Keels
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Ugh... FINE.
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 555
Spell/ Grammar Check complete? Always. Yes.
Guide for: Singed
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Jhoi , your making a guide guide was a huge influence. I listened last time to your criticisms of my Renekton build, and I think it paid off. Plus duff's kinda been trawling my builds a bit, and I'd like a second opinion. No offense to him, I've been listening, but a second opinion would be nice.
What I'd like you to focus on: Do I need some more humor? I worked pretty hard to make it look nice, and I'd like to see what you think of it. Is the strategy described sound? Anything you can think of. Unless this is a bad time. I looked to blow people away on this guide.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-99768
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 555
Spell/ Grammar Check complete? Always. Yes.
Guide for: Singed
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Jhoi , your making a guide guide was a huge influence. I listened last time to your criticisms of my Renekton build, and I think it paid off. Plus duff's kinda been trawling my builds a bit, and I'd like a second opinion. No offense to him, I've been listening, but a second opinion would be nice.
What I'd like you to focus on: Do I need some more humor? I worked pretty hard to make it look nice, and I'd like to see what you think of it. Is the strategy described sound? Anything you can think of. Unless this is a bad time. I looked to blow people away on this guide.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-99768
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Okay okay.....
Summoner lvl: 30
Post count: 251
Spelling and grammar: I believe so O.o
Guide for: lee sin
Why? I'm pretty new(kind of), so I still want more advice and maybe things i can improve on(I know there's lots)
What to focus on: anything you see fit. Perhaps I should go more in depth....hmm
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/listen-to-their-heartbeat-a-jungle-lee-sin-build-116481
Summoner lvl: 30
Post count: 251
Spelling and grammar: I believe so O.o
Guide for: lee sin
Why? I'm pretty new(kind of), so I still want more advice and maybe things i can improve on(I know there's lots)
What to focus on: anything you see fit. Perhaps I should go more in depth....hmm
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/listen-to-their-heartbeat-a-jungle-lee-sin-build-116481
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Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 233
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I wanna get my Guide more know AND improve it.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything. Just read it.
Guide Link
Summoner |Level : 26
post count: 31 at time of request
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes, I think so
Guide for : Skarner
why i'd like this to be reviewed: The opinion of a veteran/experienced person , to be sure that my guide is good enough to compete with others.
what i'd like you to focus on: My writing style and i also want a review on how effective the guide is.
guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungling-skarner-for-men-112315
Summoner Level:30
Post Count:100
Spell & Grammar check:Yes
Guide For:Skarner
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I need some new and fresh ideas to make my guide stand out. Also I like constructive criticism.
What I'd like you to focus on:Anything you feel you think will improve my guide.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-in-depth-comprehensive-guide-to-skarner-113124
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 18
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements.
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504
Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):100
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion):Orianna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want opinions on what i can improve and a review from a very good player.
What I'd like you to focus on: What things i could add or what i should change to improve the guide.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/orianna-glados-solo-queue-goddess-113430
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 101
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to improve my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything I can add or change to make my guide better
Guide Link: Mordekaiser
This guide has been reviewed by you before but I have changed it a lot since the last time you saw it
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 115 with this one
Spell & Grammar check completed: I did it but English is not my foreign language so ...
Guide For (champion): Shen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide I've made, looking for some comments on how I play with him!
What I'd like you to focus on: Uhm, everything?
My Shen Build
Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):like 700 I think
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For: items
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:Need feedback and exposure
What I'd like you to focus on:Formatting
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-item-guide-97205
Summoner lvl: 30
Post count: 251
Spelling and grammar: I believe so O.o
Guide for: lee sin
Why? I'm pretty new(kind of), so I still want more advice and maybe things i can improve on(I know there's lots)
What to focus on: anything you see fit. Perhaps I should go more in depth....hmm
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/listen-to-their-heartbeat-a-jungle-lee-sin-build-116481
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 555
Spell/ Grammar Check complete? Always. Yes.
