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Wait a sec? I have those red lines under the misspellings, But it does not put them under "hes" and yes i know its he's i just did not think it mattered at the time because it was not underlined in red. heres a pic of what i looks like on my side
Doesn't appear for me either. But it doesn't really matter. Just learn to write like you should :P
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Rudmed
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jhoijhoi wrote:
Rudmed's Twisted Fate Guide
Verdict: A good Attack Speed/Attack Damage Twisted Fate Guide. Edit: Since update the aesthetics have changed, and the guide is easier to read. Edit: I am very impressed with the amount of work the author has put in their guide. It's transition from the guide I first reviewed has been huge. This is definitely a recommended guide to read if you're planning on playing AD/DPS Twisted Fate. Certainly the best DPS Twisted Fate guide out there!
Possible Improvements: Screenshots of the guide/build working, some images... not much needs improving, as this guide is pretty much complete and very good for what the author is trying to achieve. Edit: Screenshots of scores is a great addition. Author still needs to work on formatting. Centring icons to maximise aesthetic potential. Also, there might be too much colour in the Skills Section. The only other thing I can think of is that the author has too many sections that are extremely short, so the guide appears longer than it is (not always a good thing for people who can't handle long guides). Good work ^^ +1 Edit: The only thing now I can suggest is finding a correct balance between colour and quickly scanning over the top Twisted Fate guides to see what yours is lacking (if anything). Great work!
Also, btw...
+rec
Constructive Criticism:
1) I'd suggest some earlier lifesteal in your purchase order
2) <3 for the shout-out :) Also, I'm surprised how good those scores look in your "proof" section.
3) Add in an extra column before the pro's column with "space" to make the columns head towards the middle of the section. If that made sense :P
4) lolol, your map, Rudmed! :P Silly. Here:
5) Care in using too much colour. Dark blue is also really hard to read, I'd suggest light blue :)
Must +rep MOAR, but 24 hour time limit denies me. CURSE YOU BALANCE!
Thank you, for all you have done. It has really helped the guide come a long long long way. It has helped me so much.
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How to tank guide (Revamped! 10/13)
Searz wrote:
It's bad. Go look at the featured guides at solo mid, play more Morde, remake your guide, then come back.
It's up to Jhoi whether she wants to review it or not though.
HUAEHUEAHUEHUEHEUHAEHUEHAEUAHUHEHUEHEUHEHEHUAHEUH. Very constructive criticism *trollface*.
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Bellator wrote:
HUAEHUEAHUEHUEHEUHAEHUEHAEUAHUHEHUEHEUHEHEHUAHEUH. Very constructive criticism *trollface*.
Son, I am disappoint. Lack of derp-ness.
Jhoijhoi when you check out my guide, take a look at the "I eat pain" picture, tell me if I should keep it like this or revert it to the non-gory version.
Bellator wrote:
HUAEHUEAHUEHUEHEUHAEHUEHAEUAHUHEHUEHEUHEHEHUAHEUH. Very constructive criticism *trollface*.
I'm sorry, but it was so bad that I couldn't tell you anything else than to remake 90% of the build..
It's better now though. This I can almost work with.
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Searz wrote:
It's bad. Go look at the featured guides at solo mid, play more Morde, remake your guide, then come back.
It's up to Jhoi whether she wants to review it or not though.
HAHA
SOLO MID MORDEKAISER GUIDES!
HA
Oh you were serious?
Their guides are JUST as outdated and terrible as ours man, don't kid yourself.
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Spell & Grammar check completed: I don't misspell. >:3
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No spell/grammar check. I will update my Guide about Writing a Guide with a section on how to install automatic text-box spell check, and once you've run it through that, PM me, or re-request, and I'll get right to it! (don't be angry/sad, I have rules for a reason, and if I let people I know slip through, it wouldn't be fair to everyone else)
Summoner Level:30
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Guide For:Wukong
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Kin: Install/enable the spell checks I have supplied in my Guide about Making a Guide, and just take a quick look at all the little red squiggly lines ^^
There's a lot of grammatical mistakes as well, but I'm sure you'll learn about those back at school :)