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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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You know what, my contract ends this Friday, and I haven't got any other work lined up yet, so I will catch up on these requests :) I'll be working backwards from here ^^
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In that case, could you drop by my Morgana guide and leave a review? It's pretty lengthy, so take your time :)

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Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-tormented-protector-372317
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Will get on these next week. My contract was unexpectedly extended and now I'm teaching year 9 science (radioisotope super heroes), year 10 science (water rockets) and year 12 pre-vocational math (area, volume, scale).
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Edited because i forgot to follow your review template - sorry about that.
Name: utopus
Link: My morgana support guide
Read your making a guide guide: Yes
Spellchecked: yes

An important note:
In my guide, I have a very unusual itemization path when snowballing: Zhonya's Hourglass -> Rod of Ages. I've tested this itemization thoroughly with normal games, and some plat i/diamond 5 ranked games. With the exception of one game, I have won every game in the past 3 months when I have itemized this way. I have defended my reasoning with logic, and screenshots of my success, but people still disagree with my itemization.

I know the way I play Morgana support is different than most other people, and I really want to walk my readers through my way of playing Morgana. I'd like to hear your thoughts on what I could do to better sell my readers on this idea. Should I do a mathematical proof? Should I upload videos of me snowballing with Rod of Ages, instead of pictures? I'm getting the feeling like no matter how much I try to support this kind of thing through tangible evidence, people just keep on disagreeing.


Thanks again for your time
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Thanks a lot for the sig, jhoi! :)
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SR Support Morgana
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7/10
DATE
13/09/14


utopus' Support Morgana Guide Review


NAME
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SR Support Morgana
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7/10
DATE
14/09/14


Emikadon's Support Morgana Guide Review



If I had to pick between utopus' guide and Emi's, it'd really depend on the target audience, as each guide is strong for different reasons. Emi's is more noob-friendly, but utopus' guide is far more mechanically-minded. I would recommend reading Emi's to get an idea of Morg as a starting point, and then moving onto utopus' for a more thorough exploration of support Morgana and neat tips/tricks to hone your gameplay. (I'd liken the transition as moving on from the final year of primary into the first year of secondary school - you need all the basics and foundations from primary school in order to understand secondary)
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Thanks for the review, Jai - It means a lot to me :)
3x +rep;

Your attention to detail, and willingness to read each guide with an open mindset is unique, and quite helpful - You were able to spot flaws in my guide that many other people overlooked; I'll be sure to make some changes, and add a little more explanation to things I did not cover thoroughly.

I'll be sure to grammar check my guide more thoroughly this time before requesting another review from you; Google Docs corrected most of the spelling, but there were a lot of run-ons in my guide, which I didn't really notice before

EDIT: congrats on 1800 rep!!!!! Almost at 2000!
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Thanks for the sig, MissMaw!
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No worries :3 I'm glad you found the review useful. Will definitely come back for a rereview when you're ready. For now, please accept this signature; you don't have to use it, but I thought it was the least I could do for the person who finally got me to 1800 :P <3

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Not sure about your schedule, but please feel free to review the others before me. I am soft-remaking my guide within a week, so it'd be a bit out of place.

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Hi Northern ^^ I've just been reviewing randomly. If you've been on the list for a while, I apologise. I'm sort of working my way backwards, so by the time I get to yours, it'll probably be after your soft-remake. Feel free to post here again to notify me of the rework, so I can get yours done ASAP.

Thanks for being patient :)

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