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Guide For (champion):Akali
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:if there anything to improve on
What I'd like you to focus on:anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:if there anything to improve on
What I'd like you to focus on:anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584
Guide for:
Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed)
Guide Link: Mordekaiser

Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed)
Guide Link: Mordekaiser
Champion Guide for: Leona
Reasons why I want you to review it: I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =)
Things I want you to focus on: My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand.
Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)
Reasons why I want you to review it: I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =)
Things I want you to focus on: My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand.
Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)

Guide for: Soraka
Reasons I want it reviewed: Still need some constructive criticism, got a several comments that were really short and a couple that actually helped me out, so I just need someone who's neutral (like jhoi) to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Things I want you to focus on: Nothing in particular, comment about it as you see fit.
Link: AP Soraka: No, my horn doesn't poke through my Deathcap
Reasons I want it reviewed: Still need some constructive criticism, got a several comments that were really short and a couple that actually helped me out, so I just need someone who's neutral (like jhoi) to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Things I want you to focus on: Nothing in particular, comment about it as you see fit.
Link: AP Soraka: No, my horn doesn't poke through my Deathcap
The_Nameless_Bard wrote:
Guide for: Soraka
I just need someone who's neutral to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Don't worry, I can do that for you :)
It's bad.
What, you were expecting more?
Ok then.
ALL the items are just too expensive and unrealistic for a support. (obviously except for Shurelya)
2GP10 items needed.
Too much CDR (6+3+5.85+15+15=44.85).
Google has a job title called "Head of Black Community Engagement"..
I don't know whether to cry or laugh.. or both.
I don't know whether to cry or laugh.. or both.
Searz wrote:
What, you were expecting more?
Ok then.
ALL the items are just too expensive and unrealistic for a support. (obviously except for Shurelya)
2GP10 items needed.
Too much CDR (6+3+5.85+15+15=44.85).
No, I really didn't expect more than that.
Where are you getting those CDR numbers?
It shows I'm getting 9% from masteries and 30% from items....I don't have any CDR runes on the rune page, so it should only be 39%.
Look at it for what it is: as a guide for AP Soraka (as much as you may hate it), is it good? I don't care about a comparison to support Soraka, if that's your argument for why it's bad then I'm just going to ignore you.
Guide For (champion):
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: The reason why I'd like this to be reviewed, is because I have reviewed so many guides that I have may have become blind to the faults of my own guide. It is getting harder for me to look at my guide with new eyes :)
What I'd like you to focus on: Structure, relevance and whether or not some things can be condensed without the guide losing integrity. I really can't find anything wrong with it, yet there must be, as I keep getting downvotes.
Guide Link: Ashes to Ashe's
Thank you in advance, Nighthawk. Hope you enjoy reviewing!!! You'll get a lot of customers, I'm sure. And as I said, feel free to review any and all future requests on my thread ^^