jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=jhoijhoi]It's not funny =.= Such a waste of IP, and I never use my Glyphs, Quints, and Seals of Attack Speed =.= ;_;[/quote]

[quote=NicknameMy]Well, the glyphs are for some junglers usefull^^. Quints maybe too.[/quote]

[quote=Searz][quote=jhoijhoi] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rune-tips-what-secondary-and-primary-means-and-more-24255?page=46#lastcomment]Searz's Rune Guide[/url] [color=#008000]Possible Improvements:[/color] I find the guide is a bit dry to read, and a tad non-aesthetically pleasing. This is most likely due to the lack of images to break up the text. Some coding, like Indents, would go really nicely with your ranking system, and the guide could do with some more colour. Using the new embedding system would be great too, to emphasis those generic "Caster, tank, dps" rune selections. Just think about how you could make your guide more fun to read.[/quote] I know Q.Q I just don't know what to change ;( I won't be using the [[[runes=]]] tag on that section tho. I don't wanna make one specific rune page for each class, I want to keep it a little flexible. [quote]1) In your Primary Runes section, you have "Marks: Penetration" - should probably say "Armor Penetration" 2) With regards to your ranking, perhaps consider a different ranking style. What has "S" got to do with being great? I know in each section you've placed them in order, but maybe an easier way of looking at it, like: Basically I was confused with the S and F. Does S stand for high achievement, or something? And in Australia we have no "F" for fail, we have "E". So yeah. Small thing lol. 3) The only other thing I can think of is listing all the runes in terms of the wikicode, so people can hover their mouses over them and SEE why they are placed in each category.[/quote] 1) Nope, it's both MrP and ArP. 2) That was the standard way of ranking for a while(might still be, I dunno). A lot of games used (and still use) S as the best rank and C or F as the worst. 3) That won't work. I use abbreviations because it would take up waaaay too much space if I added all the runes like this: [[Greater Quintessence of Strength]] Please come with any more aesthetic suggestions you might have.[/quote]

[quote=NicknameMy]1) Then write "Armor Penetration and Magic Penetration", so all can understand 2)S means Superior or Superb. F means Failure or False. Well, i can understand it^^. 3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form. Like: [icon=Greater Mark of Desolation]ArP[/quote]

[quote=Searz][quote=NicknameMy] 1) Then write "Armor Penetration and Magic Penetration", so all can understand 3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form. Like: [icon=Greater Mark of Desolation]ArP[/quote] 1) Nope :P 3) That's a good idea. I'll try and see how it looks.[/quote]

[quote=Siveo]First off all, thanks for the review! [quote=Rudmed]1. Ryali's on [[Shen]].....Ryali's on [[Shen]]. Why? You say to chase escaping enemies, but chances are if they are escaping they have low health. Meaning they are out of the fight. Also Shen has only 1 damaging skill, and that is about the only good skill for it. So no, just not find a better item.[/quote] It doesn't only increase [[Vorpal Blade]] but also [[Feint]] and [[Stand United]] because they increase with AP! It also gives you a nice HP boost and that increases your [[Ki Strike]]! So overall this item is a good optional item in my opinion! [quote=Rudmed]2. Pros/cons and all the pre-game stuff that you set up need to go before, your in-game stuff.[/quote] Done now! [quote=Rudmed]3. Center your pictures, or use columns. If you have not viewed jhoijhoi's how to make guides then you need to. It will help you clear up things, and make it more organized.[/quote] Read it, done it! Used a quite big amount of jhoijhoi's template! [quote=Rudmed]4. Double check for minor spelling, grammar issues.[/quote] Ran it again through a spelling and grammar test! I'm sorry, my native language is not English! It's not even my second language! The grammar issues are the hardest ones to find for me so if you can find them, please tell me! [quote=Rudmed]5. Go more in-depth to use your skills. For example instead of mindlessly of [[shadow dash]] into a team, save it for the one causing the most trouble. Or use vorpal blade to mark your foes. You just need more.[/quote] Added a new chapter with Tips and Tricks with this kind of information! I hope you like the adjustments I made, worked quite long on it to make it a little bit more as it should be![/quote]

[quote=Siveo][quote=Searz] [quote=NicknameMy] 1) Then write "Armor Penetration and Magic Penetration", so all can understand 3) You can also insert a little Image before the short form. Like: [icon=Greater Mark of Desolation]ArP[/quote] 1) Nope :P 3) That's a good idea. I'll try and see how it looks. [/quote] 1) You can always make a new chapter where you explain the abbreviations and 'misunderstandings' or something like that![/quote]

[quote=Palthios]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 18 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES Guide For (champion): Garen Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Looking for an expert opinion. I don't want to make the guide too bloated but I'm stumped as to possible improvements. What I'd like you to focus on: The guide. Ive posted more then enough proof that the build works so Im not asking for help on that. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-crit-updated-8-13-11-99504[/quote]

[quote=SirSpankAlot]Summoner |Level : 26 post count: 31 at time of request Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes, I think so Guide for : Skarner why i'd like this to be reviewed: The opinion of a veteran/experienced person , to be sure that my guide is good enough to compete with others. what i'd like you to focus on: My writing style and i also want a review on how effective the guide is. guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungling-skarner-for-men-112315[/quote]

[quote=Searz]Updated my guide! Mostly small aesthetic changes, but do check it out :)[/quote]