Guide for: Singed
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Jhoi , your making a guide guide was a huge influence. I listened last time to your criticisms of my Renekton build, and I think it paid off. Plus duff's kinda been trawling my builds a bit, and I'd like a second opinion. No offense to him, I've been listening, but a second opinion would be nice.
What I'd like you to focus on: Do I need some more humor? I worked pretty hard to make it look nice, and I'd like to see what you think of it. Is the strategy described sound? Anything you can think of. Unless this is a bad time. I looked to blow people away on this guide.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-99768
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Reviewable Guides
Xiron wrote:
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 233
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I wanna get my Guide more know AND improve it.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything. Just read it.
Guide Link
SirSpankAlot wrote:
Summoner |Level : 26
post count: 31 at time of request
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes, I think so
Guide for : Skarner
why i'd like this to be reviewed: The opinion of a veteran/experienced person , to be sure that my guide is good enough to compete with others.
what i'd like you to focus on: My writing style and i also want a review on how effective the guide is.
guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungling-skarner-for-men-112315
Barman5000 wrote:
Summoner Level:30
Post Count:100
Spell & Grammar check:Yes
Guide For:Skarner
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:I need some new and fresh ideas to make my guide stand out. Also I like constructive criticism.
What I'd like you to focus on:Anything you feel you think will improve my guide.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-in-depth-comprehensive-guide-to-skarner-113124
Palthios wrote:
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 18
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements.
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504
xIPainIx wrote:
Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):100
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion):Orianna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want opinions on what i can improve and a review from a very good player.
What I'd like you to focus on: What things i could add or what i should change to improve the guide.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/orianna-glados-solo-queue-goddess-113430
VKZ95 wrote:
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 101
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes
Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to improve my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything I can add or change to make my guide better
Guide Link: Mordekaiser
This guide has been reviewed by you before but I have changed it a lot since the last time you saw it
Siveo wrote:
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 115 with this one
Spell & Grammar check completed: I did it but English is not my foreign language so ...
Guide For (champion): Shen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide I've made, looking for some comments on how I play with him!
What I'd like you to focus on: Uhm, everything?
My Shen Build
theBMB wrote:
Summoner Level:30
Post Count (at time of request):like 700 I think
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For: items
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:Need feedback and exposure
What I'd like you to focus on:Formatting
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-item-guide-97205
JakofAllSpaydes wrote:
Summoner lvl: 30
Post count: 251
Spelling and grammar: I believe so O.o
Guide for: lee sin
Why? I'm pretty new(kind of), so I still want more advice and maybe things i can improve on(I know there's lots)
What to focus on: anything you see fit. Perhaps I should go more in depth....hmm
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/listen-to-their-heartbeat-a-jungle-lee-sin-build-116481
Keels wrote:
Summoner level: 30
Post count: 555
Spell/ Grammar Check complete? Always. Yes.
Guide for: Singed
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: Jhoi , your making a guide guide was a huge influence. I listened last time to your criticisms of my Renekton build, and I think it paid off. Plus duff's kinda been trawling my builds a bit, and I'd like a second opinion. No offense to him, I've been listening, but a second opinion would be nice.
What I'd like you to focus on: Do I need some more humor? I worked pretty hard to make it look nice, and I'd like to see what you think of it. Is the strategy described sound? Anything you can think of. Unless this is a bad time. I looked to blow people away on this guide.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-99768
Xiron's Wukong Guide
Verdict: This is a glass cannon, pure DPS Wukong guide, and the author has clearly tried to convey as much of his knowledge as possible.
Possible Improvements: I think the author should archive this guide, and re-release it, due to all the negative votes he has recieved. It is great to see a guide evolve due to feedback, but I know from experience that the people who have downvoted it will not go back to change their votes. Feel free to request another review here once you release a new guide that isn't covered in negative comments :/
Constructive Criticism:
1) I think because Wukong is supposed to be tanky DPS, you will want to have Glyphs of Shielding, for that extra magic resist early game. But I can see the benefits of Glyphs of Focus.
