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Creator: JEFFY40HANDS January 7, 2012 11:50am
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Focal point here is very clean and good.
The shape itself is a tad oversharpened at the sides.
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Still a work in progress.
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Looking good ^_^
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Yeah?
:D

I can't think of where to go from there aside from adding a few additional affects, or trying to increase the feeling of depth :/
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Just mess around with new layer adjustments (gradients etc) to see if it'll make the visual look better.

I'd recommend using this width size for future too because you can maintain balance and also make sure you don't have a lot of empty spaces. For width anywhere between 350~400 is efficient in my opinion.

Also don't go smudge happy too much, this piece looks great but some areas are far too overly smudged.

Text also can be better ~ placement and the way its blended in the tag altogether.

Overall, best yet (on this style - smudging.) in my opinion, keep it up. look forward to more ^_^
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Yeah, the text is just a place holder for now, and I'm still learning restraint for smudging. I got going and liked the way it looked :P

Thank Xiao for being patient with me and providing insightful CnC as I keep developing.
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My attempt at the smudge technique Xiao shared.


I really wish I was good, because I love the style so much.

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Well.... now that I look at it with the grey background from the forums.. not too shabby.

Still, nothing compared to the tutorial.
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I have problems with how to use gradients, and when to use them. -_-

@jeffy/xiao I still like his Ironman one the best for some reason. :)

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