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Creator: Totallynotn00b June 28, 2012 2:30am
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IE: in example
TL:DR: Too long, didn't read
L2: Learn to


IE (should be written "i.e") stands for the latin phrase "id est" meaning "that is". Often confused with 'e.g' which stands for "exempli gratia" which means "for example".
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Your name (Prefered way of addressing you, within reason.): 2zacky
Link to your guide : *Here's the Link
Any specific points that I should look at?: It's my first guide so i am new to this. Rip it apart essentially is what I'm trying to say.
Why should I review your guide?: Like you I believe success is made through making no mistakes. I want to make this guide flawless. I set my goals high and I my best to make my work perfect.
Why do you want your guide reviewed? : I want honest opinion about my guide. I want someone who will tell me everything I have done wrong and not hold back.
Are you wasting my time? : I assure you I am not.
Have you read the reviews I give? : Yes I have.
Are you prepared for the same level of response? : I welcome it with open arms.
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Your name (Prefered way of addressing you, within reason.): Storm

Link to your guide : below my signature

Any specific points that I should look at?: Not really

Why should i review your guide?: I believe its worth

Why do you want your guide reviewed? : improvement

Are you wasting my time?: Doubt it

Have you read the reviews i give?: One of them

Are you prepared for the same level of response?: If I wasn't I wouldn't be typing this.
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*Hey there!* I was a little intimidated at first, but I'd really like to see some critical feedback on my Riven guide, so here I am.

Your name (Prefered way of addressing you, within reason.): Kaity
Link to your guide : [click]
Any specific points that I should look at?: None really. c:
Why should i review your guide?: I want to have as much criticism as possible so I know exactly what I lack and what I need to fix. You seem like a wonderful person to fit that role, rather than someone who sugar-coats.
Why do you want your guide reviewed? : Well, I'd like to have an ideal guide in tip-top shape. I think having some heavy feedback would be nice for it, especially since I just added a bunch of stuff.
Are you wasting my time?: I certainly hope not. :c
Have you read the reviews i give?: Yes.
Are you prepared for the same level of response?: Of course.

Have I helped you out? Check out my Riven and Sejuani guides or +Rep!
I also offer free signatures, so have a look at those!
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he doesnt do reviews anymore. XD
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AW MAN. Well thanks for letting me know! ^^'

Have I helped you out? Check out my Riven and Sejuani guides or +Rep!
I also offer free signatures, so have a look at those!
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I do if people ask me nicely.
Very
Very nicely.

And then I go hibernate again for an unspecified amount of time if the rage returns.
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I'm not going to beg for a guide review. I made a Sejuani guide, I would like for you to give me critical feedback, not holding back anything. Tell me how **** my guide is so i can clean it up and make you adore it.

Name: Arenor
Link: It's also in the signature
Any specific points: naaa tear it all apart
Why should you review: I don't know... do whatever you like. Nonetheless i will +rep you if it means anything
Why i want a review: I want an honest opinion describing all the flaws, I know they are there, I want you to tell me what's bad and good about it so i can improve.
Am I wasting your time: Not particularly
Have i read you comments: They are brutal
Am i ready: Bring it on!

Thank you ;) hope to hear from you soon.
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You could still do that one if bored (you must have a lot of free time with 2 months without guides):

  • Isolanporzellator is fine, yet hard to type
  • Link is in the signature, the one about Zac
  • It's mostly about the top guide, the rest is small bonus, so just ignore it unless you are REALLY bored.
  • Because I always feel that people wouldn't even understand what I am writing in the gameplay sections and I feel like it is somehow unsorted. Yet I don't know what I could change and other reviewers didn't give me the hint I need yet^^
  • Actually, only you can waste your time. I can only waste my time, I don't have control about yours.
  • Yeah, some of the negs, didn't read the positives, though.
  • I'll see that once you responded. As long as there is no reasonless hating, I am ok with everything.

One thing left: The blobfish image is beyond criticism. I will not remove it from my guide no matter how bad it looks or how inappropriate it is. If you don't like it, don't look at it.
Feel free to have a look at one of my champion Guides:




Or have a short look at my champion ideas.
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would really like it if you took a look at my guide please.

Your name (Prefered way of addressing you, within reason.): noobnait
Link to your guide : King Kha'Zix
Any specific points that I should look at?: Don't know what to change.
Why should i review your guide?: Because people won't tell me whats wrong with it.
Why do you want your guide reviewed? : So that I can make it more appealing to a a broader audience.
Are you wasting my time?: No.
Have you read the reviews i give? Yes
Are you prepared for the same level of response? I'll bring my own lube. I'm ready.

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