Quints of Strength become useless at level 4 (when the 7 damage is negligible), so consider Quints of Fortitude, or Quints of Desolation which will always be useful, considering your only desolation item is Youmuu's.
2) Mmm, I'm not sure about your build. You're going basically pure DPS, and tanky DPS Wukong seems to do better. Just like Lee Sin, or Xin Zhao, it's best to have a balance between damage and survivability. Your purchase order has no survivability besides the Phage component, and even that isn't very much.
3) As Wukong is a duelling champion, I feel Exhaust would be a better pick than Ignite.
4) I am female.
5) Good Hands Over ****ing Perseverance.
6) 22/0/8? o.O :/ Try 9/0/21, or 0/9/21, or 0/15/15 or something. I just feel like you're trying to turn Wukong into a pure DPS champ when he's better as Tanky DPS.
7) No need for champion lore. Just looks like you're trying to make your guide longer.
8) Always have two enter spaces before and after a line separator.
9) I like the way you display alternative runes, but I'd never suggest Critical Strike chance, or glyphs of alacrity.
10) Don't list useless summoner spells.
11) Why is the order of your guide all over the place? Skill Explanation then Skill Sequence =.=
12) "Do you want to get more life and slow the enemy just by hitting them? [[Frozen Mallet] is your best friend!" Coding error.
13) Center all images.
14) I'm female.
Verdict: This is a glass cannon, pure DPS Wukong guide, and the author has clearly tried to convey as much of his knowledge as possible.
Possible Improvements: I think the author should archive this guide, and re-release it, due to all the negative votes he has recieved. It is great to see a guide evolve due to feedback, but I know from experience that the people who have downvoted it will not go back to change their votes. Feel free to request another review here once you release a new guide that isn't covered in negative comments :/
Constructive Criticism:
1) I think because Wukong is supposed to be tanky DPS, you will want to have Glyphs of Shielding, for that extra magic resist early game. But I can see the benefits of Glyphs of Focus.
Quints of Strength become useless at level 4 (when the 7 damage is negligible), so consider Quints of Fortitude, or Quints of Desolation which will always be useful, considering your only desolation item is Youmuu's.
2) Mmm, I'm not sure about your build. You're going basically pure DPS, and tanky DPS Wukong seems to do better. Just like Lee Sin, or Xin Zhao, it's best to have a balance between damage and survivability. Your purchase order has no survivability besides the
Phage component, and even that isn't very much.3) As Wukong is a duelling champion, I feel Exhaust would be a better pick than Ignite.
4) I am female.
5) Good Hands Over ****ing Perseverance.
6) 22/0/8? o.O :/ Try 9/0/21, or 0/9/21, or 0/15/15 or something. I just feel like you're trying to turn Wukong into a pure DPS champ when he's better as Tanky DPS.
7) No need for champion lore. Just looks like you're trying to make your guide longer.
8) Always have two enter spaces before and after a line separator.
9) I like the way you display alternative runes, but I'd never suggest Critical Strike chance, or glyphs of alacrity.
10) Don't list useless summoner spells.
11) Why is the order of your guide all over the place? Skill Explanation then Skill Sequence =.=
12) "Do you want to get more life and slow the enemy just by hitting them? [[Frozen Mallet] is your best friend!" Coding error.
13) Center all images.
14) I'm female.
SirSpankALot's Jungle Skarner Guide
Verdict: This guide was written with good intentions, but as many of the comments say, the author has released the guide within days of the champion coming out, and the guide has recieved a lot of negative feedback due to it.
Possible Improvements: I'd suggest archiving the guide and submitting a new guide with the same content but updated to how you play Skarner today, as opposed to when he first came out. The guide also needs a heavy spell check - there is no excuse for awful spelling mistakes. Take the effort to install a spell check, it's not hard and I detail it in my Guide about Making a Guide.
