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I like that you cover your Keystone & Rune choices briefly in your notes, however I feel like for the enchanter build, The “ Aftershock - Inspiration” page is relatively shorter than the others when it comes to the explanation, I bet you can fit in some more into that one.

You cover what each rune can do for Lux which is really good since it explains to readers what they want to know and why they pick that specific rune / keystone. However, when should these pages be picked? If the “ Aftershock - Domination” page gives Lux extraordinary roaming power and lets her reposition (offensive / semi defensive), while “ Aftershock - Inspiration” is a good page for being able to shield your team a lot (utility based). When will the Guardian page come into the mix? You do a good job at explaining the fact that you have to switch Bone Plating for Conditioning for better survivability. However, you specifically say that Guardian is the “Secondary option to Aftershock” and that “you’ll lose out on a lot of stats in comparison to Aftershock”, if this is now the case, it sounds as if this is a really bad page to pick, unless there’s another use for it?

The same example can actually apply to both of the Mage rune pages as well, when will I specifically need to pick which page? When will the “ Arcane Comet - Inspiration” page be the most useful for me and when should I opt for another page, such as “ Arcane Comet - Precision” ? Right now you’re just covering what each rune specifically can do for you, which is good, but I believe you can fit in some more.

I like the descriptions for the Summoner spells on both builds, solid and really good. Are you sure there aren’t any other options for the sorcery build or is Barrier the absolute only one that you can pick? When I scroll down further into your guide, I can see that you’ve mentioned both Heal and Teleport in your summoner section, however those aren’t explained at all in the cheatsheet of the guide. Only Flash / Ignite / Exhaust & Barrier is, do you get what I mean?

I see no example build where Void Staff comes into place, considering you have it as a “5th/last item” option, there should be a build where it can become valid. This becomes even more important since you have a build using Morellonomicon, yet that’s only a situational item, if Void isn’t a 5th/last item then it should be moved to the situational items as well or otherwise it should be shown in a build.

I also personally dislike that you said “if you’re looking for more information about what each item does then head over to the Situational/defensive items” in your situational item notes. Most people that use the cheat sheet are using it to gather very specific and fast information, most people aren’t going to have any time to go through an entire guide (especially if it’s long) to try and find what they need before a game starts, even more so if they are in a rush. I’d recommend to either explain each item briefly, or quickly cover what each item does (for example Morellonomicon = Anti-healing, Zhonya’s Hourglass = Defensive Utility and then also for the other items).

Other than that I do really like the structure of the items, they are solid, with much more in-depth descriptions of why you pick the items that you pick (in comparison to the others), and therefore good job!

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I don’t know how many times I’m going to have to say this, but yeah your aesthetics is just gorgeous. Every piece of visual is neatly made and completely unique from everything else. The amount of times I’m going to have to say that @chromuro is a coding genius is just the start, because the formatting on this guide is probably 10x better than anything I could come up with on my own, great job. You’ve also done a great job of making a nice visually pleasing guide with such a complex skin like Elementalist Lux (because there are so many different forms to pick from), but you’ve done that part so incredibly well that I’m a bit speechless to say the least.

I don’t really have much else to say when it comes to improving the guide presentation wise as the coding & visuals are already great.

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Pros / Cons

I would argue when it comes to saying that you can both “max Lucent Singularity for offensive uses and Prismatic Barrier for defensive uses”. Although I personally think that maxing her Prismatic Barrier might become more needed as a support since utility is one of the things that supports are great with doing and since Lux is so squishy, her having a strong shield is really good at compensating for that.

Unless you’re going midlane, It’d probably be a wise decision to maybe remove some text (or add more) where you explain about this, having another section dedicated more to her abilities (or talking about the abilities more in-depth in their relevant section) is going to be much better than to just briefly covering it here. I don’t think many people will be maxing her Lucent Singularity unless for 3 reasons.

1. They are the only person that can actually deal damage on their team (only one that’s fed)
2. Your adc isn’t really strong & your team is struggling on damage (or in other ways being in a disadvantage in comparison to the other team)
3. Being greedy to pick up kills that you as a support don’t need.

I feel like when you talk about the downsides of her, it’s way better explained then the “good things” about her as you’re only making a bigger sentence out of something that can be explained in few words (she can be built in many different fashions.), try to be concise and don’t explain information that’ll most likely be explained in other places throughout the guide anyways, try and find other useful information that could go in there (like you did with the Cons).


