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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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Link: A Guide Doge For The Blind
Did you read my guide: Yes
Focusing on: Content and readability
Have you ran your guide through a spell check:yes
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Hi jhoijhoi,

I would like to engage your review service for my guide on Brand, in a support role.

Elo: unranked
Champion: Brand
link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/season-6-soloq-insight-brand-the-support-carry-447370
Did you read my guide: Yes
Focusing on: What my guide is lacking to qualify for recent Mobafire guide competition, and what is required for my guide to be scouted.
Have you ran your guide through a spell check: Yes

Anything special: I am a new guide author. Recently written a complimentary guide mainly to help more LoL players accept Brand for SoloQ in a support role, any feedbacks most welcome (though I also shared some little fun stuff I learned about Brand during my experimentation with him).

Thanks.
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Name: NBD Sticky (Silver III. max lifetime elo: Gold I {in promo for plat V})
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/mundo-the-penetrator-off-tank-jungle-450479
Did you read my Guide to Making a Guide just now? YES
Have you run your guide through a spell check? YES

I'm new to guides and stuff, so i created a guide (without explicit details like paragraphs about playstyles and stuff, just a simple off-tank magic pen Mundo guide, including Ability Order, Masteries, Item Choices, Build examples and some usefull notes on many tabs). I tested the build a lot before making it and i consider it a good choice, for both normal and ranked games.
I hope you will find it useful :) have fun!
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Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/6-10-kindred-mid-the-lane-master-460602
Yes, I read your "making a guide" guide. I also suggest using it in the "Special Thanks" section.
Yes, my guide has passed through a spell check and also, I used one of my friends to help me for the correction. I don't say that it's perfect, but it's good.

I'd already give you a virtual golden chocolate bar in the "Special Thanks" for your "Making a Guide" guide. I'll also try* to write you a poem if you review my guide!

*Try : I'm French. Writing a poem in English won't be easy xD.
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I Will Review Your Guide
Welcome to my Review Thread. Previously I have +scouted guides with this shop, but this time around I'm just going to read your guide and give you a few suggestions towards improvement. Nothing huge, just short and sweet. This is your chance to get a discussion going about your guide. As we discuss your guide and you implement changes, I'll come back and drop a few more ideas or hints - just @mention me to grab my attention.

The Rules I Expect You To Follow
1/ Read Making a Guide.
2/ Use the template below to request a review.
3/ Reply to my review on your guide to start our discussion.

Review Request Template (Copy & Paste)
1/ Name: [example, jhoijhoi]
2/ Link: [paste the URL to your guide here]
3/ Notes: [any information you want me to know, or anything in particular you want me to look for or discuss with you]


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A Little About Me - jhoijhoi
I'm jhoijhoi on the Oceanic (OCE) server. I was Plat 4 in Season 6. I do not claim to be an expert player at all. But I DO know what readers want and I can deliver advice regarding the readability of your guide. The discussion I hope to start with you will prompt you to change small things about your guide. You lead the discussion where you want it to go, and I'll be your sounding board. If this sounds like something you're interested in, feel free to request a review to start up our discussion.
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Example discussion starters:

#1 - #2 - #3 - #4 - #5

Why not start a discussion today on your guide? ^^
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1/ Name: QuinnMains
2/ Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/demacias-wings-r-quinnmains-guide-to-quinn-and-valor-450976
3/ Notes: This guide is the community guide for the r/QuinnMains community. My name is Moose and I am the writer of the guide. I now view the guide as complete (apart from a matchup section, but that is a lot more complicated than you might think due to how the community guide operates) and would like to discuss what things I could either add or change in order to make my guide the best it can be.

Thanks for your time!
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Nice guide! Especially the tips and tricks throughout, super helpful for players. I've started the discussion here.

I've got a pretty much free weekend (besides taking my puppy to the beach tomorrow!), so request a discussion today ^^
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Name: skelestus

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/freelo-shaco-guide-bruising-and-cruising-s7-501382

Notes: My syle is to be more informative and only include relevant info rather than waffle about every single detail about shaco which most will not find useful. I didn't include too many graphics and pictures as well but it's something I will consider in the future.
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Discussion about Skelestus' Jungle Shaco guide started here. Anyone else? :)

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