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[quote=Pølsemanden]@koksei Nice that you found yerself a team again <3 Kinda weird Vayne build, i honestly don't know what you were goin for - i honestly don't know how strong that SotD is on vayne without IE and i don't think you would be able to burst down zac with it so i have no idea what you were trying to do. but ya won so gj on that Isn't thresh's AP scalings rather bad? He just doesn't seem like a champ i'd build ap on MF game against elise, kennen, sona and ice-bitch without cleanse... I don't get why you didn't get dat cleanse mang, just don't get it :D Singed is mean and you should feel bad for playing him Cait game, you're supposed to get the last hit on the minions or else they won't give gold. Just a heads up there ;) Trist game, why would you get the blade on trist, you already have one hell of an AS-steroid :o? Ahri game, i'm just gonna assume you know something i know with that build but it just seems odd to me :o @next guy, here ya go: http://www.lolking.net/summoner/eune/20496870#history[/quote]

[quote=xIchi]Gonna edit so no confusion inc Vayne, seems like a really annoying game where u struggled to stay alive. Maybe not enough peel on. Maybe you should have went for Cleanse instead of Barrier. Jarvan, a pretty offensive build with some tankyness and no tenacity. 15-15-24, looks like some suicidal jarvan ults huh. I guess you did all you could for ur team with those 24 assists. Vayne, 3v3. Rankdes. Always strange builds. I guess thats okay. Jarvan, pretty tanky, but I guess you lost the early and got caught some times without ur E-Q Combo and lacking Flash. Jarvan, same summoners as before, but as it seems your early went way better and you got the necessary items. LeBlanc, Why not just play full ap burst? Is the survability needed? Your goal is to instagib 1 anyway, so get instagibbed aswell :p. Maybe the lacking flash is a problem again? LeBlanc, same again, but this time more offensive, and better stats. Just what I said :p Katarina, Aram game, guess you could not carry harder there. sad. Elise, as an Elise player myself, I'd recommend you to go way tankier with your build. Ancient Golem, Haunting Guise, Aegis. You had 9 kills after 55 mins. Hopefully you had some other tank there :p. Especially as a jungler I'd prefer that build. Jarvan, Tanky build, but a Trinity? Well at least you had tons of utility. All together you seem to avoid Flash on Champs with jumps as much as possaible. http://www.lolking.net/summoner/euw/19293445#history Bash this history full of LOSES FML FML FML FML.[/quote]

[quote=Pølsemanden][quote=xIchi] Gonna edit so no confusion inc Vayne, seems like a really annoying game where u struggled to stay alive. Maybe not enough peel on. Maybe you should have went for Cleanse instead of Barrier. Jarvan, a pretty offensive build with some tankyness and no tenacity. 15-15-24, looks like some suicidal jarvan ults huh. I guess you did all you could for ur team with those 24 assists. Vayne, 3v3. Rankdes. Always strange builds. I guess thats okay. Jarvan, pretty tanky, but I guess you lost the early and got caught some times without ur E-Q Combo and lacking Flash. Jarvan, same summoners as before, but as it seems your early went way better and you got the necessary items. LeBlanc, Why not just play full ap burst? Is the survability needed? Your goal is to instagib 1 anyway, so get instagibbed aswell :p. Maybe the lacking flash is a problem again? LeBlanc, same again, but this time more offensive, and better stats. Just what I said :p Katarina, Aram game, guess you could not carry harder there. sad. Elise, as an Elise player myself, I'd recommend you to go way tankier with your build. Ancient Golem, Haunting Guise, Aegis. You had 9 kills after 55 mins. Hopefully you had some other tank there :p. Especially as a jungler I'd prefer that build. Jarvan, Tanky build, but a Trinity? Well at least you had tons of utility. All together you seem to avoid Flash on Champs with jumps as much as possaible. http://www.lolking.net/summoner/euw/19293445#history Bash this history full of LOSES FML FML FML FML. [/quote] No cleanse because i was planning to get quicksilver sash regardless to counter zed ult, zed never got that big though tri-force vayne, got the Tri-force to kite the trynda LB games, i don't like flash on LB, i think it's way more fun to play without and i'm not gonna be able to duel anything in 3v3 without barrier. Elise game, lücifer was a duo-mate of mine who's rather bad so i had to carry, i also like to play a squishy Elise and i find myself much better at playing her as a caster than a ballz-deep tank What's wrong with trinity? :o[/quote]

