Hey dude, good start but you really need to read johi johi's guide to makeing a guide *if you click on the top rated guides tab, its on the first page up at the top* This will help your guide look cooler and better all together.

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you cant get boots because they don't fit on your tiny little robot feet

Lol for this guide.Totally disordered and no coding.BRO,I DON'T KNOW DO YOU REALIZE THAT YOU DON'T HAVE ANY BOOTS,YOU'RE SLOW AS HELL!Also,why do you max Command: Attack? Command: Dissonance deals more damage+slow+AoE damage.It cost much more mana to be used tough.Masteries:WHY TH HELL DO YOU USE ARMOR PENETRATION AND WHY AREN'T YOUR MASTERIES SHOULD BE 21/0/9 OR 9/0/21?Why do you take Heal and Flash for spells?What about Teleport/ Clarity and Flash.You build is so disordered. Will of the Ancients and Archangel's Staff on the beginning?That completely sucks. Rod of Ages on the end?Common,you gotta be kidding me!Or you are new,or you don't know how to play this game,or you don't have computer on which you can play this game.The build sucks with no coding and everything is lame besides runes,only runes are good.Consider some changes and I'll be back to up-vote you build.

Okay, Now it has great foundation. But some of your choices I question.

First things first. As Evilbusy stated, look at Jhoijhoi's guide How to make a guide.

It WILL help you make your guide much easier to read and follow. It will teach you how to explain the items easier. For example, I start with an Amplifying Tome for the bonus AP that it give me which allow me to do more burst damage for the first blood. Also, add a little bit of neutral colors. Color stand out and make it easier to read and catch the important things that your are telling us. It is kind of like highlighting certain pieces of writing to help you study for a test.

Now onto the way you wrote your guide. I read it, and it was hard and boring. Im sorry to say it like that, but its true. Add more voice to it. Mayve some color and pictures. All I see right now is a big block of text that I have little interest in reading and want to go to another guide. Another thing is that you need to EXPAND on your sections. Just because the runes you choose are simple, go into detail about WHY you decided to choose them over all the other choices. And also explain what other runes are viable to Orianna. The same goes for your masteries. Tell us why we should take your advice for a 24 - 6 - 0 build instead of a 21 - 9 - 0 or a 21 - 0 - 9 build. Why do you feel that your masteries are better than the others.

Your items section is also probably one of the hardest things to read all the way through. It is a giant block of boring text with very little voice. Spice is up a bit, use BBCoding to make it look better, and make it easy to follow. The same goes for your Skill Sequence, but you need to also expand on that. just because it is fairly basic to you, it might be completely foreign to me. I might have gotten used to maxing my Command: Dissonance for the extra AoE Burst early on. Why is your skill sequence better than what I do? (P.S. I always max Command: Attack first, but this is an example)

Also, just because some people might be harsh and say you suck or something(YOU SUCK! J/k :P) doesn't mean you should just give up. I would love to see you turn this guide into the best Orianna guide on Mobafire. You just need to work on it a bit.

Now that is all I can think of to say on helping you fix the guide. If ya found it helpful I'd like the +Rep but that is up to you. If ya wanna help me ya can vote on my Ziggs guide: AP Ziggs - Death to all..

On a more personal note about your item choices now. I feel that all of your items are solid and viable choices, but I feel that you are making your Rod of Ages way to late into the game. I feel that you could put it before the Archangel Staff, but after the Tear of the Goddess. That way Rod of Ages can build up to max stacks really quickly and be finished by 25-30 mintues. I feel that you can also ditch the Void Staff for some boots. Maybe Sorcerer's Shoes or something. This paragraph is more personal choices for me, but it is ultimately up to you, as this is your guide. Another thing is maybe change your seals to Greater Seal of Scaling Mana Regeneration for the mana regen instead of relying on having lots of mana. I feel it helps way more in the sustain. If you fix up your guide I will definately upvote your guide ^.^

Good luck and see you on the Fields of Justice.

Nice guide, will wait to up vote because I think you need a little bit more information, and also you should check out Jhoijhoi's guide on How to make a guide.