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[quote=KoH_pHresh][quote]^Oh Koh just a thought I'd go ahead, and grab Flash instead of ignite. Because as I said before you are already a great pursuer, so I don't think you will really need ignite. So you can take flash, and just perform some incredible jukes.[/quote] I never tried [[flash]] on her, but I've seen most Akali players using it lol Tbh, although it is good, I personally don't get [[flash]] and get [[ignite]] instead despite the awesome jukes i can create mainly because I wanted to give Akali a more offensive build, whereas [[flash]] could be used as a escape mech, and getting [[ignite]] over [[flash]] suits my play-style :P But anyways I will try [[flash]] on her and see what awesome tricks i can perform XD If it's good, then I'll setup another SS set on my guide[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-the-sun-will-always-rise-again-100786#lastcomment]DirtyScumbag's Leona Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict:[/color] A quick and easy guide to read about the first female tank in LoL. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements:[/color] Needs colour, coding and formatting. Some sections are in the wrong place relative to the flow of the guide. The author has clearly spent some time and thought out most sections, so their guide is very good compared to other new guide makers :) Note: I haven't played Leona, and I don't know much about her, so I won't be much help in terms of items/abilities etc. Constructive Criticism: 1) Marks of Resilience are bad. Very bad. Also, quints should probably be of Fortitude as Leona is a tank. 2) Skilling order: [quote][color=red]Complication[/color]: Unless it's necessary (like if you're explaining a difficult mechanic or trick), you need to keep the guide as simple as possible so as many people will understand it as possible. Standard QWQEQR (to level 6) skilling order with R>1>2>3 for the rest of the skills. In short, max one skill first, then another, then another, getting ult when possible.[/quote] 3) Warmog's is never good for a first item. Buy your resistances first. 4) Dodge chance is awful. 5) [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/why-why-not-runes-masteries-items-99827#chapter4]Good Hands > Perseverance. [/url] 6) Awareness > Expanded Mind 7) Coding: [quote=jhoijhoi][code][icon=xin zhao size=55][/code] Yields: [icon=xin zhao size=55][/quote] 8) Explains your runes, or don't have a runes section at all. Looks lazy saying "Well, self-explanatory". 9) Be careful with your grammar and spelling. "I" not "i" etc 10) [[promote]] does not exist anymore. Generally you shouldn't list Summoner Spells you wouldn't take. 11) Get rid of your Masteries section, or extrapolate upon it. If nothing else, combine Runes, Summoner Spells and Masteries into one section so you don't have one sentence chapters. 12) You should explain what each skill does. 13) Pros/Cons should be up the top. 14) Farming can be combined with Laning/Teamwork 15) Every new sentence on a new line should have a new break. Instead of clumping all your text like that.[/quote]

[quote=Searz][quote=jhoijhoi] 1) Marks of Resilience are bad. Very bad. Also, quints should probably be of Fortitude as Leona is a tank.[/quote] Nooooo, they're actually pretty decent, but very subpar on anyone who needs to deal damage. ArP would be the way to go on Leona.[/quote]

[quote=Chesswinner][quote=Chesswinner] My guide for: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gangplank-the-spooky-pirate-99448]Gangplank, the Saltwater Scourge[/url] Why I'd like you to review it: Some criticism, to know was six hours making of it worthful, FEEDBACK. =D *sigh* ._. [/quote][/quote]

[quote=Searz]Chesswinner, I recommend spending more time learning about the game before making guides. Read general game guides like the ones on Reign of Gaming and my rune guide for example.[/quote]

[quote=Flubadoo]Guide For (champion): Xin Zhao Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I've played him for an extremely long time and I think I've found the "right way" to play him. I haven't gone negative since I've adopted this build. I believe the guide is pretty good, but I would like to know what someone else thinks, and if there are any logical flaws. What I'd like you to focus on: Structure and order, and especially the item build section. Suggestions on other items would be nice as well :D. I'm slightly confused on this, since my explanation on my item build is ridiculously long, and I might be repeating myself sometimes. I'm also afraid my walls of texts may be too big, so help to shorten them somehow would be great. Guide Link: http://filesmelt.com/dl/Xin_Zhao_Guide.docx[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][quote=jhoijhoi] @Chesswinner: With regards to your Gangplank Guide. I stopped looking at it when I saw 2x [[avarice blade]]s. Gold/5 no longer stack. Please make sure the rest of your guide doesn't have any more erroneous material/information in it :)[/quote][/quote]

[quote=wRAthoFVuLK]and also he gets an Atma's but no HP besides a measly 250 from TriForce... :([/quote]

[quote=Lakapooty]Sorry to be a nussience but can you review my guide again? I changed A LOT of things since last time you viewed it. The like is right here: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-tankish-lifestealing-aproach-to-xin-zhao-100550 Also how do I put "Xin Zhao" instead of that link and it would still take you to my guide? I've seen that a lot and it looks way better. Thanks for helping!!![/quote]

[quote=FiniteParadox]Guide for: Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be improved: Flaws, criticism, general things needed to be improved upon. What I'd like you to focus on: Well, anything and nothing. Don't want you to focus on anything specific and have more of a broad review to give me the best idea of what is needed to make it better. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/cassiopeia-snake-in-the-bush-101074]Cassiopeia[/url][/quote]