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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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Shiikan
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Summoner name: Shiikan
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Evelynn
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I'd like you to review this guide so I know if it is informational and actually helpful to players learning to play an underestimated and much harder champion.
What would you like me to focus on: I spent a lot of time on the "Items" section and I'd like you to see if I've explained my choices well enough or if I could include something. I also need help on my "Gameplay" section due to it being relatively shorter than it should be.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-evelynn-the-night-is-my-veil-146944
Could you do me a favor and check out my Evelynn Guide? It'd be much appreciated!

Have I helped you out or voted on your guide? It'd mean a lot if you +rep me and review my guide as well!
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Summoner name: Necronis
Summoner level: 27
What champion is the guide about: Singed
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: This guide is built around legitimizing a different itemization style for building Singed. It includes detailed math to back up the arguments made in it and is welcome to criticism.
What would you like me to focus on: Just look at the idea behind it, whether you agree or not, and what could be included in future updates.....aside from the obvious game play section.
Guide link: Singed-The Manamonger
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Summoner name: Lilpwninprincess
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Poppy
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I want to improve it in anyway possible.
What would you like me to focus on: If the guide is informative enough, and if it's a positive guide.
Guide link: Poppy Jokes? I don't know any jokes.
Khazem
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RCIX's Fiora guide
Verdict: Very nice guide and quite honestly the first good Fiora guide I've read so far. The build looks pretty flawless and the guide itsself is amazingly in-depth and detailed.
Possible Improvements: Match-up section needs some work, but then again a section like that is very difficult to get right and requires constant updating.
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Khazem
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Shiikan's Evelynn guide
Verdict: Besides a couple of odd item/mastery choices it's a nice and in-depth guide that will give the reader a very good idea of how to play Evelynn in her current rough spot.
Possible Improvements: A couple of item choices could be removed in my opinion, the mastery section needs an alternative setup at the very least.
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@Vectos:
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Be summoner level 30 (This shows me you at least have some experience with the game and the champion you're making a guide about)


Sorry!
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Summoner name: Kalteran
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Fiora
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: It's a remake and I would like to make sure that I didn't fail in remaking.
What would you like me to focus on: Obviously everything would be awesome but it's a lot of content. The latter half would probably need the most focus -- the match-up section.
Guide link: Here
Check out my Fiora guide!
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Khazem
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Lilpwninprincess's Poppy guide
Verdict: A decent guide that covers most of the important aspects on how to play AD Poppy. It could be a little more in-depth but all of the basic stuff is included.
Possible Improvements: A little more information on the laning phase and gameplay in general, perhaps something more about item builds.
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Summoner name: Zellight
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Shen
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: As to receive more feedback
What would you like me to focus on: Quality of content
Guide link: Here you go
Credit to Jeff and jhois for creating my signature and avatar design.
If I helped +Rep, if I didn't then +Rep the person who did.
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Sorry for the delay... my computer crashed right as my internet finally got fixed. I'll get around to these sometime though!
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