Hiyo,

Here is me again, I figured I'd comment here too because why not?
No spoiler this time because I actually managed to keep the length.. short

Be careful with your title, saying that an update is coming soon is tricky as you might forget about it or might be unable to complete said update (or worse, you might update and forget to adjust the title). Also, one of my biggest annoyances is when a patch number is included in the title and then the guide is not actually up to date to said patch. Fizz' passive was changed some time ago to reduce damage from all sources, not just basic attacks which is what you state in the ability section.

And then the never-ending struggle of explaining when to take things instead of stating what they do. This happens in your rune section and to a lesser extent in your items section (do you always build the same five items every game? Don't you think Morellonomicon is a possible situational item?). This also happens in your summoner spell section (e.g. saying ''you want to play safe on your lane'' is not something people will understand as they have no idea when they should play safe), really try to state WHEN someone has to take something, this reason can be broad but make sure to give some examples in that case.

The color of your ability section is a bit uh... sudden. I feel like the dark(er) blue from the dividers would be a better color. Also in the description of Chum the Waters you mention ''throwing it as far from the enemy'' (which I read as 'throwing it as far away from the enemy as possible'...), maybe you mean always throwing the shark at max range even if your enemy is close instead?

I also have no idea what happened to the ability sequence table, for some reason the table has 4 rows and the icons are scattered over each row. With a formatting like this you might as well put all the icons in a single row. And ah, you copied the summoner spell section from your Pyke guide and it has the same issue as there, it isn't centered.


So once again, there is a good base but it needs some work to ascend to greater heights :D

Really liked the guide, and the visuals are quite nice. Pretty solid BBCoding and a nice understanding of formatting. I do think the first half of the guide could use a bit more information though, as it feels like almost a wall of pictures. Items could also just a bit more information, it's nice to get input on why and when you should take certain items over others. Enjoyed the gameplay section as well. Very nice job!

Hello TheFwnK,

This is a lovely guide on Fizz, I wasn't expecting a new guide with atleast some cool looking use of BBCoding, although it can be a bit better in my opinion, this guide will help you out with that!

You could focus a bit more on the abilities section now to be honest since every other section is pretty well explained anyways, and people tend to get used to their champions abilities more if they know what the different things and possibilities that they can give, instead of just having what the ability does like it's stats and such, then maybe explain what other reasons you can use the ability for. As an example what tips and tricks can you give on Fizz's Chum the Waters other then the fact that it deals damage once it hits an opponent, what possibilities can it give in a trade and/or teamfight?

Anyways it's a really great guide, I like it. :)

+1

Hey TheFwnK,
I found your guide today on Fizz and I have to admit (like the guy underneath said as well) for a new guide it's pretty in depth and just generally awesome. You seem to be quite talented in BB Coding, so well done. :)
I hope you'll expand the Match Up section a bit more in the future because I'm sure there are sooo many champion Fizz works really well with and if not, you can still mention them as "bad synergy". You get what I mean..
I also like that you're writing in a clear, sometimes funny and just really comprehensible style. This way, it's really easy to understand what you want to bring across - I mean it even reached me as main support player. So keep up your great work! :)

Cheers, Wicked Cherry.

P.S.: Put Lulu and Nami somewhere in the good or great synergy section please. ;) Especially Nami, because fish hold together and die together.

Great guide, I didn't expect that you'd have used BBCode to such extension (normally new guides are walls of text)so nice job!
You could focus more on the phases sections (early/mid/late) now since everything else is quite well explained, and people tend to perform great early game then suddenly start to get overwhelmed with deaths late game.

Anyway, keep working on it, it's surely a great guide!