Constructive Criticism:
1) I don't think you'd need Wriggles on Skarner, it just doesn't fit his build.
2) Your build is VERY expensive.
3) I like the resistances and survivability you get in your build... I don't think the late Rylai's is a good idea though. Yet I think you won't have enough damage if you get it earlier. Skarner is a weird champion :/
4) D: D: D: D: D: D: D: No! Jesus. Skarner is a poor jungler already, and you don't get increased buff duration? D: D: D: D: Dude...
5) You haven't run your guide through a spell check. That annoys and disappoints me. It is virtually one of the ONLY requirements I ask of you. If YOU don't care about the presentation of your guide, WHY SHOULD I GIVE A DAMN. Due to your spelling and grammatical errors, I am not actually going to read any text. I'm tired already, and don't want to have a brain haemorrhage due to spelling errors.
6) Center those large icons.
7) No Skill Explanation = Laziness. It's the truth. It doesn't take long to explain a skill in your own words and enlighten the reader.
8) "http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/item-purchase-planner#&item=108-82-63
These are the items i manage to get every game." Broken code.
9) I think using large icons within paragraphs looks obnoxious and ugly :/
10) ":Well this item gives AP/Armor/Invincibility for ... secs," I think you're missing something here.
11) Create a jungle route map.
12) Warding Section: Did you ask for permission? It's okay to use the image, but I don't think it is okay to copy his paragraphs. Write it in your own words.
13) Your Summary is long because the items/runes/summoners take up a line each when they should just take one line up.
14) I see you got pretty heavily downvoted for releasing this guide so early :/
Verdict: This guide was written with good intentions, but as many of the comments say, the author has released the guide within days of the champion coming out, and the guide has recieved a lot of negative feedback due to it.
Possible Improvements: I'd suggest archiving the guide and submitting a new guide with the same content but updated to how you play Skarner today, as opposed to when he first came out. The guide also needs a heavy spell check - there is no excuse for awful spelling mistakes. Take the effort to install a spell check, it's not hard and I detail it in my Guide about Making a Guide.
Constructive Criticism:
1) I don't think you'd need Wriggles on Skarner, it just doesn't fit his build.
2) Your build is VERY expensive.
3) I like the resistances and survivability you get in your build... I don't think the late Rylai's is a good idea though. Yet I think you won't have enough damage if you get it earlier. Skarner is a weird champion :/
4) D: D: D: D: D: D: D: No! Jesus. Skarner is a poor jungler already, and you don't get increased buff duration? D: D: D: D: Dude...
5) You haven't run your guide through a spell check. That annoys and disappoints me. It is virtually one of the ONLY requirements I ask of you. If YOU don't care about the presentation of your guide, WHY SHOULD I GIVE A DAMN. Due to your spelling and grammatical errors, I am not actually going to read any text. I'm tired already, and don't want to have a brain haemorrhage due to spelling errors.
6) Center those large icons.
7) No Skill Explanation = Laziness. It's the truth. It doesn't take long to explain a skill in your own words and enlighten the reader.
8) "http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/item-purchase-planner#&item=108-82-63
These are the items i manage to get every game." Broken code.
9) I think using large icons within paragraphs looks obnoxious and ugly :/
10) ":Well this item gives AP/Armor/Invincibility for ... secs," I think you're missing something here.
11) Create a jungle route map.
12) Warding Section: Did you ask for permission? It's okay to use the image, but I don't think it is okay to copy his paragraphs. Write it in your own words.
13) Your Summary is long because the items/runes/summoners take up a line each when they should just take one line up.
14) I see you got pretty heavily downvoted for releasing this guide so early :/
Barman500's Skarner Guide
Verdict: I am impressed at how the author has tried to cover every possible aspect of Skarner, however, this coverage is thin and widespread, leaving the guide a little lackiing in the depth it claims it has.
Possible Improvements: The author tries too hard to cater for all gameplay styles of Skarner, and as a result the guide suffers. If the author wishes to keep his guide as a three-pronged resource for Skarner players, then I sincerely suggest that he includes far more content for each style than he has. He also should rearrange the guide as I suggested for more comprehension.
