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[quote=Doomedhalo2]Hey, If you would be kind enough to check out my Ezreal guide.... Wondering what I can improve on and stuff like that. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ad-ezreal-winning-your-bot-lane-232633 Thanks again![/quote]

[quote=Anastasios]You aren't allowed to advertise your build in the forums.[/quote]

[quote=tehAsian]What are you talking about Anastasios? He's allowed to do that in this thread >.>[/quote]

[quote=Anastasios]Durrr brainfart I thought this was a new thread[/quote]

[quote=tehAsian][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malzahar-the-unstoppable-voidmaster-248773]Nilth's Malzahar Guide[/url] [spoiler] [b]Cheat Sheet[/b] ehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. [[meki pendant]] start is a huge no. Tear rush is also a big no. Not maxing a skill at 9 (aka [[malefic visions]]) is also a big no. Also, your build is glass cannon. No [[summoner's wrath]] and [[mental force]] are also a big no, especially when you're taking [[ignite]]. I guess you can spec into the utility tree. [[meki pendant]]: No mobility. With the mobility creep, ganking junglers are more and more common, not starting boots on a champion with no escapes gives you a neon sign that says "camp me." [[tear of the goddess]]: Ok, so it gives mana and regen. What else? By buying Tear (before boots too!) you're crippling your early game. Not maxing a skill at 9: If you maxed E at 9, you can instaclear waves with one E. Meaning Tear is useless. But you don't have it maxed at 9, instead you choose to level up Q evenly? [b]Introduction[/b] [quote]With [[Nether Grasp]] and [[Null Zone]] [[Malzahar]] can easily win 1v1-fights. [[Malzahar]]'s [[Malefic Visions]] make it very easy to farm minions. So he is predestined for midlaning.[/quote] Being able to win 1v1s and easily farming minions doesn't automatically make you a mid laner. [b]Pros and Cons[/b] [quote]- Due the missing escape spell [[Malzahar]] doesn't have a gapcloser too[/quote] An escape spell doesn't always have to be a gap closer. See, [[light binding]], [[buster shot]], etc. [quote]+ High burst with Nether Grasp and Null Zone [/quote] Damage over time, not burst. [[leblanc]] is burst. AP [[tristana]] is burst. [[malzahar]] is not burst. [b]Runes[/b] Other options? [b]Summoner Spells[/b] [[teleport]] [quote]you will always be faster (!) in lane then your opponent.[/quote] [[shen]]. [[pantheon]] mid. Not always true. Also, cast time is 4 seconds. [b]Skills[/b] So...you give tips/tricks on the Voidlings, but not on other spells? [b]Skill Sequence[/b] No explanation on weird and suboptimal skill sequence? What makes it better than R > E > Q > W? [b]Items[/b] [[tear of the goddess]] So let me get this straight. You buy Tear so you get the bonus off [[strength of spirit]]? And so you can spam spells? imho...really stupid reasons. [[sorcerer's shoes]] [quote]These shoes are good because they help your [[Malefic Visions]] at lasthitting.[/quote] Not the reason AP Mids buy mpen boots, and I'm sure the minions have like 10 MR until waaaayyy later in the game. [[hextech revolver]] [quote]You gain 15% spellvamp, wich can save you hard.[/quote] 12%. And because you either have DoT or AoE abilities without your ultimate it won't really save you. [[void staff]] [quote]or if there is an [[Soraka]] in the enemy team. [/quote] You instantly buy [[void staff]] if they have a [[soraka]]. K. [[abyssal scepter]] [quote]Well this item is very nice if you play against a [[Diana]] or against [[Fizz]]. Both have to be near to you and they do magical damage. So why shouldn't we get an item wich increase our MR, AP and an add aura wich decreases their MR?[/quote] So you only buy this if they have melee AP Assassins? You don't buy it against [[leblanc]]? [[kassadin]]? People who can stomp you with high magic damage? [b]No mid or late game section.[/b] [b]Teamfight[/b] The video doesn't teach you how to teamfight as [[malzahar]], it's teamfighting tips in general. It doesn't tell you how to position properly (as [[malzahar]]), who to combo, where to lay down [[null zone]], etc. Guide could use a lot of work. No vote.[/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Viola Orpheus]Hello, I would really appreciate a detailed feedback on my guide. [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-the-marvelous-musician-236918]Sona - The Marvelous Musician[/url] Please, go all out if you feel like you need to. I could use a harsh review to knock me out of my trance that my guide might be viable somehow (Which I'm feeling it isn't).[/quote]

[quote=tehAsian][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-classy-but-short-teemo-guide-249178]MrCuddowls' Teemo Guide[/url] >:l [spoiler] [b]Cheat Sheet[/b] Zerkers are bad for top lane. [[wit's end]] first is also bad as most of the top laners are AD Bruisers. Maw is pretty terrible as you're a squishy, regardless of your build. You shouldn't be trying to lose health. BT is just a bad choice on [[teemo]], as he has no AD scaling, and you don't build any other items that go well with it. Armor pen marks are bad, hybrid pen or mpen, or flat AD is better. Most of your damage is magical and doesn't benefit off armor pen at all. [[blinding dart]] at 4 is a big no, you need it at 2 to win trades. You also have zero items that give armor until [[guardian angel]]. [b]Introduction[/b] [quote]Welcome to my 500000th Teemo guide. I have finally made a good teemo guide after numerous failed ones I have made in the past. Teemo is the best champion in the game. He is classy and small and puts down really really annoying mushrooms and just annoys the living hell out of the other team. He can do over 2 attacks per second and have so much damage it will give Phreak ******s because he likes to masturbate to champions who deal... [/quote] Not 'good' or 'numerous failed attempts'. With your build it doesn't have over 2 attacks per second, and [[teemo]] does mediocre damage. [b]Pros and Cons[/b] [quote]-Useless if he doesn't get fed[/quote] You mean if he doesn't crush lane. And [[teemo]] gets far from useless. [b]Masteries[/b] 9/21/0? [b]Runes[/b] Suboptimal marks and other options? [b]Items[/b] Please don't start with [[doran's blade]]. [quote]If you want to build Frozen Mallet first get this. Its a nice boost of survivabilty and the slow proc can be very scary on a Teemo. This is the most recommended and common route for building Teemo. The Phage it's self helps Teemo A LOT in fights. This is what I recommend you get at the start unless you need that armor REALLY REALLY bad. [/quote] WHY IS PHAGE GOOD?!?!?! [b]Maw and BT[/b] bad. Teemo doesn't scale with AD at all, ESPECIALLY when you don't have any attack speed. [b]Situational Items[/b] EXPLANATIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Too short, more of a build than a guide. No vote.[/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=tehAsian]I'll get to the Ez and Sona guide later.[/quote]

[quote=pepsiM4A1]Could you review my [[fiora]] guide too? Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fiora-drawing-pretty-pictures-238485 I try to finish those match-ups as fast as possible but it is hard to explain how to counter all solo top champions...[/quote]

[quote=Nilth]I knew there were some big mistakes or things wich aren't good explained. You helped me to find 'em out and now I can make my guide way better^^ Thank you! :D[/quote]