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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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hey Khazem, props for doing this for the community!
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Summoner name: Shadowsmark
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Miss Sarah Fortune (yes, i do read the lore :D)
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: ..my guide just seems a little lonely
What would you like me to focus on: Everything! Anything?
Guide link: Click me :3

check out my MF guide!
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MissMaw's Miss Fortune guide
Verdict: Very nice and detailed guide. While there are some points you could improve on, it definitely deserves its top spot amongst Miss Fortune guides.
Possible Improvements: A bit more explanation about her laning phase, Heal and Cleanse should definitely be noted somewhere and an explanation about your skill sequence
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Replied to your comment on my guide, bro. Thanks! :)
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Summoner name: koksi
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Lux
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: to reach the top. and to improve it of course!
What would you like me to focus on: nothing in particular, - layout, content
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lux-the-rainbowshooting-magican-136065


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koksei's Lux guide
Verdict: Excellent Lux guide, includes everything one needs to know about Lux and more. Definitely a must read if you want to learn how to play Lux.
Possible Improvements: Spelling/grammar could use some work, otherwise there's not much I'd do differently
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Speaking of Lux guides... :D

Summoner name: IceCreamy
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Lux
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I personally think it is my best guide, but it's just not getting there. I'd like some tips on how to improve it :)
What would you like me to focus on: I'm satisfied with the layout, but perhaps the info is lacking. So that might be a point of focus ^^
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/luxurious-lasergaming-113843

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i was only waiting for you to ask

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Note to self, finish rework of guide, get a review here.
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Summoner name: Blofeld
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Yorick
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: 4 eyes see more than 2 and I am always looking for improvement;
What would you like me to focus on: grammar / correct use of phrases as I am not a native speaker;
Guide link:
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Thank you in advance for reviewing, very much appreciated.
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IceCreamy's Lux guide
Verdict:Very nice Lux guide, I can tell you play her a lot and spent a lot of work into this guide. Like your other guides, this one is a very nice read and doesn't really lack anything content wise.
Possible Improvements: The mastery tree for sure. Perhaps a few small things to the build and adding a few alternative runes
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