Constructive Criticism:
1) Those individual builds better be described in great detail, because multiple builds not only confuse people but piss them off. All they want to know is HOW DO I BUILD SKARNER?! And you give them three choices... As such, I am only going to review the first build.
2) Flash. Full stop. You already have a speed steroid with Seismic Bastion, no need for Ghost.
3) Boots of Swiftness. Why. Swiftness Quints, my god. To be honest, I was expecting Triforce, FoN and Phantoms to increase that speed. If you're looking to pull someone extremely fast with your ult, you want Youmuu's and Shurelya's. You do not need the other extreme measures, and at least Youmuu's benefits Skarner, as opposed to Boots of Swiftness.
4) GOOD ****ING HANDS OVER PERSEVERANCE.
5) Why wouldn't you grab Archaic Knowledge?
6) Large icons within paragraphs looks bad.
7) Your abilities section is all squished together. Also, try using the float bbcode. Have a look at my guide about making a guide to see what I mean.
8) :/ Your Runes section is really unattractive. I don't quite know how you'd fix it though. Perhaps don't use the [runes] coding.
9) If you're adamant about keeping the different builds, this is my suggestion.
Have ONE section per build, which includes everything for that build.
Laning Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Laning/Farming
Jungle Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Jungling
Roaming Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Roaming
10) Don't list useless summoner spells.
11) Chuck the Zone Control in the Laning Skarner section.
12) Chuck Impale Tactics under the skill in your Skill Explanation section.
Verdict: I am impressed at how the author has tried to cover every possible aspect of Skarner, however, this coverage is thin and widespread, leaving the guide a little lackiing in the depth it claims it has.
Possible Improvements: The author tries too hard to cater for all gameplay styles of Skarner, and as a result the guide suffers. If the author wishes to keep his guide as a three-pronged resource for Skarner players, then I sincerely suggest that he includes far more content for each style than he has. He also should rearrange the guide as I suggested for more comprehension.
Constructive Criticism:
1) Those individual builds better be described in great detail, because multiple builds not only confuse people but piss them off. All they want to know is HOW DO I BUILD SKARNER?! And you give them three choices... As such, I am only going to review the first build.
2) Flash. Full stop. You already have a speed steroid with
Seismic Bastion, no need for Ghost.3) Boots of Swiftness. Why. Swiftness Quints, my god. To be honest, I was expecting Triforce, FoN and Phantoms to increase that speed. If you're looking to pull someone extremely fast with your ult, you want Youmuu's and Shurelya's. You do not need the other extreme measures, and at least Youmuu's benefits Skarner, as opposed to Boots of Swiftness.
4) GOOD ****ING HANDS OVER PERSEVERANCE.
5) Why wouldn't you grab Archaic Knowledge?
6) Large icons within paragraphs looks bad.
7) Your abilities section is all squished together. Also, try using the float bbcode. Have a look at my guide about making a guide to see what I mean.
8) :/ Your Runes section is really unattractive. I don't quite know how you'd fix it though. Perhaps don't use the [runes] coding.
9) If you're adamant about keeping the different builds, this is my suggestion.
Have ONE section per build, which includes everything for that build.
Laning Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Laning/Farming
Jungle Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Jungling
Roaming Skarner:
- Pros/Cons
- Runes
- Masteries
- Summoner Spells
- Items
- Roaming
10) Don't list useless summoner spells.
11) Chuck the Zone Control in the Laning Skarner section.
12) Chuck Impale Tactics under the skill in your Skill Explanation section.
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Palthios' Garen Guide
Verdict: A very extensive, and extremely well-written AD Garen guide. Everything is well explained and lovingly documented.
Possible Improvements: However, this guide consists of walls upon walls of text. The author needs to spend some time making this guide readable to the average citizen who is easily distracted by youtube videos and puppies.
