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Guide for Fiddlesticks
Why I'd like to see this reviewed: your opinion about it.
Why I'd like to see this reviewed: Anything so i can make it better.

Guide link http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fiddle-the-piddle-by-mikk-124492
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Hey jhoijhoi, can I repost my guide on cho'gath that I made like 2 months ago and had improved it ever since? I would like to see how else can I improve my guide.


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Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 295
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Renekton
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Just created it. Would like some feedback.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything! Format, layout, build, etc!
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fednekton-interior-crocodile-alligator-125283
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Symphunny wrote:

Hey jhoijhoi, can I repost my guide on cho'gath that I made like 2 months ago and had improved it ever since? I would like to see how else can I improve my guide.

You're allowed to request another review, but do it in the right format.
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Guide For (champion): Cho'Gath
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I am looking for further possible improvements as well as tips to organization.
What I'd like you to focus on: jungle section, i need help in really improving it
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/junglin-cho-holy-shyt-dont-eat-me-revising-soon-63383


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Guide for: Twisted Fate
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: I didn't have my last guide reviewed because it got a lot of exposure so I didn't worry too much about it, but this one has gotten so few votes. I didn't work very hard on it when it first came out but I switched around the build a lot and I rewrote the description to be more detailed, so now I've put a lot more effort into it and I'd like to see what touch-ups I can do to make it perfect.
guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/twisted-fate-card-games-119009
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Meinhardd wrote:

Guide for Fiddlesticks
Why I'd like to see this reviewed: your opinion about it.
Why I'd like to see this reviewed: Anything so i can make it better.

Guide link http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fiddle-the-piddle-by-mikk-124492

1. You don't fulfill jhoi's 100 post minimum, so your guide will probably not be reviewed.
2. You didn't post your request in the correct format.
3. You definitely have not done a spelling and grammar check.

Just a heads-up.
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jhoijhoi wrote:

If you are LUCKY, your guide will be reviewed by other members, such as: Searz, da_Neo, Rudmed, Bloofyre, Bryun, and Nighthawk. They drop in from time to time to help with my workload. <3

I don't want to come off as a total jackass, but I'd appreciate being mentioned here as well. I often drop by this thread to review some of the guides at the back of the line.

;)
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My Renekton guide is so comment-less. T.T
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Jhoi, I wanted to know if I could re-sumbit my Nidalee guide, I archived the other one and am in the process of remaking it.
Nidalee - Olympic Gold Medalist Guide <-- Recently Updated
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