Runes

I wonder, is Aftershock really as viable to Lux anymore? With the recent nerfs/changes to it I would feel like Arcane Comet is going to be a much stronger choice, unless you’d want to argue if Summon Aery is a good option, who knows.

When it comes to your Aftershock & Biscuit Delivery sections of the runes, at the end it’s quite uneven with the sentences where “bad trades.” (end of biscuit delivery) is on its own while on the other side, there are nothing to compensate for that, which makes it look really odd. For an example, your Shield Bash & Cosmic Insight descriptions shows it better, having them equally as long will make the visual appearance much better in my opinion, and the same thing will apply to all others as well.

In the Shield Bash description, you say that “you'll take minimum damage while dishing out a reasonably strong amount of damage in combination with the rune Cheap Shot.” If I were to pick aftershock with the other domination runes, Taste of Blood / Relentless Hunter and skip that one (or even better, pick Inspiration secondary), would this rune become even more worthless to me since I’m not using Cheap? If so, what other rune is a good pick here instead of that when those cases apply, is there even another rune to pick?

Relentless Hunter description, “ganks and protect her teammates easier” should be “ganks and protecting her teammates easier”, makes more sense.

Again, with Revitalize you’re saying that Aftershock is Lux’s primary keystone, but I’m questioning that again because of the recent nerfs to it, is it really a stronger keystone than others? Could you fit in another description there instead that’d be more useful then saying that it’s the only keystone, if so, what’ll it be?

Some other things I noticed about the text in the runes section, Bone Plating description and Taste of Blood descriptions are uneven, Transcendence & Presence of Mind are as well (and Aftershock/biscuit), breaks my ocd a little bit but the rest are all fine though.

Spelling error in Arcane Comet description, “she can poke safetly while being” should be “she can poke safely while being”. Another one in Biscuit Delivery numero dos description, “will fix Lux's mana issues allowing her to consistently harass as much as humanely possible” should be “will fix Lux’s mana issues allowing her to consistently harass as much as humanly possible”. Saying the word “humanely” is both weird and doesn’t make any sense. Another one in the same description “Our primary goal is harass the enemy laners” should be “Our primary goal is harassing the enemy laners”.

Now you’re doing the same thing with the Transcendence rune, mentioning all of the different builds that you can take on her, which isn’t going to be very useful for the reader (especially if they know it twice, both at the start and here). Maybe try and find something else that this rune is good at giving without mentioning that (or numbers, no need for those either). If Absolute Focus is an unreliable rune, then why are we using it. If it’s an “okay” option but we shouldn’t use it since it’s not reliable, then you should remove the rune, there’s no real reason to talk about it unless it’s necessary for Lux’s gameplay and can be useful in other situations where Transcendence won’t cut it.

You did the same thing with Presence of Mind saying that it’s an “Unreliable rune to pick”, again, if it’s not useful then we shouldn’t use it, mention it or talk about it. You do kinda save it though by saying “unless you’re not fighting a lot to make it worthwhile” in which case I’d say that won’t happen unless you’re in a team that’ll be fighting every single time. I’d recommend removing the “unreliable” part, keeping the rest & trying to figure out another way of saying that this rune is good on Lux or otherwise just remove it.

Again, if Arcane Comet is such a good keystone to pick and synergizes with Lux so much, why is Aftershock our primary keystone and why are we picking it then, is it still even good?

Overall, the other rune descriptions are really good and explains the purpose of picking the rune in the first place, good job! :)


Summoner Spells

In the Barrier description, “ Barrier is a stable for Lux outside of the”, replace it with “ Barrier is a stable pick for Lux outside of the” as the sentence makes 0 sense when you’re trying to read it otherwise.

Not to be such a nitpick but again with the uneven descriptions, my ocd. ;-; Also the Ignite description, “ally due to the greavious wounds.” should be the word grievous instead.

