jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=Calibern]Took me awhile, but I finally meet all the requirements. XD Summoner level: 30 Post count:102 (in forums it says i only have 94, you can check profile to see though) Spell check: YES Guide for: [[Xin Zhao]] Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a while I think I could still use some improvement. Also, it's very hard to get votes without a vet reviewing it. What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement. Guide link:[url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/xin-zhao-the-bane-of-squishies-97878]Click this or on my signature.[/url] edit: I comment on your guide awhile back. Does that count, or will I have to comment again?[/quote]

[quote=IceCreamy]Guide For (champion): Lux, Caitlyn, Janna Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because I want to know what other people think about it, and your topic caught my eye :P What I'd like you to focus on: What you think about the build, the explanation and the reasoning. Also I really need some better titles :P Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lux-the-full-ap-build-113843 http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/caitlyn-ad-for-the-win-113938 http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075 Or... do you want me to make 3 posts? (A)[/quote]

[quote=Ssyrak]Hey, jhoijhoi. I'd like to ask you to review another guide I just wrote. It's pretty exotic as it is about a jungling Cassiopeia. Summoner level: 30 Post Count (at time of request): 117 (counting this post as well) Spell & Grammar check completed: YES (still trying to find some mistakes, will have found them tomorrow) Guide For (champion): Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It is very exotic. Jungling with Cassiopeia. I'd like to hear your opinion. What I'd like you to focus on: Please focus on anything that's important for you. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529[/quote]

[quote=Lazukin]Hey, jhoijhoi! I'd love it if you checked out my Lux guide in my sig. Many many many people aren't a fan of the build, but it works well for me and others who use it so works for me lol. I've left a comment on your Ashe guide a veeeeery long time ago :P Summoner level: 30 Post count:850 Spell check: YES Guide for: Lux Why I'd like this reviewed: I worked on it for a very long time, and it didn't really get any attention unlike my previous Galio guide which I took down. I'd love some feedback. What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think could use improvement, although I'd mostly like to add some new sections.[/quote]

[quote=FiniteParadox]Responding to the review to my guide on Cassiopeia...though, I technically don't meet your requirements, since you reviewed before you had some of those specific requirements. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/cassiopeia-snake-in-the-bush-101074[/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard][color=#0080ff]Summoner level:[/color] 30 [color=#0080ff]Post count:[/color] 890 [color=#0080ff]Spell check:[/color] Yes. [color=#0080ff]Guide for:[/color] [[Alistar]] [color=#0080ff]Why I'd like this reviewed:[/color] You wanted a rework, you got one. I've revamped most of the formatting and completely rewritten a lot of the sections. I also added a third high-damage AP build. [color=#0080ff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. Laning Phase and Team Fights sections are more or less the same, so you can skip those if you want. Click the awesome stamp in the sig ;)[/quote]

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[quote=PsiGuard][quote=Chippysz] Post Count (at time of request): 7 [/quote] Read the OP before you post. Jhoi has a 100 post limit. She reserves the right to ignore your request.[/quote]

[quote=Blowfeld][color=#00ffff]Summoner Level:[/color] 30 [color=#00ffff]Post Count:[/color] 111 [color=#00ffff]Spell & Grammar check completed:[/color] YES [color=#00ffff]Guide For (champion):[/color] Riven [color=#00ffff]Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:[/color] Because I'd like some constructive criticism from a guide pro; [color=#00ffff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] structure& layout, grammar mistakes WORD did not find; [color=#00ffff]Guide Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-things-get-comprehensive-at-twisted-treeline-132643]This is where your cursor likes to be left clicked[/url][/quote]

[quote=PsiGuard][color=#0080ff]Summoner level:[/color] 30 [color=#0080ff]Post count:[/color] 946 [color=#0080ff]Spell check:[/color] Yes. [color=#0080ff]Guide for:[/color] [[Veigar]] [color=#0080ff]Why I'd like this reviewed:[/color] I just released it. Took me a while due to an influx of schoolwork, but it's finished now. Give it a run-through and let me know what you think. [color=#0080ff]What I'd like you to focus on:[/color] Any mistakes I've made, or formatting suggestions if anything comes to mind. This guide is a tad bit shorter (due to a lack of multiple builds or a jungle section), so I'm open to more ideas of chapters to add. [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/veigar-a-very-vicious-villain-131275] WHO'S GOT ALLITERATION NOW?![/url][/quote]