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Creator: Khazem February 1, 2012 4:16pm
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Blowfeld's jungle Yorick guide
Verdict: I'm personally not a fan of jungle Yorick and I'm not convinced it's actually viable, but aside from that the guide actually looks good and the build makes sense and looks perfectly viable. The guide is a good reference if you want to base a teamcomp around Yorick and already have 2 solo laners.
Possible Improvements: The layout in some sections can be improved with perhaps a different choice of colors. Also needs a section about teamfighting with Yorick.
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Summoner name: IceCreamy
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Janna
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Blabla, same reasons as for the other reviews.
What would you like me to focus on: Build mostly, I am still testing the new Locket and Zeke's Herald out and I'd like to have some more opinions on that. I am also a bit doubtful if I give enough info...
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075

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Summoner name: D3lus1ons
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Talon
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Well, it's my first attempt at a guide ever, and I would like to know what I need to do to improve.
What would you like me to focus on: What am I lacking in the guide?
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ranked-talon-177594

Thank you very much! :D
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IceCreamy's Janna guide
Verdict: Very in-depth guide with a lot of useful tips, tricks and insight on how to play Janna. I do however think the actual build needs some work.
Possible Improvements: The build needs some work, as well as the addition of Vision Wards and some explanation about brush control and Oracle's Elixir
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Summoner name: Telloth
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Ziggs
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I'd like some feedback as I haven't got much so far due to accidentlally publishing my guide before Ziggs was added to the database, so no one really saw it :/
What would you like me to focus on: Mainly the guide, as I don't know if you have played or seen Ziggs a lot yet. If you have then great, focus on the build as well :)
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ziggs-mr-bombastic-178485

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Check out my guides- Ziggs: Mr Bombastic
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D3lus1ons Talon guide
Verdict: Decent Talon guide. There is enough information and everything is well explained. I have a few issues with the actual build though.
Possible Improvements: The build definitely needs some work, besides that you could probably improve the layout with different color choices, the use of columns for certain sections and centering your images and videos.
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Telloth's Ziggs guide
Verdict: The guide looks like it would work. Besides a couple of weird choices here and there I think it has potential.
Possible Improvements: A couple of little things here and there I mentioned. Just a few small issues with the runes/masteries/item build.
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Summoner name: Trivsal
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Wukong
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I see way too many people play Wukong glass cannon, and I feel that Wukong is not as well suited for this, and is much better as a bruiser.
[/u]What would you like me to focus on: I would like to know what could use more detail, as I feel that I could make this guide a little more in depth and detailed than it currently is.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wuju-monkey-178752
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Summoner Name: RCIX
Summoner Level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Talon
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: Two reasons actually.
1. I see a ton of people building a lot of bad items on Talon, and I wanted to raise awareness on why some of those items are bad
2. I got a grand whopping total of 1 vote and like 700 views, but guides submitted after mine got more =(
What you would like me to focus on: The item build options primarily, rune feedback would be nice too.
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-renegades-guide-to-talon-172874


NOTE: I haven't finished my juking section, mainly because of bad luck on my part regarding having LoLRecorder on hand for my talon games =/ The rest is roughly complete though.

I also do recommend a philo, but unlike other guides I also recommend and explain why a Shurelya's is a good choice for Talon. :)
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Summoner name: IceCreamy
Summoner level: 30
What champion is the guide about: Soraka
Why do you want this guide to be reviewed: I'd like to have your opinion on my guide, and hopefully it will improve my guide even more :)
What would you like me to focus on: I am doubting about the build, I like it the way it is but perhaps there are things that can be done better. You could also look at the new Oracles and Vision Wards section :D
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/auraka-supporting-like-a-star-174996

I also worked on the other guides you reviewed, so I would appreciate it if you could take a look at those again as well :)

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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