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Guide For (champion):Akali
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:if there anything to improve on
What I'd like you to focus on:anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:if there anything to improve on
What I'd like you to focus on:anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584
Guide for: Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed)
Guide Link: Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed)
Guide Link: Mordekaiser
Champion Guide for: Leona
Reasons why I want you to review it: I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =)
Things I want you to focus on: My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand.
Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)
Reasons why I want you to review it: I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =)
Things I want you to focus on: My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand.
Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)
Guide for: Soraka
Reasons I want it reviewed: Still need some constructive criticism, got a several comments that were really short and a couple that actually helped me out, so I just need someone who's neutral (like jhoi) to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Things I want you to focus on: Nothing in particular, comment about it as you see fit.
Link: AP Soraka: No, my horn doesn't poke through my Deathcap
Reasons I want it reviewed: Still need some constructive criticism, got a several comments that were really short and a couple that actually helped me out, so I just need someone who's neutral (like jhoi) to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Things I want you to focus on: Nothing in particular, comment about it as you see fit.
Link: AP Soraka: No, my horn doesn't poke through my Deathcap
The_Nameless_Bard wrote:
Guide for: Soraka
I just need someone who's neutral to look at it and tell me how bad it is.
Don't worry, I can do that for you :)
It's bad.
What, you were expecting more?
Ok then.
ALL the items are just too expensive and unrealistic for a support. (obviously except for Shurelya)
2GP10 items needed.
Too much CDR (6+3+5.85+15+15=44.85).
"I love the dirty bomb tag because i get either
a) posts about the game
b) current world affairs" - steel-sentry
a) posts about the game
b) current world affairs" - steel-sentry
I would do it if I thought I had the time. I think I'm gonna stop reviewing guides altogether since I don't really have time for it.
Besides, I don't know if ppl will be able to handle my honesty.
Besides, I don't know if ppl will be able to handle my honesty.
"Moral justification is a powerful disengagement mechanism. Destructive conduct is made personally and socially acceptable by portraying it in the service of moral ends." - Albert Bandura
"Ultimately, if people lose their willingness to recognize that there are times in our history when legality becomes distinct from morality, we aren't just ceding control of our rights to government, but our futures." - Edward Snowden
"Ultimately, if people lose their willingness to recognize that there are times in our history when legality becomes distinct from morality, we aren't just ceding control of our rights to government, but our futures." - Edward Snowden
Atm I only have time to review 2-3 guides per day so i'm pretty backlogged lol.
Plus if people really want to improve their guides honesty is pretty much a necessary. Especially being brutally honest.
Plus if people really want to improve their guides honesty is pretty much a necessary. Especially being brutally honest.
Searz wrote:
What, you were expecting more?
Ok then.
ALL the items are just too expensive and unrealistic for a support. (obviously except for Shurelya)
2GP10 items needed.
Too much CDR (6+3+5.85+15+15=44.85).
No, I really didn't expect more than that.
Where are you getting those CDR numbers?
It shows I'm getting 9% from masteries and 30% from items....I don't have any CDR runes on the rune page, so it should only be 39%.
Look at it for what it is: as a guide for AP Soraka (as much as you may hate it), is it good? I don't care about a comparison to support Soraka, if that's your argument for why it's bad then I'm just going to ignore you.
Guide For (champion): Ashe
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: The reason why I'd like this to be reviewed, is because I have reviewed so many guides that I have may have become blind to the faults of my own guide. It is getting harder for me to look at my guide with new eyes :)
What I'd like you to focus on: Structure, relevance and whether or not some things can be condensed without the guide losing integrity. I really can't find anything wrong with it, yet there must be, as I keep getting downvotes.
Guide Link: Ashes to Ashe's
Thank you in advance, Nighthawk. Hope you enjoy reviewing!!! You'll get a lot of customers, I'm sure. And as I said, feel free to review any and all future requests on my thread ^^