[quote=Dill Money]@xIchi I don't feel very comfortable critiquing you due to the big elo difference, but I'd like to get some criticism from someone higher than me (I'm climbing really quickly, like three divisions in the past 3 days, and I think I'm ready for Gold). So here I go: Nice [[Ahri]] games :) [[Evelynn]] Jungle: Rush [[Spirit of the Elder Lizard]], it spikes your clear time ridiculously. It is just an extremely cost-efficient item even without its passives. Then build towards [[Zhonya's Hourglass]] and/or [[Liandry's Torment]]. [[Nidalee]] Top? : AD [[Nidalee]] is a lot stronger against [[Garen]] than AP [[Nidalee]]. Your build path was okay, I wouldn't have built a [[Sheen]] that early. Perhaps consider building towards [[Morellonomicon]] for some cheap stats or a [[Spirit Visage]] to give you ridic sustain, then consider buying [[Lich Bane]] or whatever to complement your poke with burst. Just in general, think a lot about your team composition when picking AP [[Nidalee]]. You guys had a nice poke comp with you and [[Nami]]'s disengage, then [[Graves]] and [[Wukong]] joined the party and created a huge mess. Not much input for a lot of those jungle losses. You seemed to do fine build path-wise. Just build more unselfish items like [[Aegis of the Legion]] and [[Locket of the Iron Solari]] instead of [[Spirit Visage]]. When jungling Aegis should always be a replacement for [[Spirit Visage]]. [[Zyra]] supp: Don't feed. Hue hue hue. Always watch your positioning as a squishy support, especially when facing a fairly bursty carry such as a [[Tristana]], given she maxed her w or even her e. I hate when my supports go man-mode for absolutely no reason. My lolking (it looks beautiful right now, I have been improving by leaps and bounds): http://www.lolking.net/summoner/na/34823215[/quote]

[quote=H4xDefender]nice ahri scores, but man that is a lot of losses, rough <_< should probably not build wriggles on xin, morello on morg, or spectral wraith on eve, there are better items out there. your syndra build was really weird too but it was a normal so its ok^^ seems like you should stick to mid in soloq based on your match history but i could be wrong 0-o edit: whoops here u go http://www.lolking.net/summoner/na/20920347[/quote]

[quote=xIchi]Yeah I used to main jungle, and still am, but eve and xin were just weird games. Also I started to practice Mid again, and the morello was just cus I didn't get anything done and Morello gives some pretty good stats for its price. Also I really started to like that item :D[/quote]

[quote=LevasK]H4xDefender-Nothing much to be said about your J4 games pretty much exactly what I would expect,so is your Graves game.Now may I ask why CDR boots and kindlegem are the only items on your Nocturne game, did you go afk/sold item at the end?Also is there a reason you have no jungle items built in that game? Now as for normal games idk if I should critique those or not. I wish lolking kept more of the history ,so people could comment on my big loosing streak. http://www.lolking.net/summoner/eune/34388789#history[/quote]

[quote=xIchi]Dill Money, I will just leave the ARAM games out there. Kog Maw, seemed like a good early with Leona versus Vayne/Zyra. Overall good burst. THe build is perfect, I do not really know whats with the Tier 3 Boots. I tend to buy them way earlier then others, but I am really bad at adc anyway. Ezreal, Your Team overall just looks like a mess, could have worked but did not seem so. Also you used the Blue Ez, and as Spirit of the Elder Lizard got nerfed, you did not pick it up. Thats right. But maybe a Bloodthirster would have helped more than the Botrk. Graves, Yush, you got a Thresh in rankeds, nice one there haha. Again maybe you could've considered the 3rd Bootupgrade a bit earlier. Vayne, as I do love Vayne, but always fail with her early on. This seemed like a pretty consistent game. Vayne with aggressive Supports is just the best and also a very standard Vayne build. Graves, Huh, a stattik? Couldn't u afford your Phantom Dancer :p? As a fan of that item I do like that pick, but on Graves I tend to play with PD rather than Stattik. Tho I also think it adds more burst potential to his overall burstcombo. in general: You prefer to play adc, but you should look out for the farm a little bit more :p[/quote]

[quote=Deadlydave]xIchi: I don't know what your username is so I can critique you. To whoever is below me, here is my lolking: [url=http://www.lolking.net/summoner/na/20701456]here[/url] I appreciate any advice.[/quote]

[quote=OTGBionicArm]@Dave, my advice and critique; Nice nunu game, work on the ks'ing ;] Eww shaco. I dont think building into triforce is worth on him anymore. pretty sure its like Bork and shiv now. AP Ez isnt very good, you're better off going blue ez if you wanna mid. You get shoced into your turret forever either way. Moar Shaco, same advice as before. Varus; I assume you got grabbed. Alot. :p try Movespeed quints against blitz. Not much to say about Shen. Good game, correct build.[/quote]