Constructive Criticism:
1) While it's true many people buy multiple Doran's, I would not suggest actually displaying that in your guide. Keep it short and neat. Mention getting extra Doran's in the text itself, but not visually in the Purchase Order.
2) Woooooah. Courage should be gotten way earlier. That extra magic resist and armour...
3) I feel as if you should grab Phage before Infinity Edge for the increased slow, so you KNOW the enemy is going no where when you spin to win.
4) Atma's but hardly any health items. Sure Garen is naturally tanky, but maybe an extra health item in their would be beneficial. Banshee's?
5) Expanded Mind
is very important for hitting level 6 before/at the same time as enemies.
6) Your intro is a little long, but it is well written. However, it is a HUGE wall of text. Add colour, formatting, anything. You need to break it up with visually pleasing relief. You don't want to bore your reader before they even get to the guide itself. Even wiki coding Garen would be fantastic.
7) Don't include champion Lore. If you really want to do it, put it at the very end. Don't delay what the reader wants to read.
8) List alternative runes. List alternative masteries. Combine the two sections, as both are too small to be separate sections. Try using the bbcode for runes and masteries. I detail how to do so in my guide about making a guide.
9) Center those skill icons. Also, too much colour. Highlight the important parts in colour, leave the rest in white. Or at least find softer versions of blue and green. And by softer, for the love of god, I don't mean fluro.
10) Don't list useless summoner spells. Again, center those icons. Again, too much colour.
11) Your Off-Tank Garen section is pretty much not needed. Just include the different items you don't detail elsewhere into the items section.
12) For your laning champion section, try using float coding. Detailed in my guide about writing a guide.
13) Put Solo Top under Laning partners. Put Teamfighting after Early Game and before Mid game.
14) So much walls of text. Please use wikicoding. Please use colour sparingly. Please add images. Do your best to entertain the reader.
Verdict: A very extensive, and extremely well-written AD Garen guide. Everything is well explained and lovingly documented.
Possible Improvements: However, this guide consists of walls upon walls of text. The author needs to spend some time making this guide readable to the average citizen who is easily distracted by youtube videos and puppies.
Constructive Criticism:
1) While it's true many people buy multiple Doran's, I would not suggest actually displaying that in your guide. Keep it short and neat. Mention getting extra Doran's in the text itself, but not visually in the Purchase Order.
2) Woooooah.
Courage should be gotten way earlier. That extra magic resist and armour...3) I feel as if you should grab
Phage before Infinity Edge for the increased slow, so you KNOW the enemy is going no where when you spin to win.4) Atma's but hardly any health items. Sure Garen is naturally tanky, but maybe an extra health item in their would be beneficial. Banshee's?
5)
Expanded Mind
is very important for hitting level 6 before/at the same time as enemies.6) Your intro is a little long, but it is well written. However, it is a HUGE wall of text. Add colour, formatting, anything. You need to break it up with visually pleasing relief. You don't want to bore your reader before they even get to the guide itself. Even wiki coding
Garen would be fantastic.7) Don't include champion Lore. If you really want to do it, put it at the very end. Don't delay what the reader wants to read.
8) List alternative runes. List alternative masteries. Combine the two sections, as both are too small to be separate sections. Try using the bbcode for runes and masteries. I detail how to do so in my guide about making a guide.
9) Center those skill icons. Also, too much colour. Highlight the important parts in colour, leave the rest in white. Or at least find softer versions of blue and green. And by softer, for the love of god, I don't mean fluro.
10) Don't list useless summoner spells. Again, center those icons. Again, too much colour.
11) Your Off-Tank Garen section is pretty much not needed. Just include the different items you don't detail elsewhere into the items section.
12) For your laning champion section, try using float coding. Detailed in my guide about writing a guide.
13) Put Solo Top under Laning partners. Put Teamfighting after Early Game and before Mid game.
14) So much walls of text. Please use wikicoding. Please use colour sparingly. Please add images. Do your best to entertain the reader.
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