I don't quite understand what you mean by no discussion of Teleport. I talk about TP in the Spells section.

Explaining when to take each Zeal item would be a bit too long to have in the notes. That's why I have it in the item section. I will however add a little bit saying which is recommended as the default. RFC is taken very rarely but both SS and PD are both very good, even without IE. Even so, we do take IE if we can.

Mercurial Scimitar isn't niche (although Bloodthirster is generally better). We normally take it when we need to avoid CC or when against heavy AP (it has good synergy with Maw of Malmortius).

If you had Ignite then Mortal Reminder is most likely not necessary. But remember that the Core/Pen build has many potential summoner spells that you could take. I only put Ignite there because it's a good universal one. That doesn't mean it can't be replaced with other spells (which then makes Mortal Reminder viable).

Black Cleaver is very good on Quinn when against a tanky opponent. It's become even better after it got buffed. Black Cleaver also has good synergy with Sterak's, so it's not uncommon to get them both. I would like to explain more but I'm afraid it would be quite lengthy. If you really want to know why BC is so good either PM me or come to our subreddit.

What you said about other options is true. I will remove it.

The Vampirism change is actually quite new. Some higher-elo players suggested it to me.Here is a link that partially explains why we now take Natural Talent. We had a long discussion on it in the QuinnMains Club chat yesterday.

Could you explain to me what you mean by using a table? I don't really understand what you mean there.

You can only have on summoner spell on the cheat sheet. Since Ignite is pretty universal, I chose it. The spell section explains all the other choices.

I am considering removing Barrier, but I must consult others first (it's a community guide after all).

The runes section is what I am currently working on (and Items). Check back in a couple of days when I am done with it. However, ArPen Quints and AS marks are actually very good. Once again, check back later when the section is done and hopefully you will see why.

I will update the Keystone Masteries section once I'm done with the Runes (they are closely linked, you will see why when I'm done ;) )

I already talked about Natural Talent vs Vampirism. Hopefully the video is sufficient. If not, then PM me and I will get you into contact with some higher-elo players who can explain it better.

Although I can see what you mean about the Ability thing, I am going to keep it. I think it looks better than hovering over the icon and reading it there.

It's true that the table doesn't provide much information about the Why's and When's, but it's still a good summary and I've had other reviewers say that they really liked this table. Therefore I will keep it.

I will try to trim this section down, but at the same time I want the reader to understand the reasoning behind my choices. None the less, I agree it could be a bit more concise.

Thanks

I'm going to have to disagree with you on this one. The first sentence tells the reader that Bloodthirster is their go-to lifesteal item. Although the second sentence could be taken out, I prefer to keep it (if the Bloodthrister section is smaller than the Mercurial one, it messes with the formatting. That's why I keep them the same length).

The Build section is one that needs to be re-written. I will be working on this as soon as I finish the other stuff I'm currently working on.

Explaining all the different playstyles is more of a general League skill rather than one that is specific to Quinn. It would take too long and be too complicated for me to explain it to the reader. If the reader wants to know things like how to freeze the lane, how to respond to the enemy doing this, how to rotate etc then there are plenty of resources out there. Also, i wouldn't call it cheese. Using your very strong level 1 and 2 is essential to winning certian matchups and it can dictate how you play the lane.

No problem

I can certainly talk about which supports have good synergy with Quinn. But I cannot talk about matchups. Here's why. Quinn is played in all positions except supp. Because of this and also because ADCs need to take into account enemy supports, I would basically have to do a matchup against every champion in League. Even if I only did hard/skill matchups, it would still be too many. Secondly, every single matchup would require the input and approval of other members of the community. I can't simply voice my own opinion, otherwise it wouldn't be a community guide. Last of all, I am the only person doing the actual writting (everyone else provides the theoretical information, which I then need to collect, sort through, analyse and finally put into writting). It's simply unrealistic to attempt to do something like this (especially considering there are so many other things that require work and that are more important).

I will be adding videos/pictures to the laning section, especially the jungle one. I will involve some of the things you mentioned here. :)

The splitpush section will also be receiving videos/pictures, some of which will explain when to splitpush.

This section will also receive videos/pictures explaining some of the things you mentioned.

What do you mean turret sieging? What sort of things would you like me to talk about? Could you clarify what you mean, I'm a bit confused.

Same as above

I did mention this chapter in the early section. However because it's such an important part of Quinn, it has its own chapter (I included it at the end in order not to break the flow from early > mid > late). Secondly, I believe both things are important. However, because your roams are so quick the midlaner will mostly be in the same position he was at the start throughout your whole gank, so you don't have to worry too much about him being under his tower (as long as he wasn't under tower to begin with).

Will explain the benefits more.