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Creator: theBMB August 19, 2011 12:43pm
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I don't think you guys are approaching this the right way, you don't really have to read through every single word, it's more of a reference guide once it starts dealing with individual items. As in, look up a specific item to see how to use it, there isn't really any other way to comprehensively cover every single item.
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Searz wrote:

Nooouuuu, only rec if it's top notch.


I'll improve it as much as I have to to get it to that standard of quality
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BMB: Don't listen to Searz ^^ Wrath and I rec guides that deserve it, and your guide looks great at the moment without having looked fully into it.

However, I think it'd be PERFECT with some more formatting, and I'll bring my guide about making a guide up to date with the "float" code which yields beautiful results.
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This is what I have so far:

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Long sword is tier 1. B.F. Sword is tier 3.

Use icons to break up text.

Make all gold costs in paragraphs a different colour. Red, green, blue, whatever.

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All tier 1 items in this list can be bought at the beginning of the game and they leave a varying amount of gold left over for potions (generally 1-3) and wards (generally one).

You have Chain Vest, Pickaxe etc in this list, so they all can't be bought at the beginning of the game.

You should try to use columns. Four columns would cut the Tier One section in half.

Will update my guide about making a guide really soon, so try out the "float" code for the items you've been descriptive about.

Center all videos.

Make sure you have a space after all punctuation. ie: When to use it: This is etc....

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Youmuu's Ghostblade more characters benefit from building brutalizer first.

The Brutalizer.

Like Boots, I think GP5 should have it's own section at the top.

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Mana Manipulator: Keep in mind that you can start with this item, which I definitely recommend doing if the situation calls for it.

Definitely not. I'd reword this. You don't want your support starting with items over Faerie Charm + Wards + Pots, or a straight up Doran's.

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Who to use it with:Kog,Maw, Teemo, Kayle
Extra Notes:

Empty tag.

I'd never buy Thornmail on Singed.

As with Black Cleaver, with Void Staff, list the alternative, Abyssal.

Zhonya's: The Banshee's Veil for casters against AD.

List the faults with Banshee's. You won't be blinded by Noc's ult, but he can still leap to you etc.

Morello's has "Extra Notes" that has no extra notes.

Rod of Ages should be rushed, if you're buying it.

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Shurelya's Reverie
When to use it: Useful on tanky supports who have already built a Philosopher's Stone
Who to use it with: Blitzcrank, Taric, Alistar.
Extra Notes: I don't often see this item as core, it's usually built as a "might as well since I have a Pstone," but the utility it provides is nice, especially when chasing.

What? This item is CORE on most/all supports.
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theBMB wrote:



I'll improve it as much as I have to to get it to that standard of quality

Guud, guud.

jhoijhoi wrote:

Don't listen to Searz

Wai nooowt? D:
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Ah sorry Jhoi, I guess i didn't make it clear enough, All tier 1 items by the way I defined it can be bought at the beginning of the game.
Long Sword is a tier 1 item
Pickaxe is a tier 2 item
B. F. Sword is a tier 3 item
Chain Vest is a tier 2 item, it can't be bought at the beginning of the game.
The general item tiers are basic, advanced, legendary, but within basic items, i describe them with 3 tiers.

Also, as for Rod of ages, it isn't absolutely necessary to rush it, the base stats are very good, and since it only offers stats (its passive just provides more stats) you can build it a little later (obviously not last, but it doesn't have to be first)
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Not to be a party pooper, but how is this not advertising?
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PsiGuard wrote:

Not to be a party pooper, but how is this not advertising?


because i'm explicitly asking for feedback only. i also don't post a link in the thread itself
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Isn't pointing to the link in your sig the same thing? lolol. It really is, brah.

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