When it comes to the Heal description, I’m really unsure when I will ever and I really mean ever use this spell or even consider to pick it. Usually for supports, they pick heal as they are able to make sure that the adc will not be able to die if played correctly, like for example Soraka, Sona or Yuumi. With Lux, that opportunity is more limited as she doesn’t have any healing whatsoever built into her kit like the others do. The only times when an adc is not going to pick Heal by default is if they’re really cocky thinking they can win without sustain, knowing that they will definitely need another spell for their matchup or if they are smurfs that knows matchups inside out and chances of that in all the games that gets played is very limited to say the least. Also, “Keep in mind that Ignite will lower its effectiveness.” not “it’s”.

Teleport, “most situational and unlikely to pick ever”, that kinda should ring a bell to you on its own right? I can say with certainty that no support ever goes TP, not at any moment. You mention that “you can use it to teleport top and get a cheesy kill to get your laner ahead” which on its own isn’t worth taking up another spell slot for that, you get roughly 100-200 gold for a kill early on, big waste. It’s debatable whether or not you’re actually going to need to teleport back to botlane to “not miss too much” since you’re again, the support, not the adc, if by any chance the ad carry would need a TP spell much more than what you will.

If I were to go by my own opinion, I’d say either come up with some description that will make Heal / Teleport actual good spells to pick and is better than the others ( Exhaust / Barrier / Ignite) or just remove both of them from the section altogether.


Abilities

Spelling mistake in the passive description, “Taking Aftershock will (not while) allow you to minimize the amount”.

You also mentioned not running in just to proc passive twice, one time in “things to note” and another time at the descriptions before that. I’d recommend to remove that description in the original one and replace it with another thing this passive is good for, and then keeping the “things to note” one as it is. Also, you don’t really have to explain about her combos when it comes to the passive (even less if you’re planning to make a combo section later on, that will already be explained there won’t it?).

In your Q description, Light Binding, you don’t say “enemys”, it’s actually “enemies” so either make it “enemy(ies)” or find another way to name both parts.

W description, “it is able to apply it's effects up” should be “it is able to apply its effects up” instead.

Another thing to note about Prismatic Barrier is that failing to properly aim the ability (in other terms completely missing your allies) can also result in you making them die for no reason. Since the ability is sort of a skillshot on its own, both on the way forward and on the way back, it’s important to use it wisely and effectively to shield as many allies as possible while also making sure that it gives a shield both forwards & backwards to maximize shields.

In the first paragraph of your E ( Lucent Singularity) section, you did some mess up of the coding, there’s an extra ] at the end of the Arcane Comet code. Another grammar mistake in the second paragraph afterwards: “as it slows during and after its been activated.” Although Lux’s vision is a bit more limited now because of the bugfix she got, I’d recommend to mention that you can throw it to gain vision near brushes, but it’ll not show enemies inside of said brushes unless the E is close/inside of the brush.

Another grammar mistake in the same E section, in Useful Tips, “will slow all targets within its radius”.

I can argue that the risk of stealing farm is actually relatively low if you’re casting the ability near minions that aren’t on low health (aka very healthy / full on health). You’ll mostly be trying to either specifically harass the enemy laners and not hit the minions or to hit the minions but make sure that they don’t die so that your ADC can pick up the gold.

Grammar mistake in the ultimate section: “Final Spark has an extremely low cool-down especially after getting”, unsure if you either missed bbcoding that Final Spark, or just didn’t want to have an extra one in there.

Another thing to note about Lux’s Ultimate is that it can be used in many other ways then just to secure kills. If your team is grouping up for an objective, but the enemy comes and fights, you can still use your ultimate to potentially steal the objective (whatever it now is). The other option is that during the late game, you can actually just ult the waves if you feel like stuff is going to happen, because it’s on such a low cooldown later on in the game, it makes sense to do this. The only exception is when you really have to save it, for example when grouping up with your team and/or trying to get an objective or siege a turret.


Skill Sequence

Your skilling sequence does not match the one you have at the top of the guide. The first few levels (levels 1-5 are incorrect). Cheat sheet shows it as Q > W > E > W > W while you show in your skilling sequence that it’s Q > W > W > E > W, I’d recommend to fix that part up. Maybe even fixing up the side levels showing the levels of when you’ll skill each ability (example: 6/11/16 so that you get what I mean), as I bet those might also be wrong if this is.

Again, is Aftershock really the go-to choice for Lux anymore? Also, why do you explain that the E max path is usually the go-to choice in the section where you mostly should talk about the W max (the only one you showed in your cheat sheet), right?

