jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=MikeyFeint][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name:[/color] MikeyFeint [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link:[/color] https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s8-yorick-jungle-graveyard-shift-520524 [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes:[/color] First guide, Generally just looking for ways to improve it and possible things that i can add to it regarding layout and information.[/quote]

[quote=Mayuran95]1/ Name: Mayuran95 2/ Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/8-7-master-tier-yasuo-indepth-updated-every-patch-501821 3/ Notes: This is my first guide ever, so feedback would be greatly appreciated. I published the guide yesterday and it has around 1k views, but no comments - so it's hard for me to know if the guide is good or bad. Only if you have the time and still interested in doing it.[/quote]

[quote=Sozzoh][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name: Sozzoh[/color] [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/they-dare-defy-shurima-patch-8-8-detailed-matchups-526128[/color] [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes: My first guide, just looking for criticism and feedback since it only has 3 comments and 2 of them are mine. I don't know if my guide is good or bad either, so I need help determining that and what I can fix.[/color][/quote]

[quote=xTheUnlimited]1/ Name: xTheUnlimited 2/ Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/8-13-sejuani-jungle-we-fight-while-cowards-talk-497042 3/ Notes: Hi, I just reworked this guide. You think this is a well rounded [[Sejuani]] guide or did I miss some aspects of it? Is my englisch "readable" or are there too many grammar mistakes? :D Any other feedback / criticism is also very welcome :)[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][mention=Sozzoh] and [mention=xTheUnlimited] - discussion starters complete :)[/quote]

[quote=Padrepio][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name:[/color] Padrepio [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link:[/color] https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-brand-catching-fire-443349 [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes:[/color] This was my s7 guide. I am updating it during those days, I am just waiting for a response from Psyguard before pressing "publish". So feel free to wait some days before starting to read, but we can also discuss on this old material without problems: I am not planning to modify the visual standard as now. Thanks! Edit: update is out right now. I am going to improve formatting for a couple of things, and I would like to add some splash-art if I learn how to use gimp[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][mention=Padrepio] Done! :)[/quote]

[quote=Chromuro][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name:[/color] Chromuro [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link:[/color] [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/an-in-depth-look-inside-the-void-prophets-mind-s8-525714]This[/url] and [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gardening-101-with-the-thorn-lady-s8-530763]this[/url] [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes:[/color] I don't have any particular request, I only want to know how I could improve my guide. Maybe the only thing I'm unsure of is my rune chapter layout, I've gone back and forth several times and I don't know if it's good or not. But this aside, every kind of criticism/feedback is welcome :^ edit: I've put a second guide just to not make a second separated post. The request is the same, I'm not in a hurry so take your time :^[/quote]

[quote=LePlay]1/ Name: LePlay 2/ Link: [url=https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/8-14-popping-the-jungle-533795]Probably here[/url] 3/ Notes: I´m generally a fan of criticism and unsure whether my first guide lacks some crucial content or is somehow poorly structured. [i](Everyone who´s reading this is invited to give me some feedback on my guide!)[/i][/quote]

[quote=Padrepio][quote=jhoijhoi][mention=Padrepio] Done! :)[/quote] Thanks, your comments are precious[/quote]