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English assignment about some black guy making a presentation about american black people to an english university - you're his assistant writing a manuscript, i'd like some help with the grammar and stuff like that since i think a lot of it might be wrong. The level is high-school(athink)
Thank you in advance to anyone who'd like to help.
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Thank you in advance to anyone who'd like to help.

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"Carrying"-guide | My reviewservice

"Carrying"-guide | My reviewservice
Both links don't work. The first one, I have to have permission to access it. The second one, I have to log into "schoology" (which I obviously can't do).
Instead of giving external links, I think it'd be best to post two spoilers.
1) The task.
2) What you've done so far
Spoilers are great :) And no need for people to go link hopping.
I do like the idea of the thread though! Here's my own problem:
TASK
What I've done so far
Instead of giving external links, I think it'd be best to post two spoilers.
1) The task.
2) What you've done so far
Spoilers are great :) And no need for people to go link hopping.
I do like the idea of the thread though! Here's my own problem:


jhoi i have a question, what do the things like CfD and H&W mean? i know tech and env are obvious but the others
same with the ES# IC# SP# LS#
i dunno much about lesson plans but having a key for what those mean might help others
same with the ES# IC# SP# LS#
i dunno much about lesson plans but having a key for what those mean might help others

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Oh yup, great question Dill. Well, ES, SP etc are just the subject codes that stand for the subject/focus area - such as ES for Earth & Space. So for Science21, which is the discipline I'll be teaching, there are about 5 main subject codes and several broken down objectives. So you see things like "EN1 > xxx" and "EN2 > xxx", which are covering different bases.
As for the other acronyms, Science21 runs on the basis/backing/priorities of Technology, Environment, Catalyst for Discovery and Health & Wellbeing.
I don't want to link-drop, but if you're interested at all, this is the syllabus: http://www.qsa.qld.edu.au/downloads/senior/snr_science21_10_syll.pdf
As for the other acronyms, Science21 runs on the basis/backing/priorities of Technology, Environment, Catalyst for Discovery and Health & Wellbeing.
I don't want to link-drop, but if you're interested at all, this is the syllabus: http://www.qsa.qld.edu.au/downloads/senior/snr_science21_10_syll.pdf
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Let's try to help instead:
jhoijhoi:
For the first week you might want to add social and economy riot.
Just think how people react when they hear that there town is gone get hit by a tornado. Everyone would run crazy to buy stuff like food and water.
I know some words of week 2-6 but I would add the fact that you need to use the microorganisms to "form" your new world therefor you would need research while looking for a place if you can it the way you need it to be with the technology you have.
In the case of Mars there are thoughts about smacking the fist settlements in biospheres and trying to cultivate highly resistive plants outside ( very unrealistic but the US has money to burn)
Another option are bacteria . Cyanobacteria to be exact. They take less space then any other oxygen producing organism and can be used to produce large amounts of O2 over a the course of time. This is also being toyed with as oxygen source for long space travels.
Other stuff to remember when doing a settlement on mars include:
Water: The only visible source atm are polar caps. Rising the temperature of the planet ( along side with giving it an earth like atmosphere) is a very popular scenario but kind of unrealistic because the gravity of mares might not be big enough to hold an atmosphere like the earth has.
The other hope is that water is all over the planted just frozen under the surface invisible as it is to deep for the rovers to dig.
Mars storms: Those things are scary and you have to plane the location of your settlements so you don't get blowen away.
Earth Mars coordination: You can't just set of and send all people at once. There has to be a "gray" phase after the first people landed and you start to make you move. The travel to the mars can vary in time from 8 months to way to long. So you need to coordination when stuff goes over and when you send the people etc.
If you need pictures of the Mars you might want to check out both opportunity(still rolling around there) and Spirit( died 2010) they made some very impressive pictures of Mars.
Hope this helps.
Let's try to help instead:
jhoijhoi:
For the first week you might want to add social and economy riot.
Just think how people react when they hear that there town is gone get hit by a tornado. Everyone would run crazy to buy stuff like food and water.
I know some words of week 2-6 but I would add the fact that you need to use the microorganisms to "form" your new world therefor you would need research while looking for a place if you can it the way you need it to be with the technology you have.
In the case of Mars there are thoughts about smacking the fist settlements in biospheres and trying to cultivate highly resistive plants outside ( very unrealistic but the US has money to burn)
Another option are bacteria . Cyanobacteria to be exact. They take less space then any other oxygen producing organism and can be used to produce large amounts of O2 over a the course of time. This is also being toyed with as oxygen source for long space travels.
Other stuff to remember when doing a settlement on mars include:
Water: The only visible source atm are polar caps. Rising the temperature of the planet ( along side with giving it an earth like atmosphere) is a very popular scenario but kind of unrealistic because the gravity of mares might not be big enough to hold an atmosphere like the earth has.
The other hope is that water is all over the planted just frozen under the surface invisible as it is to deep for the rovers to dig.
Mars storms: Those things are scary and you have to plane the location of your settlements so you don't get blowen away.
Earth Mars coordination: You can't just set of and send all people at once. There has to be a "gray" phase after the first people landed and you start to make you move. The travel to the mars can vary in time from 8 months to way to long. So you need to coordination when stuff goes over and when you send the people etc.
If you need pictures of the Mars you might want to check out both opportunity(still rolling around there) and Spirit( died 2010) they made some very impressive pictures of Mars.
Hope this helps.

Great ideas, Laron! Thanks for that :) I'll try to incorporate them into my lesson plans. I particularly like the micro-organism ideas. I was going to run with something similar, but hadn't done any research.
When I'm finished the assignment, I'll post it here, so you can see your ideas in play :)
Edit: I sort of wanted to put this in a theme, where the Earth is actually dying or something and people HAD to leave. But realistically, Mars would have to be prepared for years before it could house any sort of substantial population.
When I'm finished the assignment, I'll post it here, so you can see your ideas in play :)
Edit: I sort of wanted to put this in a theme, where the Earth is actually dying or something and people HAD to leave. But realistically, Mars would have to be prepared for years before it could house any sort of substantial population.
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As an example english is my 2nd language, therefore i'm not as good at english as an english person with english as their mothertongue would be.
This would probably mainly be used for non-english speakers to get help from english speakers. But i guess it could be used efficiently for maths, or if anyone attends a business school i'd be happy to help out with that since i'm pretty beast at financial classes.
This is how it goes:
Upload the document to google docs and paste a link, write what level of education it is for also write specifically what you need help with ---->>> hope for someone to help ya.