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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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1/ Name: lllIllIIIlII
2/ Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/season-7-bringing-the-storm-comprehensive-anivia-guide-504564
3/ Notes: I'm new to all this guide-making and bbcoding stuff, and I made this yesterday concerned mostly with just the aesthetics of it. I tried to make it as accessible as I could, but I'm really not much of a writer and would appreciate some insight on what I could add or improve.
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1) Name: skelestus

2) Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/freelo-shaco-guide-bruising-and-cruising-7-9-501382

3) Notes: You've given me feedback before. I've completely reworked my guide since then, so it's basically new. Feedback on my updated version would be appreciated
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1/ Name: Lazy Kingfisher
2/ Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/7-15-sejuani-support-s7-all-hail-to-the-frozen-boar-511462
3/ Notes: That's a guide for Sejuani support, build to be viable. I main her this season and I believe she can be a very strong pick. Hopefully you'll find some time to review it. I also would like to thank you for your guides, it helped me alot to do my own and to learn BBCode basics!
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Guide For: Me.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Help with design/content. I feel like i may talk/repeat too much in my guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: Quality control.
Guide Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/7-17-garen-is-a-fighter-detailed-match-ups-512530
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1/ Name: moon827
2/ Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-sona-support-for-when-you-need-to-carry-your-adc-513889
3/ Notes: Although it isnt finished, some general advice would be extremely appreciated
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1/ Name: ZERO Destructo
2/ Link: https://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-ecstasy-of-killing-a-comprehensive-how-to-jhin-guide-516903?revision
3/ Notes: Never actually used this site, or made a guide. I just published my work for Jhin, and since i used your work to help me making my guide, i think you're the right person to check it out, and talk to me 'bout flaws and things that need a change

Now again that i think of it, i dont want just a review, i would appreciate if we could discuss that whole guide making thing, in order for me to better understand everything, and do a more perfect job in my next guide. And there will be few more, at least for now.
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Link: Here ya go!

Thank you.
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All caught up from November onwards. Remember, I'm more about creating a discussion than completely reviewing, so if you'd like a little back and forth convo on your guide, feel free to request a discussion :)
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jhoijhoi wrote:
All caught up from November onwards. Remember, I'm more about creating a discussion than completely reviewing, so if you'd like a little back and forth convo on your guide, feel free to request a discussion :)
Pick a guide, any guide

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So hard to find anything to pick at with your guides, Jovana ^^ But I tried!

Anyone else? :3

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