How does this review work:I'll be going into four 'main' topics: Cheatsheet, Content, Presentation and What can be Improved?. All of these topics alone can turn a great guide into an even better one. Just knowing the ins and outs of your champion alone won't be enough if you're not able to properly convey said information. The end goal is always to make it easier for the readers that come to your guide of course.I'll specify these main categories with purple text within this review, as well as some subcategories which will mostly depend on your guide chapters and for that I'll use the following rating system:

Cheatsheet

>Runes: Adequate

I'll leave this decision up to you as it's still your guide. However, personally I do not think it's worth it to have the experimental builds for other lanes shown. Lulu has primarily always been a support and looking at her winrates in other lanes, statistics show that the only really relevant lane is midlane, but even there she gets pretty outclassed by even the most basic midlaners. Unless you're really experienced with her and have very good game knowledge, I really doubt using her in any other lane is worth it.

Going back to the actual Support pages, they're really good and higlights her strengths, but the notes for the rune pages are horrible (for a lack of a better word). When it comes to the cheatsheet, what you see before the actual guide itself, it mostly serves as a way for readers to gain quick information in a short time (say if they're about to play a game with the champion). Telling people that more information is shown below isn't good as most people simply won't scroll through the guide to find what they need, they want it fast, and if the game goes well afterwards they might come back to the guide and read the rest of it.

Mostly mentioning this as some notes are incredibly short and others don't have notes at all. You currently have 3 rune pages that makes use of the Guardian keystone (1 meta, 1 for locket & 1 for moonstone). It'd help a lot here to explain when and why you're actually going these rune pages. Why should the reader choose the meta page, and when does it make more sense (or against what team comp) would the other 2 pages make sense? You explain this better in your Summon Aery page with the heavy lane pressure but again, it's incredibly brief and short.

Mentions that Ultimate Hunter can be changed in the Squishies page for Electrocute, but Relentless Hunter is shown.

>Summoner Spells: Adequate

I think you can change up your titles for Ignite & Exhaust a bit. Either having it say "Take most of the time" or "Most optimal" would be better for Ignite, as for Exhaust it's better to just title it "VS 2+ Burst champs" instead.

Again with the notes feeling too short, bit of lost potential here.

You mention that you take Ignite most of the times due to Lulu having good pressure early, yet you also mention that Exhaust is one of the most common spells/situation to be in. In this case, which one is the better choice? Which one is more popular? I believe it makes more sense to have the spells most used/most popular shown first, then the secondary options.

>Items: Exquisite

Note: Again with notes being pretty short here.

>Ability Order: Adequate

1 out of 3 of the skill sequence have notes explaining the purpose of the order. Your first one is vs Poke and it's clear why E max for the ally shields is good for that, feel like this could be explained more. Your 2nd order does a much better job with the notes. Last one only mentions that it's good with Electrocute (and I'd assume specifically only that keystone), yet nothing explaining why it's a good order, what it accomplishes or why it's a good combination with said keystone.

>Threats & Synergies: Decent

The "Ideal" section feels entirely worthless. It only shows 6 ideal ADCs for Lulu (even though there are definitely way more ADCs than that albeit the champion pool for the role is one of the fewest), yet explains nothing that justifies why these are ideal synergies. Yes they're hypercarries but every ADC can be a hypercarry if played well. The point of synergies is more or less how good synergy they have with you specifically. Some ADCs much rather prefer Tank supports over e.g. Enchanters, others prefer Poke mages over anything else and so forth.

Note: If you have time you can always make your threats a bit more in-depth, but I do feel like they're pretty fine as is.

Content

>About Me: Exquisite

>Summoner Spells: Adequate

I was thinking your code could be formatted a tiny bit better due to the short amount of text, it feels way better to have it centered than anything else. I also changed the places of your Heal & Exhaust to make it look more consistent with your cheatsheet (where Exhaust is before Heal). I was thinking of something like this:




>Runes: Adequate

Guardian and Summon Aery is talked about extensively, yet no mention (or a single description after the 2 keystones) talking about Electrocute. Surely the keystone is relevant enough to be talked about or else I am a bit confused why it's shown at all.

You should put a center tag inbetween your green, purple and blue dividers, it'll look much better to have them be centered then to have an odd blank space at the far right that just looks meh and out of place.

Note: I like the way you show which minor runes are good and which ones aren't.

