me to focus on: Everything.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxs-awesome-rainbow-guide-2-0-209312
If you would like for me to review YOUR guide, send me a PM!
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Khazem wrote:

Untill I'm done with the current list, no more requests please.
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