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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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Summoner name: Sujing
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Maokai the Twisted Treant
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I would like to receive comments/criticism about my first guide on Maokai so I can make it better and possibly be better at making future guides.
What would you like me to focus on: If you can, review anything that needs to be clearer but I would like you to really focus on the explanations that I have provided for masteries, abilities, skill sequence, etc...
Guide link: Maokai Guide Here!
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Kalteran's Fiora guide
Verdict: Impressively in-depth and complete Fiora guide. Most of the information in it seems correct and it really shows you've put a lot of effort into making this guide and you know what you're talking about as well.
Possible Improvements: Besides a couple of minor points, I really can't see much room for improvement.
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Summoner name: IMythikos
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Sion, The Undead Champion
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I mainly want this guide reviewed as I want to improve on it but I am not sure where to start.
What would you like me to focus on: Nothing in particular. I just want more opinions on how I can improve on my guide :)
Guide link: Click Here For My Build
+Rep me if I was helpful. Check out my Sion build and Check out my Twitch build!
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Summoner name: Titooo

Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Jax

Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I'd like you to review my guide because I have just started creating guides, and I think I put a decent amount of work on my guide. I'd like to help the mobafire community by offering a useful guide.

What would you like me to focus on: I'd like you to check the depth and what would make the guide appealing as well as more useful to viewers.

Guide link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jax-imagine-if-i-had-a-real-weapon-197164

I thank you for reviewing at the least my reviewing my request because I know you may be busy.
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Zell's Shen guide
Verdict: Very nice guide, definitely one of the best Shen guides out there. Has a couple of very unique but useful sections, certainly worth a read even if you don't really play Shen.
Possible Improvements: Just a few minor points in the masteries and item build, besides that everything looks great.
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Sujing's Maokai guide
Verdict: A good, in-depth look at jungle Maokai. The item build seems a bit inefficient but everything else looks pretty good.
Possible Improvements: The item build needs some work. Some alternative rune/mastery choices wouldn't be bad either.
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Mythikos' Sion guide
Verdict: Decent guide for something you don't commonly see. A couple of weird choices in the item/mastery build and could use a little more depth, especially for the jungle section.
Possible Improvements: The guide needs some work in most aspects. Mainly the item build and the section in the guide about items really needs work.
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Summoner name: AstralD
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Jungling Gangplank
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I want to improve my guide, so the new Jungle Gangplanks could understand my guide more.
What would you like me to focus on: You're opinion on what should i improve.
Guide link: Jungleplank Guide
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Hello! If you are still active / interested in reviewing guides, then I would be glad to listen to your opinion on mine. Thank you in advance if you decide to lend my guide some of your time.

Summoner name: ThoughtFool

Summoner level: 30

What champion is the guide about: Sivir

Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I would like to have an honest, unbiased opinion on the high / low points of my guide, with possible recommendations for alleviating any trouble spots.

What would you like me to focus on: I would like you to focus on the overall guide structure and presentation first and foremost. If you have a differing opinion on the build suggested or the information / opinions provided I would also like to hear what you have to say.

Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sivirs-severely-surprising-build-guide-199816
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Review mine? :D

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improve guide.
Overall, points where i could improve.
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