>Items: Adequate

Here I like a lot more that you do talk about the items that are used for the Electrocute build e.g. Imperial Mandate, it makes the build feel validated (even though I still don't think it's very viable at all and statistics don't support that idea either).

You also talk about Mercury's Treads in your cheatsheet, but it's not shown or explained at all here I noticed. Neither is Zhonya's Hourglass or Shard of True Ice (a very relevant item as it's your literal support item).

I think you should include a section before the Mythics that briefly talks about the different starting items, as I don't see that being mentioned anywhere. You talk about them in your cheatsheet and where they are used yet I don't see them being talked about at all here. When is Spellthief's Edge more worthwhile and when does it make more sense to go Relic Shield? There's also not really a concrete situation said when you should go Refillable Potion + Dark Seal other than feeling confident. It can be pretty hard to dictate how well a lane would go regardless of how confident you might be, especially when botlane is a 2v2 and the lane is entirely dependant on which of the 2 players play it better.

>Ability Tips and Tricks: Exquisite

>Combos: Exquisite

>Loading Screen: Adequate

Here you talk about which support item to choose and when you should choose between the 2 out of 3 options. But my question is: Why is this talked about here only? Why not explain these support item choices in the section about the items themselves?

You also mention here again about mostly playing with hypercarries. Again, any ADC or APC can be considered a hypercarry and can be played as such, it's not specific to anyone of the role.

>Early Game: Exquisite

>Mid-Late Game: Exquisite

>Support Matchups: Exquisite

Note: If anything you could choose to make another section detailing the different ADC matchups. Botlane is a 2v2 lane after all and when you're playing the lane you're not only playing against the enemy support.

>Changelog and To Do: Exquisite

>Special Thanks: Exquisite

Presentation

> Execution: Decent

If there's one thing I'd say about your guide that I feel like you can improve on, it'll definitely be this. Some of your chapters already have some very neat and great code, that can always be improved on with time. I know very well as an author myself that making use of BBCode can be a very tedious task in of itself to make use of or just to be able to get familiar with in general, but when it comes to presentation, making use of code is the best way to elevate a guide and make it feel more alive after all.

Here are a few coding guides that we already have on the site that could help you if you'd be willing to dedicate some of your time to learning it (or if you just want some quick templates to make your guide look a bit more tidy):

- Making A Guide (has lots of free to use templates)
- BBCode Guide (the actual bbcode guide if you'd want to know how different codes work)
- A Table Coding Guide (talks about the bbcode that is called tables)
- Responsive Columns (talks about responsive columns; mainly for mobile side coding)

>Theme of guide (color scheme): Will need a lot of work

I feel like having a bit of a color theme would go a long way for any guide. This will be especially clear if you were to incorporate some BBCode for your sections. When I say the word 'color theme' I mean using colors that best represents the champion & guide you're trying to make. For example, you're currently using the "Wicked" skin, which means that a good color theme to have could be e.g. anything using a darker purple, red or darker blue to fit with the skin. If you were to not use a skin at all then naturally, some purple and green (primary due to nature in her classic skin) would be a good combination and so forth.

What can be Improved?

Making guides more extensive takes a very long time and a lot of dedication, but if you want to spend more time making your guide more informative, what you've already explained is more than just a good start, you can also include other topics such as:

- Knowing how to effectively roam without it negatively impacting you or your team (e.g. your ADC)
- How to properly make use of wards to gain vision (You're playing the most Vision appealing role after all)
- How to transfer your lead (if your ADC gets one) into a potential win
- How to play the game if you do end up falling behind
- How to play the game if you're ahead (pretty heavily dependant on where your ADC chooses to be, most likely in the midlane once tier 1 towers fall)

These topics can all be useful topics to explain, and of course there can be multiple more that you can talk about when it comes to support as a role, but I feel like these are some of the more important ones you could talk about right now.

Your matchup section is already detailed enough for Supports, yet ADCs seem to have been left in the void. When playing Botlane, taking into account the opposing ADC along with the Support is mandatory to be able to know how you'll decide to play the lane. A Support that you explains is pretty easy to face could be brutally difficult for others to face purely depending on which kind of ADC is paired with that specific Support.

Overall Thoughts

You have a very solid guide here Idleangelo and I believe it has lots of room for improvement and lots more potential. I hope this review is able to help you and I wish you good luck in however you deem to use it to improve your guide. :)