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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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Trivs' Wukong guide
Verdict: The build is pretty good, which indicates you know what you're talking about. The actual guide however is a bit lacking and needs some more in-depthness.
Possible Improvements: The guide needs to be more in-depth and the walls of text need to go. Like I mentioned in my review, you can use jhoijhoi's guide to making a guide to help you with all this.
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RCIX's Talon guide
Verdict: Good and very in-depth Talon guide. A lot of valuable information with good explanations for everything. There's a couple of things in your item and mastery build that are a bit confusing though. Definitely deserves more attention than it's currently getting.
Possible Improvements: A few small things in the build here and there. I wouldn't change too much.
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IceCreamy's Soraka guide
Verdict: Impressive Soraka guide that will tell you a lot about her and supporting in general. The build is good and the explanations make sense. Well done.
Possible Improvements: Just a small tweaks in the build. There really isn't anything else I'd change.
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Thanks for the feedback, I left a reply on my topic!
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I'm ba-ack...

Summoner Name: RCIX
Summoner Level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Fiora
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Just finished it, pounding the pavement looking for feedback!
What you would like me to focus on: All of it :3
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-renegades-guide-to-fiora-188616
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Summoner name: VitigamTheSlayer
Summoner level: 27 (Almost to Level 30, hope I can slide)
What champion is the guide about: Kennen
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: To Improve It
[/u]What would you like me to focus on: The Overall Quality of the Guide
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kennen-of-the-lightning-in-dept-amp-comprehensive-180667
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To the above two posts, took me >5 seconds to spot the following.

"Note: For now, I will only accept requests untill March."

The likelihood is that he unable to review your requests hence why the thread was inactive, so don't be expecting anything anytime soon.
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Zell wrote:

To the above two posts, took me >5 seconds to spot the following.

"Note: For now, I will only accept requests untill March."

The likelihood is that he unable to review your requests hence why the thread was inactive, so don't be expecting anything anytime soon.

Oh Ok, Cool. Not a Problem. Whenever he gets a chance, he can reviw it. Didn't notice he said until March. Thanks for letting me know.
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Actually you're still free to request reviews, I forgot about removing the note cause the thread kinda died out.

@RCIX: I'll review the guide once I get back home, which should be after the weekend.

@Vitigam: The only real requirement I ask is that you're level 30 so I'm afraid I'm going to have to deny your request.
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Khazem wrote:

Actually you're still free to request reviews, I forgot about removing the note cause the thread kinda died out.

@RCIX: I'll review the guide once I get back home, which should be after the weekend.

@Vitigam: The only real requirement I ask is that you're level 30 so I'm afraid I'm going to have to deny your request.


Ok, its cool. I will come by later in a week or so when I am 30 lol
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