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Yone Build Guide by paokgr

Middle [S11] One to cut, one to seal. Yone Guide.

Middle [S11] One to cut, one to seal. Yone Guide.

Updated on February 8, 2021
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League of Legends Build Guide Author paokgr Build Guide By paokgr 76 5 169,614 Views 9 Comments
76 5 169,614 Views 9 Comments League of Legends Build Guide Author paokgr Yone Build Guide By paokgr Updated on February 8, 2021
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Katasandra (92) | December 25, 2020 6:02am
Hey there,

Since you asked for someone to look at your guide, here’s a review.

I put comments on the presentation in a separate spoiler.

Click for review - presentation

Now, for the content-specific part of the review:
Click for review

Phew, that's it. I think the main point of improvement of your guide is making it more readable (e.g. making explanations less wordy, fixing grammar, TOC, headers). The information is there, but it needs some polishing.

Bonus

I hope you are able to do something with the feedback, feel free to reply if you have any questions/remarks.
Anyways, good luck with updating & upgrading your guide and have a nice day!
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paokgr (23) | December 26, 2020 3:15am
Hi,
Thank you for the review I will do my best to upgrade the guide.
Have a good day!
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