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Teyso's Guide Review Shop

Teyso's Guide Review Shop

Updated on January 19, 2013
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League of Legends Build Guide Author Teyso Build Guide By Teyso 15 0 7,416 Views 23 Comments
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baggingbagelnarb (5) | March 7, 2013 5:50pm
1. Your summoner level, so I have an idea of how much experience you have, and can better help you. 30
2. A link to your guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s3-tactical-jax-incoming-league-of-botrk-patch-305486
3. Tell me which of the tips from my General Tips chapter you have already followed: All :D
4. Do you want a rating with the review, later, or not at all? (If you want it later you will have to PM me for it when you are ready): Yes rating plz :3
Tell me if there is something specific you want me to pay closer attention to while reviewing your guide: the hard work i put into, and the itemization.
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Fangride (4) | January 5, 2013 9:31pm
Hi there! I'd love a review of my Maokai Build Guide if you could be so kind!

-I am Summoner Level 30 and have been for awhile.
-The Build can be found here: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/maokai-the-charred-treant-jungle-guide-273118
-My guide follows all of your General Tips. It has pictures, images and formatting, the spelling and grammar is by and large correct, and the color is minimal, but draws attention to what is needed.
-I would love a rating as soon as possible
-Not anything in particular, I'm just looking to improve my skills.


Thanks a ton for this service, and know I don't expect you to make it top priority. Take your time, and if you have the spare, I'd love to hear from you.

Thanks!
Fangride
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TheGroom | January 5, 2013 6:28am
I'd like you to review my guide. I am willing to +rep/everything you want.

NOTE : My mother language is french, so I don't speak english very well.

•I'm level 27 and it's my first guide ever
•Link to my guide
•I've followed your advice about color troubles and about coding/pictures.
•Yes I'd like to have a rating, it doesn't need to be a positive, as long as you give me advices on how to improve my guide :)
•I don't have anything specific to ask you, I'd like a review of my guide in general.


Thanks for reading :)
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Noob Police (20) | January 3, 2013 11:46pm
Hey! I would love to have a review swap with you. I've worked on my guide for a long time, and I just now feel I'm on the home stretch. I'd love to know what you think, as well as help you in any way I can. I've had it up for about half a month and it's the second highest ranked Gragas guide. I'd love to make it the first ranked, but I want it polished. I need some views and votes to get it there too, and posting here probably wouldn't hurt get it out there.

Summoner level: 30
Link: Your In-depth Guide To Gragas (Season 3)
Rules and Tips: Should all be followed. Color on a FEW things and maybe a COUPLE typos would be off.
Rating: I would love one!
Specifics: The works. Anything you notice, I'd love to fix. I went to great lengths on some BBcoding. I have no "SPAAAAAAAAAAAAACE" columns. I've worked a lot with a combination of spoilers, properly placed anchors, and "Go To" buttons to make navigation easy. I would like to know if anything is wrong with these spoilers, buttons, or anchors or any feedback on how to improve these further. Also, please let me know if I have proper placement of Chapters, as I want it be organized in an understandable order. Any time you put in, I would love to return in review of one or more of your guides, as well as add you into my "Thanks" section.

Cheers!
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Kog Maw (18) | January 3, 2013 10:42am
Hi dude, i would just wan't to get an review of my Kog'Maw build, if you wan't to get to the build just click on the Kog'Maw picture below!

Also some info abut me:
LV 30
ELO 1340 S2
Places:
Jungle Maokai
ADC Kog'Maw


I don't know if you'll need the info but i just wanted to show i'ts worth to cheeck out and see ya teyso! (BTW, i will add you in creds. if you help improving!)
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Retribution (52) | January 2, 2013 10:04pm
Hi!

A review for my guide would be greatly appreciated :)
I've signed up for queues for other guide review shops as well, but I thought it would be good to get multiple opinions.

Summoner level: 30
Link: Lux: The Final Spark. A Comprehensive Guide.
Tips used: I'm pretty sure I am following the guidelines. There could be a bit too much color there, but that might be just me.
Rating: A rating with the review would be nice.
Specifics: Not really, I'm looking for general ways in which I can improve.
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DemonSovereign (13) | January 2, 2013 4:33pm
Hello Teyso :D
Could you please review my guide as well?
Summoner Level: 30
Link:Dark Metallica-Rocking with Mordekaiser
Tips used: All of them!
Rating: I'll take it with the review.
Specifics: Nothing really, but the Match Ups section is still a W.I.P.

Edit: Thanks for the review! Upvoted and +rep'd :)
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Le Pro of d00m (25) | December 29, 2012 3:30pm
Sup.

Summoner Level: 30
Guide is HERE
Tips used: I believe all of them (color, columns, coding, images, pictures...stuff like that)
Rating: yes
Specifics: I'm not that high of an elo, so any knowledge that i haven't encountered yet would be awesome
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Athan (18) | December 19, 2012 9:40pm
Hello.

Since i'm looking for some decent thought-through feedback, i'd like to buy a review on my Yorick guide.

Summoner level 30.
You can find the guide Here. - It's a comprehensible guide, which naturally makes it extensive. I will +rep and give you two reviews back + a humongous thanks if you will do a proper runthrough.
It is naturally spelledchecked and it lives up to your general rules.
I wrote this with proffesionality in mind, and thus there shouldn't be any bad abbreviations unless i missed them. Which i don't think i did, but you never know.

Cheers
~Athan
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eddie199 (18) | December 16, 2012 7:54pm
Hi im eddie

Summoner Level: 30
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/chaotic-kassadin-s3-271252
General Tips: Ive used quite a lot of colour but the rest should be fine.
Something specific: Second guide

ty
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utopus (313) | December 3, 2012 10:57am
Summoner Level: 30
Guide on Twitch
General Tips: Followed ;)
Something specific: Some nice insight. I don't see how much i can improve my guide, but any ideas count...
Also, my guide title sucks and it needs to be changed to something more interesting. any ideas help :)
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mariopwns (16) | December 1, 2012 8:57am
This is mariopwns, not too new on mobafire. I currently hold the number one position in the tryndamere guides ahead of 2 year reigning champ apotheosis. I'd just like honest review, if you liked it and if you didn't and why.

Summoner level: 30
Tryndamere Guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-tryndaboss-156429

Tips followed: I didn't really follow your tips as i'd already used all the resources that you listed but if you're wondering yes i did use them.
Rating?: Sure
Specifics: nothin much just an honest review would be nice
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