Grammar mistake in the full utility section: “during the laning phase you'll take little damage” should be “during the laning phase as you’ll take little damage”, otherwise it gives a bad flow when you read it and it wouldn’t make sense. Again in the same description, “at level four as its mana cost is extremely high”.

Good thing to know when to use “its” and “it’s”: If you can put in “It is” in the sentence, then you can make it as “it’s”, if you cannot do that and it’d be weird if you did, then it’ll mostly be “its” instead. As with “you’re” and “your”, “you’re” is basically if you can put “You are” instead in a sentence, if that doesn’t work then it’s most likely “your” instead. Just a tip. ^^

You messed up the coding in the Poke description for E max, “E - Lucent Singularity]]”. Another grammar mistake, same description: “waiting to put any points until it's been decided if your being” should be “waiting to put any points until its been decided if you’re being invaded” instead.


Items

Grammar mistake: “two Health Potions and a Warding Totem.” and another one in the next description “best against hyper-aggressive bot lanes such as” and again in the first description of the core items “you should focus on building them every game” and another time in the Mikael’s Crucible description “it'll still give you 20 AP due to its passive.”

I’ve noticed that some of your items are explained in the guide, but doesn’t exist in the cheatsheet, did you accidentally miss them or is there another reason not to explain it? If so, why are you explaining them if they aren’t the go-to choices to get anyways. These were:

• Ninja Tabi
• Mercury's Treads

If these boots are important, they should really be put into the cheat sheet as well.

Other items that I also noticed were in the cheat sheet but wasn’t explained in the guide are:

• Frozen Heart
• Everfrost

These items must be important for Lux since you’re explaining those in your cheat sheet but not the boots, why are they important? If they aren’t important then they shouldn’t be mentioned at all, not in the guide or cheat sheet.


Gameplay

I can argue from my opinion that being able to execute proper wave manipulation is one of the hardest things to do in league, even though it sounds as if it’s extremely easy, while in reality it’s much harder.

You do a great job at explaining what a Freeze, Slow push & fast push is as well as when to use them. However, you do not explain how to actually make a “freeze” / “slow push” or “fast push”, only what they are and when to use them. The freeze one in particular is the one that really needs to get explained as it’s the only wave management tactic that’s the hardest to execute properly.

I also think it’d make much more sense if you were to color the bbcoding to the same color as the ones you use for each section. For example in your section about Roaming, you use a nice purple theme (‘cause of the purple lux form). The next is already at a nice purple color, however, the coding of for example Dragon is blue, and would look way better if it had a color as well.

You can also only buy 2 Control Wards at once, so saying “always buy them if you have less than two” is quite debatable. Of course, warding is always important and should always be considered, but I feel like that sentence could be phrased much more differently to make more sense. (If you do rephrase it, make sure to make the descriptions even, again my ocd otherwise).

Another grammar mistake “Oracle Lens is a trinket item you”

I would also think it’d be recommended to talk a bit about the different dragon souls are and what they can do, for example you do mention that “Infernal, Mountain & Ocean souls are the best for Lux”, why? How come those are specifically the best ones, what kind of reasons makes those the best.

I also think it’s quite bold to assume that you shouldn’t care about the other soul (Cloud), this is mainly since souls are randomized for each game, which means that you’re never guaranteed to get Ocean, Mountain or Infernal all the time, and at times you’re going to be forced to make use of the other soul as well, doesn’t matter if you like it or not. What I would recommend to do here is to explain how you can make use of the souls (including the Cloud one) even if it’s much worse in comparison to the rest.

Other than that, I really like how the gameplay section looks, both visually, coding wise & content, well done!

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This guide is really amazing Sleepin, and deserves a lot more attention than what it has currently, in my opinion. If you could only improve on some of the stuff that I have mentioned with this review, you’re guide is going to be able to go really far as this is just the start for your guide. The Light is only at the start of its journey, but soon enough it’ll become really bright. (haha see what I did there, I’m so funny).

I'm sure that there may be other things that you can look to improve with your guide, but where you stand as of right now, this is both impressive and solid. I'm going to let you digest my input, and maybe make some changes. If you want me to revisit your guide at some later point in time, then it'd be my pleasure. Just reply if you feel like it or you can either post on the
Guide Review Application Thread or My Review Service.