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Took me awhile, but I finally meet all the requirements. XD
Summoner level: 30
Post count:102 (in forums it says i only have 94, you can check profile to see though)
Spell check: YES
Guide for: Xin Zhao
Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a while I think I could still use some improvement. Also, it's very hard to get votes without a vet reviewing it.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement.
Guide link:Click this or on my signature.

edit: I comment on your guide awhile back. Does that count, or will I have to comment again?
Xin Guide
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Guide For (champion): Lux, Caitlyn, Janna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to know what other people think about it, and your topic caught my eye :P
What I'd like you to focus on: What you think about the build, the explanation and the reasoning. Also I really need some better titles :P
Guide Link:

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lux-the-full-ap-build-113843
http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-ad-for-the-win-113938
http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075

Or... do you want me to make 3 posts? (A)

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ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

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Hey, jhoijhoi. I'd like to ask you to review another guide I just wrote. It's pretty exotic as it is about a jungling Cassiopeia.

Summoner level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 117 (counting this post as well)
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (still trying to find some mistakes, will have found them tomorrow)
Guide For (champion): Cassiopeia
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It is very exotic. Jungling with Cassiopeia. I'd like to hear your opinion.
What I'd like you to focus on: Please focus on anything that's important for you.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529
Please notice: If you just commented my post or updated your guide please let me know - by writing an PN - to get new feedback / a new vote. I can't have an eye on all the guides I'm commenting.
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Hey, jhoijhoi! I'd love it if you checked out my Lux guide in my sig. Many many many people aren't a fan of the build, but it works well for me and others who use it so works for me lol.

I've left a comment on your Ashe guide a veeeeery long time ago :P

Summoner level: 30
Post count:850
Spell check: YES
Guide for: Lux
Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a very long time, and it didn't really get any attention unlike my previous Galio guide which I took down. I'd love some feedback.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement, although I'd mostly like to add some new sections.


I make sigs, PM me if you want one :D (Thanks for the Nidalee sig, The_Nameless_Bard!)
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Responding to the review to my guide on Cassiopeia...though, I technically don't meet your requirements, since you reviewed before you had some of those specific requirements.

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/cassiopeia-snake-in-the-bush-101074
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Summoner level: 30
Post count: 890
Spell check: Yes.
Guide for: Alistar
Why I'd like this reviewed: You wanted a rework, you got one. I've revamped most of the formatting and completely rewritten a lot of the sections. I also added a third high-damage AP build.
What I'd like you to focus on: Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. Laning Phase and Team Fights sections are more or less the same, so you can skip those if you want.

Click the awesome stamp in the sig ;)
Thanks to The_Nameless_Bard for the sig!
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Chippysz wrote:

Post Count (at time of request): 7

Read the OP before you post. Jhoi has a 100 post limit. She reserves the right to ignore your request.
Thanks to The_Nameless_Bard for the sig!
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Post Count: 111
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES
Guide For (champion): Riven
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I'd like some constructive criticism from a guide pro;
What I'd like you to focus on: structure& layout, grammar mistakes WORD did not find;
Guide Link: This is where your cursor likes to be left clicked
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Summoner level: 30
Post count: 946
Spell check: Yes.
Guide for: Veigar
Why I'd like this reviewed: I just released it. Took me a while due to an influx of schoolwork, but it's finished now. Give it a run-through and let me know what you think.
What I'd like you to focus on: Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. This guide is a tad bit shorter (due to a lack of multiple builds or a jungle section), so I'm open to more ideas of chapters to add.


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