jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=th3BlackAngel]Add some coding, give explanations to your items as well as your runes, and put up some situational items or alternate items as well. Other than the guide looks decent (format wise, haven't taken the time to read it).[/quote]

[quote=Apotheosis][color=#00ffff]Guide For:[/color] Tryndamere [color=#00ffff]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:[/color] I have not had a good debate in a very long time. We are not all perfect and I think that my guide could be better. Is my guide viewer friendly even though it is incredibly lengthy? It could be better for the audience, because who wants to read a book for each champion they want to play? [color=#00ffff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] If you actually want to read the entire guide, please make me aware of anything that needs to be updated or of anything that I could clarify better. If I am to be stood corrected against something that I point out or say in my guide, please let me know. [color=#00ffff]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/your-tryndamere-resource-patch-update-news-4964]Your Tryndamere Resource[/url] You do not have to do this if you do not want to.[/quote]

[quote=Lakapooty]I don't have any pics of anything yet but I'm getting Fraps soon. Thanks guys!!! Thanks. If you like it (besides walls of text, I will have pics and vids soon) pleeease thumb it up. It took me a while to make that[/quote]

[quote=Lakapooty]Oh and what do ya'll mean by "coding"[/quote]

[quote=th3BlackAngel][[Sivir]] << this. For more check out the link on my sig about good guides and follow that. @Apotheosis: jhoijhoi is the one who is actually reviewing the guides, were just helping out (me, Rud, Searz, and a couple others) by pointing out small things that might help. JESUS CRITS, I mean, JESUS CHRIST (you see what I did there?) Anyway, very good guide from what I read and saw Apo, I dislike the huge walls of text and I think you could maybe clean thos up a bit with some coding (some parts at least). + voted[/quote]

[quote=Lakapooty]How do you code?[/quote]

[quote=th3BlackAngel]http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/how-do-i-add-icons-and-images-to-my-guides-and-comments-587[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf][[[[Sivir]]]] will result in [[Sivir]] It will work like that for all items, summoner spells, runes and champions.[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]o.O Requestsssssssssssssss. Requestssssssss everywhere o.O I will put this in bold and heading 1. [h1][color=#ffff00]If I read your guide, and you CLEARLY haven't read my first post which details what a good guide should have, that th3BlackAngel created, I will simply link you to it, and ask you to request again once you have ticked off all the aspects of a good guide.[/color][/h1] [color=#ff0000][b]Pending Rework of Champion[/b][/color] [quote=A Red Feather] Guide For (champion): Evelynn Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I believe I have found the perfect medium for Evelynn. Players either utilize her amazing skill set with bursty AP and lack sustain in combat or do the opposite as AD Eve. I truly believe my guide is how Eve is meant to be played, and I want other players to try it out. Just have to wait for her buff now! :D What I'd like you to focus on: My Summoner Spells (in regards to Flash), the core build itself, and my explanation on GP/5 items, to see if I have proper justification. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/something-wicked-this-way-comes-hybrid-roaming-eve-90463 [/quote] [quote=DeadlyTricks] Guide For: [[Evelynn]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: My guide has been mostly unnoticed and I'd like some criticism and an opinion or two about it What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think may be incorrect or poorly explained Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/evelynn-a-comprohensive-guide-ad-ap-and-hybrid-75731]Linky[/url] [/quote] [color=#ff0000][b]Pending Release of Champion[/b][/color] [quote=DirtyScumbag] So I would like you to review my guide because it's my first and it's a new champ, most players try her on AP which isnt sooo good, so i decided to publish mine. Well, I would like you to focus on the items, for me they worked very well, won every game except 1 but I want to know how others feel about it. I would be very grateful if you take the time, the link : http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-100786. [/quote] [color=#008000][b]Current List of Reviewable Guides[/b][/color] [quote=Chesswinner] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Suggestions & honest criticism. ^^ What I'd like you to focus on: Total of guide ^^ [/url][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sion-the-restless-zombie-98867]Sion guide.[/url][/quote] [quote=Lakapooty] Guide for: Xin Zhao Why I'd like this to be reviewed: It's my first guide on Mobafire and I want to know if I'm heading down the right road(s). What I'd like to focus on: Anything. Could you also give me tips on how to make my guide look less boring? Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-man-that-wouldve-slain-300-yeah-thanks-jarvan-100550 [/quote] [quote=Apotheosis] [color=#00ffff]Guide For:[/color] Tryndamere [color=#00ffff]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:[/color] I have not had a good debate in a very long time. We are not all perfect and I think that my guide could be better. Is my guide viewer friendly even though it is incredibly lengthy? It could be better for the audience, because who wants to read a book for each champion they want to play? [color=#00ffff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] If you actually want to read the entire guide, please make me aware of anything that needs to be updated or of anything that I could clarify better. If I am to be stood corrected against something that I point out or say in my guide, please let me know. [color=#00ffff]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/your-tryndamere-resource-patch-update-news-4964]Your Tryndamere Resource[/url] [/quote] [quote=Chesswinner] My guide for: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gangplank-the-spooky-pirate-99448]Gangplank, the Saltwater Scourge[/url] Why I'd like you to review it: Some criticism, to know was six hours making of it worthful, etc. =D [/quote][/quote]

[quote=DirtyScumbag]Yeah I guess I will reduce the text tomorrow, I still have some time until she's on the database, Maybe I was a bit..well I had a writing mania I guess. Just wanted to make it very detailed, you know. I tried to write it in a style which makes it interesting to read, but I will do that later. Thank you. And playing Leona on AP just doesn't work out, guess she was really meant to be played as tank.[/quote]