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Creator: jhoijhoi June 29, 2011 5:44pm
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Summoner Level: 30
Post Count (at time of request): 120
Spell & Grammar check completed: YES ( I corrected at least 5 times so if there is still mistakes...I will be mad at me XD)
Guide For (champion): Gangplank
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because it is f2p week for gp and I want my build to get some interest from people :D
What I'd like you to focus on: The content ( Would be nice if you could tell me things I should add, I'm out of ideas :p)
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/what-this-pirate-one-shoted-me-98960
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jhoijhoi wrote:

And Siveo: I'll have a look at your guide again.


Thanks, I hope you like the adjustments and my fast reaction ;)
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Siveo: Ooh, I love the float coding you decided to use. I didn't want to ask you to do it, as the previous set up was fine, but it does look absolutely sexy now :P

Merging Abilities and Skill Sequence was a good idea, flows much better now. And the other merging that you implemented looks nice too, huh. See, I know what I'm talking about, lol.

Centring those videos looks so much neater now, huh?

Absolutely fantastic guide, definitely, definitely better written and far more aesthetically pleasing than the top Shen guides.

Thus I have no choice but to +rec your guide ^^

A few additions could be:
- to add in a screen shot of the walls Shen can Shadow Dash over
- an alternative mastery tree set-up (not entirely necessary)
- at the end of your "Items" section, you could include some possibly finished builds that demonstrate what to get in certain situations (like in my Ashe and Vayne guides); again, not necessary, but would be nice for quick reference
- a jungle section, for Jungle Shen. It's not a common occurrence, but sometimes Shen is more useful in the jungle instead of solo top, or filling the "support" role bottom lane with an AD carry
- always use as much BBCode/wiki code as possible, so "And don't forget to use Feint in battle. Since it's the shield doesn't absorb as much as AP Shen" should include Feint and Shen ^^
- you could put the credits in list format, so they look a little nicer, and your summary looks a tad more structured

And here ^^

Hope you like it:

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jhoijhoi wrote:

Siveo: Ooh, I love the float coding you decided to use. I didn't want to ask you to do it, as the previous set up was fine, but it does look absolutely sexy now :P

Merging Abilities and Skill Sequence was a good idea, flows much better now. And the other merging that you implemented looks nice too, huh. See, I know what I'm talking about, lol.

Centring those videos looks so much neater now, huh?

Absolutely fantastic guide, definitely, definitely better written and far more aesthetically pleasing than the top Shen guides.

Thus I have no choice but to +rec your guide ^^

A few additions could be:
- to add in a screen shot of the walls Shen can Shadow Dash over
- an alternative mastery tree set-up (not entirely necessary)
- at the end of your "Items" section, you could include some possibly finished builds that demonstrate what to get in certain situations (like in my Ashe and Vayne guides); again, not necessary, but would be nice for quick reference
- a jungle section, for Jungle Shen. It's not a common occurrence, but sometimes Shen is more useful in the jungle instead of solo top, or filling the "support" role bottom lane with an AD carry
- always use as much BBCode/wiki code as possible, so "And don't forget to use Feint in battle. Since it's the shield doesn't absorb as much as AP Shen" should include Feint and Shen ^^
- you could put the credits in list format, so they look a little nicer, and your summary looks a tad more structured

And here ^^

Hope you like it:



Omggggggg ... That sig is soo niceee :O Thanks a lot! You rule!

Hmmm about the few additions: I'll start working on them when I find some time to do it and test out the things you just pointed out like the walls!

Only thing: Jungle section, I don't know about that. I've already had someone who asked me that but I don't think I'm going to do it since I build mine tank/supportive and I've never jungled with Shen.

But I will keep working on it so ... Thanks a lot for everything!
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don't worry jhoi i fixed it :D, sorry for any stress
also, I didn't see the recommendation until now, musta taken a bit for the server to update
many thanks
edit: all better
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thanks so much for the feedback jhoijhoi, my images are centered now and im thinking of changing my guide format into colums


Mordekaiser the metallic nightmare RIFT, thank you JEFFY40HANDS for this awesome signature
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theBMB wrote:

@siveo can you delete your post so people don't see my original quote?


That will cost you something! Boehoehoe, now I will have -1 post ... How sad.

No worries, deleted it.
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Yo Jhoi, it's been sometime since I've last asked you to check out my guide, but I need a second opinion again for all the new work that's been done to it. I don't care how long it takes and, if possible, I ask that you check it out again and tell me what you think. Thanks!
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hey jhoi, did you get my review request? just wondering :P
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^translation: hey jhoi, did you get my review request? just wondering :P

answer: give it time, she's busy

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