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「13.21」Saiyans' Challenger Fizz Guide

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This guide is absolutely gorgeous. I really love the formatting and overall presentation you & Vivi did, it looks great. There are a few things that bother me a bit, such as , & being talked about in the guide but not in the cheatsheet as well as there not being an existing build to run with even though it's supposedly a viable item on ? IMO wouldn't be necessary to mention if it's no longer a viable item. You did also mention that is under testing, but if it becomes a good pick for fizz, it'd be pretty good to include that option in the cheatsheet too.

I believe someone already mentioned it but having notes in the cheatsheet would actually help a lot for readers that just want to quickly get some information about what they're running before they're entering their games. Some examples could be having notes on why you run that ability order, how come E is maxed first and Q is maxed last, why you build and a on your first back despite having , when you should pick each rune page (Precision / Resolve) and so forth.

Other than this I think the guide is extremely solid and clean, apart from maybe some matchups where there is an odd amount of empty space for some of them (e.g. under the portrait for Akali / Galio), but otherwise it's astonishing.

I really hope you continue to update this guide for a long time to come. :)

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Thank you for your constructive words!

I plan on continuing to update this guide throughout the months/years to come. I have a spreadsheet of corrections to be made that could make the guide better (such as the cheatsheet/matchups you mention) and as Vivi and I get the time between patches to do so I will be sure to take your words into account when making changes.

Cheers and thanks again!

Saiyans

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Hey there SAIYANS & VIVI! I'm Cat! A recent addition to Scouts and Reviewers team.
Your guide really caught my attention while browsing around local Yordles. So you've been Scouted!

What does this mean? It simply is our way of searching for underrated and high quality guides, which will in turn help your guide stand out more above everyone else, which is well deserved in your case.

While your guide is in general very neat, tidy and very presentable and enticing for a reader like myself to want to spend time on. I would like to offer you some advice to really help bring out your full potential as authors to our community of MOBAFIRE.

Itemization Notes & CHEATSHEET

Body Text Structure & Consistency

Alright, so you both have a great idea for what you want with your guide but then there are clusters where there could be more effort put in, simply to tidy things up and match the rest of the guide in structure, so to be much more presentable.

The beginning of the guide starts off like this, which isn't bad, but the rest of your guide looks like THIS.

You seem to have no Pros & Cons of playing Fizz. Which really tells a story of "Why, What Risks" compared to playing other champions. Example HERE

Definitely consider adding a section like this to your guide, as it does a lot to inform a reader the basics.

The basic idea is to try to stay consistent with the rest of the guide, neat, tidy, great use of coding and a great use of presenting your information from a left to right manner. You don't need to list the item names under each item, instead use the BBCODE ((ITEM NAME)) in the body text, since all we as readers have to do is hover it. It only serves as a waste of space.

I understand what you're going for when it comes to this section. This is what the cheat-sheet is used for, add notes to explain why you would take ___ instead of ___ at the top of your guide. The image takes away from the visuals of the guide, consider using they BBCODE ((Spoiler=Rune Page))Image((/spoiler)) to condense it.

You can alternatively just remove it entirely and change up the section to talk more about them in general without visuals changing format. You can get a more general idea by looking around at other TOP Mobafire guides to see how they display theirs an what not.

Scrolling down a bit more, once again listing the names of items, runes, spells is relatively pointless as you can use the BBCODE to highlight it in the body text starting with ((Ignite)) making it stand out, followed by your explanations.

The last and final thing I would like to mention is that your Lane-Matchup section starts off beautifully, a wonderful use of coding and structure and information, however, as you enter the final stages of it, it turns into this, which is rather... ugly to look at in my opinion, but I critic pretty hard. It is just a lot of void space on the right side.

An easier solution would be to re-center the champions displayed imagery and use a format like THIS it would help reduce, and reformat while maintaining the information.

conclusion

Keep up the wonderful work you two.
~Love Cat

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Thank you so much for the review. As Vivi and I are new to Mobafire, I'm glad there are friendly people like you in the community who put their valued time and effort into aiding our work.

In regards review itself, I completely forgot that quick notes were a feature. You are right, this would be a great addition for the readers who want quick, accessible information. When I have time, I will be sure to add this feature ASAP. Same goes for the quick matchup threats.

In regards to the formatting, I will be sure to pass on the information to Vivi!

Cheers and thank you again!!

Saiyans

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You're very welcome.

It's wonderful to see new faces around the website creating high quality guides, and aiding them in doing better.

While yes you two may be new to this site, don't let it deter you from striving to be the best you can be!
Plenty people have joined and out of nowhere stole the spotlight from many long time authors of the site.

GUIDE CONTESTS, CHALLENGES, there is so many things done for people who give it their all, a way for us to give back.

If you need any assistance at all, I'm always available to lend my aid as well as plenty of others on our team or on the forums!

~Cat

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