jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=gabpin]Summoner Level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 120 Spell & Grammar check completed: YES ( I corrected at least 5 times so if there is still mistakes...I will be mad at me XD) Guide For (champion): Gangplank Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because it is f2p week for gp and I want my build to get some interest from people :D What I'd like you to focus on: The content ( Would be nice if you could tell me things I should add, I'm out of ideas :p) Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/what-this-pirate-one-shoted-me-98960[/quote]

[quote=Siveo][quote=jhoijhoi] And Siveo: I'll have a look at your guide again. [/quote] Thanks, I hope you like the adjustments and my fast reaction ;)[/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi]Siveo: Ooh, I love the float coding you decided to use. I didn't want to ask you to do it, as the previous set up was fine, but it does look absolutely sexy now :P Merging Abilities and Skill Sequence was a good idea, flows much better now. And the other merging that you implemented looks nice too, huh. See, I know what I'm talking about, lol. Centring those videos looks so much neater now, huh? Absolutely fantastic guide, definitely, definitely better written and far more aesthetically pleasing than the top [[shen]] guides. Thus I have no choice but to +[color=#00ff00]rec[/color] your guide ^^ A few additions could be: - to add in a screen shot of the walls Shen can [[shadow dash]] over - an alternative mastery tree set-up (not entirely necessary) - at the end of your "Items" section, you could include some possibly finished builds that demonstrate what to get in certain situations (like in my Ashe and Vayne guides); again, not necessary, but would be nice for quick reference - a jungle section, for Jungle Shen. It's not a common occurrence, but sometimes Shen is more useful in the jungle instead of solo top, or filling the "support" role bottom lane with an AD carry - always use as much BBCode/wiki code as possible, so "And don't forget to use Feint in battle. Since it's the shield doesn't absorb as much as AP Shen" should include [[feint]] and [[shen]] ^^ - you could put the credits in list format, so they look a little nicer, and your summary looks a tad more structured And here ^^ Hope you like it: [center][IMG]http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/shenbannersiveo.png[/IMG][/quote]

[quote=Siveo][quote=jhoijhoi] Siveo: Ooh, I love the float coding you decided to use. I didn't want to ask you to do it, as the previous set up was fine, but it does look absolutely sexy now :P Merging Abilities and Skill Sequence was a good idea, flows much better now. And the other merging that you implemented looks nice too, huh. See, I know what I'm talking about, lol. Centring those videos looks so much neater now, huh? Absolutely fantastic guide, definitely, definitely better written and far more aesthetically pleasing than the top [[shen]] guides. Thus I have no choice but to +[color=#00ff00]rec[/color] your guide ^^ A few additions could be: - to add in a screen shot of the walls Shen can [[shadow dash]] over - an alternative mastery tree set-up (not entirely necessary) - at the end of your "Items" section, you could include some possibly finished builds that demonstrate what to get in certain situations (like in my Ashe and Vayne guides); again, not necessary, but would be nice for quick reference - a jungle section, for Jungle Shen. It's not a common occurrence, but sometimes Shen is more useful in the jungle instead of solo top, or filling the "support" role bottom lane with an AD carry - always use as much BBCode/wiki code as possible, so "And don't forget to use Feint in battle. Since it's the shield doesn't absorb as much as AP Shen" should include [[feint]] and [[shen]] ^^ - you could put the credits in list format, so they look a little nicer, and your summary looks a tad more structured And here ^^ Hope you like it: [center][IMG]http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/shenbannersiveo.png[/IMG] [/quote] Omggggggg ... That sig is soo niceee :O Thanks a lot! You rule! Hmmm about the few additions: I'll start working on them when I find some time to do it and test out the things you just pointed out like the walls! Only thing: Jungle section, I don't know about that. I've already had someone who asked me that but I don't think I'm going to do it since I build mine tank/supportive and I've never jungled with Shen. But I will keep working on it so ... Thanks a lot for everything![/quote]

[quote=theBMB]don't worry jhoi i fixed it :D, sorry for any stress also, I didn't see the recommendation until now, musta taken a bit for the server to update many thanks edit: all better[/quote]

[quote=VKZ95]thanks so much for the feedback jhoijhoi, my images are centered now and im thinking of changing my guide format into colums[/quote]

[quote=Siveo][quote=theBMB] @siveo can you delete your post so people don't see my original quote? [/quote] That will cost you something! Boehoehoe, now I will have -1 post ... How sad. No worries, deleted it.[/quote]

[quote=Apotheosis]Yo Jhoi, it's been sometime since I've last asked you to check out my guide, but I need a second opinion again for all the new work that's been done to it. I don't care how long it takes and, if possible, I ask that you check it out again and tell me what you think. Thanks![/quote]

[quote=gabpin]hey jhoi, did you get my review request? just wondering :P[/quote]

[quote=theBMB]^translation: hey jhoi, did you get my review request? just wondering :P answer: give it time, she's busy[/quote]