jhoijhoi wrote:
Searz's Rune Guide
Possible Improvements: I find the guide is a bit dry to read, and a tad non-aesthetically pleasing. This is most likely due to the lack of images to break up the text. Some coding, like Indents, would go really nicely with your ranking system, and the guide could do with some more colour. Using the new embedding system would be great too, to emphasis those generic "Caster, tank, dps" rune selections. Just think about how you could make your guide more fun to read.
I know Q.Q
I just don't know what to change ;(
I won't be using the [runes=] tag on that section tho. I don't wanna make one specific rune page for each class, I want to keep it a little flexible.
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1) In your Primary Runes section, you have "Marks: Penetration" - should probably say "Armor Penetration"
2) With regards to your ranking, perhaps consider a different ranking style. What has "S" got to do with being great? I know in each section you've placed them in order, but maybe an easier way of looking at it, like:
Basically I was confused with the S and F. Does S stand for high achievement, or something? And in Australia we have no "F" for fail, we have "E". So yeah. Small thing lol.
3) The only other thing I can think of is listing all the runes in terms of the wikicode, so people can hover their mouses over them and SEE why they are placed in each category.
2) With regards to your ranking, perhaps consider a different ranking style. What has "S" got to do with being great? I know in each section you've placed them in order, but maybe an easier way of looking at it, like:
Basically I was confused with the S and F. Does S stand for high achievement, or something? And in Australia we have no "F" for fail, we have "E". So yeah. Small thing lol.
3) The only other thing I can think of is listing all the runes in terms of the wikicode, so people can hover their mouses over them and SEE why they are placed in each category.
1) Nope, it's both MrP and ArP.
2) That was the standard way of ranking for a while(might still be, I dunno). A lot of games used (and still use) S as the best rank and C or F as the worst.
3) That won't work. I use abbreviations because it would take up waaaay too much space if I added all the runes like this: Greater Quintessence of Attack Damage
Please come with any more aesthetic suggestions you might have.
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1) Then write "Armor Penetration and Magic Penetration", so all can understand
2)S means Superior or Superb. F means Failure or False. Well, i can understand it^^.
3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form.
Like: Greater Mark of DesolationArP
2)S means Superior or Superb. F means Failure or False. Well, i can understand it^^.
3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form.
Like: Greater Mark of DesolationArP
NicknameMy wrote:
1) Then write "Armor Penetration and Magic Penetration", so all can understand
3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form.
Like: Greater Mark of DesolationArP
1) Nope :P
3) That's a good idea. I'll try and see how it looks.
Sittin' on chimneys, putting fire up my ***.
"I biked 12km in a blizzard today and mice are chewing on my chocolate bars. Life's good."
"I biked 12km in a blizzard today and mice are chewing on my chocolate bars. Life's good."
First off all, thanks for the review!
It doesn't only increase Vorpal Blade but also Feint and Stand United because they increase with AP! It also gives you a nice HP boost and that increases your Ki Strike! So overall this item is a good optional item in my opinion!
Done now!
Read it, done it! Used a quite big amount of jhoijhoi's template!
Ran it again through a spelling and grammar test! I'm sorry, my native language is not English! It's not even my second language! The grammar issues are the hardest ones to find for me so if you can find them, please tell me!
Added a new chapter with Tips and Tricks with this kind of information!
I hope you like the adjustments I made, worked quite long on it to make it a little bit more as it should be!
Rudmed wrote:
It doesn't only increase Vorpal Blade but also Feint and Stand United because they increase with AP! It also gives you a nice HP boost and that increases your Ki Strike! So overall this item is a good optional item in my opinion!
Rudmed wrote:
2. Pros/cons and all the pre-game stuff that you set up need to go before, your in-game stuff.
Done now!
Rudmed wrote:
3. Center your pictures, or use columns. If you have not viewed jhoijhoi's how to make guides then you need to. It will help you clear up things, and make it more organized.
Read it, done it! Used a quite big amount of jhoijhoi's template!
Rudmed wrote:
4. Double check for minor spelling, grammar issues.
Ran it again through a spelling and grammar test! I'm sorry, my native language is not English! It's not even my second language! The grammar issues are the hardest ones to find for me so if you can find them, please tell me!
Rudmed wrote:
5. Go more in-depth to use your skills. For example instead of mindlessly of Shadow Dash into a team, save it for the one causing the most trouble. Or use vorpal blade to mark your foes. You just need more.
Added a new chapter with Tips and Tricks with this kind of information!
I hope you like the adjustments I made, worked quite long on it to make it a little bit more as it should be!
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 18
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements.
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504
Post Count (at time of request): 18
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements.
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504
Summoner |Level : 26
post count: 31 at time of request
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes, I think so
Guide for : Skarner
why i'd like this to be reviewed: The opinion of a veteran/experienced person , to be sure that my guide is good enough to compete with others.
what i'd like you to focus on: My writing style and i also want a review on how effective the guide is.
guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungling-skarner-for-men-112315
post count: 31 at time of request
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes, I think so
Guide for : Skarner
why i'd like this to be reviewed: The opinion of a veteran/experienced person , to be sure that my guide is good enough to compete with others.
what i'd like you to focus on: My writing style and i also want a review on how effective the guide is.
guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungling-skarner-for-men-112315
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
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