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The One Man Army - Pantheon Sup Guide
Build Guide By Luquinha
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Hello Luqinha! I was notified that I had received a request! I can definitely be of assistance, everyone has to have a desire to battle the competition with guides to do better with the content that they can provide. I'll try my best to help with what little you have provided here.
You have a good array of items here that give your reader a few choices and notes to go along with them, which is a very nice thing to have. I would suggest you try to tidy it up a bit as it helps to reduce length and condense the guide, especially here in the cheat sheet section. Where people want the information as fast as possible.
Of course this is just and example you could display it any way you wish. But it's better tidy and condensed.
It's nice to see some champion match-ups right off the bat in this section. I would like to actually see some information for the other champions aside from EXTREME and a few others you miss a lot of explanation.
I can't really say I enjoy being blasted with a nice big wall of text with inner-bold-text strewn about. Ouch!
Your custom TOC banners could definitely use some work, I get what you're going for, but it's rather bright, and lazy if that makes sense. It definitely jumps out of the guide into the face of the reader, but tone down the hue of the yellow. It already stands out well enough with the background being blue and all. No need for that.
As we scroll just beneath that. We have his abilities, which is certainly lacking a lot. First, video references. It's great to talk about a champion and their skills, but it's another thing entirely to show us video references, along with showcasing their abilities in action with the proper combos. This is definitely something to implement.
Once again scrolling down, we come to the runes, which as basic as they are, offer the reader information about them in a moderate amount of detail. That's good. But it seems very pointless and lazy to add them in again and again "Already done". Then why add it again? Use some BBCODE and restructure this section, so you can put the main runes on the left, and the other runes either centered or columned to the side which would be cleaner. Ultimately what you're doing is just unnecessary filler which has no right being here since it's already here.
Scrolling down to Itemization, the arrays of color are unnecessary. Your columns are all spaced out way too un-evenly. It's a mess. I would highly suggest you fix this section up. There are also a lot of spelling mistakes.
In terms of your spoiler asking why you were not able to figure out the spacing problem. If you're using the column code. It simply using the same sizes for everything. In this case... You're using some text that is smaller in length and some that is larger in length, so it pushes each column you have in this case 3 out more.
You can use this code as a reference of what I am talking about. If you wish to fix your problem. You need to space out each individual word out because they are all difference sizes and lengths but they do not fit in the columns size in this case 90, before the text is big enough for Black Cleaver, but this would not be big enough for Chempunk Chainsword, which would require and even larger number for them, ultimately squishing the text.
My solution? Remove the text and use this in the body text, this removes the 1 column, which is fine in this case.
Moving on. We are at the end of the guide, which shows once again in a squished manner how to play pantheon. I would highly suggest you remove the center image, as once again just like items, it causes all text to be squished and more or less filler (due to it being lengthened). This will allow for a much tidier.
You have the basis of a guide down, but if you want to push your guide even further and prevent downvotes, rather get more upvotes. Try reaching out to other parts of the guide with new information, visuals & tidy up!
~Cat
The guide looks better than before, but there is a lot of text and no real imagery flair.
Definitely make this section less wordy, so that each image aligns properly.
By imagery flair, I simply mean things like...
or a customized breaker or even a Table of Content or at least a banner to separate each sections. It helps tidy things.
The long story short: Your guide is good, but visually it is lacking to hold someone's attention. Someone like myself for example. Proper spacing and consistent sizes / non-OCD inducing things is what catches my attention.
You don't have to add the breakers or sections, but that's something that jumps out to me at first glance. If I was to change anything it would be make it look visually nice rather than long sections of text and imagery with few breakers.