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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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So let me get this strait... Girls actually exist on the internet?

lol Seriously though, my bad.
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I'm just confused as to how anyone could think a name such as JoyJoy could be a boy's name :/
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Well, same question for Taric^^ xD
He is gonna kill you!!!
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Tarique, she eez ze essense of ze joy.

Tarique, by HUGO.


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Can you check out my guides please?
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LoL Guides wrote:

Can you check out my guides please?


Again: Hmmmmm, Hmmmmmmmmmm...

Read first page...
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I read your name as j-hoi j-hoi...

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jhoijhoi wrote:

I'm just confused as to how anyone could think a name such as JoyJoy could be a boy's name :/


It's just standard to say him, he, ... since there aren't that much girls on forums for games! And certainly not that active ones!
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jhoijhoi wrote:

Symphunny's Jungle Cho'Gath Guide
Verdict: This isn't really a Jungle Cho Guide, as it doesn't detail a jungle route, and the rune selection is a tad weird. But the author has spent time trying to make the guide visually pleasing.
Possible Improvements: The author needs to work on the aesthetics of the guide and there are some spelling and grammatical errors. The item build and situational items are standard for Cho'Gath, and the author has the right mindset about warding and ganking, but the guide lacks actual depth.

Constructive Criticism:

1) LOL at your tags :3

2) :/ For jungle Cho, I would have suggested different runes like Glyphs of Focus (I wouldn't suggest the Quints of Swiftness or the Glyphs of Shielding).

3) Rupture > Feral Scream

4) Run your guide through a spell check. There are a lot of errors.

5) Your screenshots are a tad bad... Cut them down to the necessary scores, don't have random scores in it. Also, try not to list defeats unless your scores are actually very good.

I'd suggest turning Comment to Vote on.

jhoijhoi~
(took me a hella long time to find Dx)
can you please edit the info under the cho'gath section on the first pg? :3 i editted my guide to be more in-depth and also added more details on the jungling so itd be more of a jungling guide. :P and i also spent from time to time to improve and review my build, hope its better now.


Special thanks to Brynollf, -FanArt-, Xiaowiriamu (x3), Spooon, reppinFTC and jhoijhoi for making the awesome sigs :P
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Summoner Level:26
Post Count (at time of request):100
Spell & Grammar check completed: Yes.
Guide For (champion): Skarner, The Crystal Vanguard
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want the opinion of a very experienced guidewriter /veteran
What I'd like you to focus on: The guide itself , The build(runes/items/masteries) and my writing style.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sirspankalots-way-of-spanking-with-skarner-jungle-112315
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner

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